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Seraphym
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Checkin' in at the Marriott...
check.......
I bet ur gonna make some gay angel reference to my Seraphym name/
Let me save u the trouble cuz whatever u say it'll be remembered as lame/
MarV's confused, fuckin' up ur optical vision. He couldn't figure me out like a problem in physics/
Slam his face on a stove when its hot in the kitchen. Grab the knife to cut ur dick off faster than u'll have an option to miss it/
My flow's highly exquisite, know to put rhymes into digits. Turn MarV inside-out like he displayed at the BodiesExhibit/
Like 'Rover' I'mma run thru 'MaRs', rip his Vagina cuz my Junk's too large/
Hell I shoulda killed him with 1, 2 bars, but I wanna watch him suffer like drug addicts or bums who starve/
Not 'Budden', but I'm bringin' the 'slaughterhouse', turn this cattle to meat and eat the beef right now/
Like volcanoes lettin' the heat ride down. Seraph's the King, sendin' my legion straight thru Queens just to bust ya street lights out!/
what more can i say.....but this coward jus suck.
the last time i seen his text style the twin towers was up.
that like 01...he's soft so why i would let bullets press in spine.
everytime i see this kid...sera's runnin like its election time.
ppl laugh at him cuz he aint gota cellphone..please get off my dick.
cuz a special teams play was the only time u were ON-SIDEKICKS.
i aint da only one,nobody dont feels nothin this queer write.
can dis kid here fight?,no i had this lil bambi nigga runnin 4 dear life.
im fuckn his wifey all the time..so MARV'S most likely on his mind.
fuck a background-check.....i'll stomp him out put my nikes on his spine.
what more can i say.....but this coward jus suck.
the last time i seen his text style the twin towers was up.
that like 01...he's soft so why i would let bullets press in spine.
everytime i see this kid...sera's runnin like its election time.
vs
MarV's confused, fuckin' up ur optical vision. He couldn't figure me out like a problem in physics/ Slam his face on a stove when its hot in the kitchen. Grab the knife to cut ur dick off faster than u'll have an option to miss it/
My flow's highly exquisite, know to put rhymes into digits.
Turn MarV inside-out like he displayed at the BodiesExhibit/
nice multis sera but marv had the better punches and w/p
v/marv
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Heights by great men reached and kept were not obtained by sudden flight but, while their companions slept, they were toiling upward in the night.
-Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
well...seraphym, yo definitely have a unique style, i cant say ive seen people write like that in a while. Your bars are slightly stretched, so i'd say try to shorten them. to me...this is a full bar, and i was a little confused at first. ex:
My flow's highly exquisite, know to put rhymes into digits. Turn MarV inside-out like he displayed at the BodiesExhibit/
I thought this was one bar, but to me it seemed like you wanted to count this as one line. I thought your multies were dope, but you didn't have much for punches. You oughtta try shortening up your shit and being more direct. I was a lil lost in your style but that line i pasted was prolly your best shot. No hate, just keep doing ya thang.
Marv..well your punches were alright. I thought you had a few nice lines, and i like your refence to 01 style. that was an alright line. Your strong points were being direct and you had a few nice concept shots.. Nothing too personal though.
Overall..this was a pretty one sided battle and i thought Marv took it with heavier shots.
No hate..props to both on their shits.
V//Marv.
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what more can i say.....but this coward jus suck.
the last time i seen his text style the twin towers was up.
that like 01...he's soft so why i would let bullets press in spine.
everytime i see this kid...sera's runnin like its election time.
vs
My flow's highly exquisite, know to put rhymes into digits.
Turn MarV inside-out like he displayed at the BodiesExhibit/
Close battle, but Sera stretched out some punches which hurt you in this batttle. Marv had the harder punches, but wasnt that consistant. Overall, Marv takes this one with
a slightly cleaner drop
v/ marv
No doubt. I really appreciate th feedback and the pointers. Up...
Heights by great men reached and kept were not obtained by sudden flight but, while their companions slept, they were toiling upward in the night.
-Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
wtf....vote motherfuckers
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