See Sic (0-0) vs. ...Eclipse... (0-0)

**Monkey D. Smoka**

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Exculptifactoriusness · 10:04 AM

Yeah 10.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?p=1959729
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?p=1966985
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...86#post1970286

Knight Mayor · 08:07 AM

Check, 10 is cool by the way

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...70#post1960070
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...73#post1963573

Exculptifactoriusness

Please show...

Man just list Rb's best members, then just take you pick
Feeble, SMoka, Me and many others, but I Dont See Sic..
I mean, I got a simple question for you and believe its baffling
Your graphics are ill, so why kill your rep by battling..?
I am rockin a sig you made, but kid text and you aren't dope
& Its like ABC's forgettin shows the way your losing both Faith and Hope..
LLL Jr, must be a stepping stone, cuz major elevation you need
But I must predict you'll go undefeated..In the graphics Battling League..
I just don't understand your condition, but still I'll end you quick
I Mean, I make you swim in your own wackness and you'll become See Sic..

Knight Mayor

Your writtens conjure lies so you better slit your arm with knives.
I'll beat you to a bloody pulp like citrus homocide.
Got you frowning like disappointed cowboys with this sad-L.
I'll fight like spanish wars and end-E-in battle.
I'm attackin with massive tracks to slash your navel.
This match is the closest you'll ever come to havin' a label.
You're not shit yet like farts in stretchy diapers.
Nobody reads your verses, weblinks slept on more than narcoleptic spiders.
Accurate lines? You'll witness the opposite as you read his raps.
E couldn't address big words if he speaked in caps.

Well im late still want to drop this shit anyways.

.......The ?.......

vote eclipse, even tho the last four line of ya shit was whack you pulled out the win, other ya line were stretched and i think the structure got fucked up sumwhere cuz when i was reading it didn't come out right anyway

vote eclipse

Bullet Point

eclipse:

Man just list Rb's best members, then just take you pick
Feeble, SMoka, Me and many others, but I Dont See Sic..
I mean, I got a simple question for you and believe its baffling
Your graphics are ill, so why kill your rep by battling..?

vs.

See Sic:

Nothing

e's verse was decent.

1st 2 bars were pretty nice, the rest wasn't great.

sic didn't really bring much to this battle.

v/ eclipse

Facts Machine

Man just list Rb's best members, then just take you pick
Feeble, SMoka, Me and many others, but I Dont See Sic..
nice wordplay but weak punch
I mean, I got a simple question for you and believe its baffling
Your graphics are ill, so why kill your rep by battling..?
good punch it connected
I am rockin a sig you made, but kid text and you aren't dope
& Its like ABC's forgettin shows the way your losing both Faith and Hope..
wasnt feelin it much
LLL Jr, must be a stepping stone, cuz major elevation you need
But I must predict you'll go undefeated..In the graphics Battling League..
could have been wittier and not that good of a punch
I just don't understand your condition, but still I'll end you quick
I Mean, I make you swim in your own wackness and you'll become See Sic..
decent closer

overall your verse is inbetween weak and decent.

Your writtens conjure lies so you better slit your arm with knives.
I'll beat you to a bloody pulp like citrus homocide.
decent closer nice wording
Got you frowning like disappointed cowboys with this sad-L.
I'll fight like spanish wars and end-E-in battle.
not feelin it much
I'm attackin with massive tracks to slash your navel.
This match is the closest you'll ever come to havin' a label.
decent and nice multis
You're not shit yet like farts in stretchy diapers.
Nobody reads your verses, weblinks slept on more than narcoleptic spiders.
good punch
Accurate lines? You'll witness the opposite as you read his raps.
E couldn't address big words if he speaked in caps.
decent closer

overall for see sic, he had a verse inbetween decent and good.

so see sic gets my vote cuz he came slightly harder. good battle and goodluck on the votes ya'll.
vote/see sic

Lay Doubt.

*edit*

Exculptifactoriusness

Why the edit, fag?

Vote.

Genocide.

Quote:

Originally Posted by ...Eclipse...

Man just list Rb's best members, then just take you pick
Feeble, SMoka, Me and many others, but I Dont See Sic..
I mean, I got a simple question for you and believe its baffling
Your graphics are ill, so why kill your rep by battling..?

vs.

Quote:

Originally Posted by See Sic

Got you frowning like disappointed cowboys with this sad-L.
I'll fight like spanish wars and end-E-in battle.

eh. i have to go with ...Eclipse... on this one. his verse was a lot more personal and hard hitting.

V/ ...Eclipse...

SirusX

both verses started off solid, and both trailed off...

geno quoted the best lines in the battle.

v- Eclips.... reason... e droped alot more of a personal attack, more lively bars

Amp

Both verses were pretty good, but like a few other battles here there were only a few stand out bars. There was one line that Eclipse had that just made me think "That's the battle." Because there wasn't much consistant spectacular effort put forth in the rest of either verses.

I mean, I got a simple question for you and believe its baffling
Your graphics are ill, so why kill your rep by battling..?

Vote:...Eclipse...

Mr. Key

Man just list Rb's best members, then just take you pick
Feeble, SMoka, Me and many others, but I Dont See Sic..
I mean, I got a simple question for you and believe its baffling
Your graphics are ill, so why kill your rep by battling..?
LLL Jr, must be a stepping stone, cuz major elevation you need
But I must predict you'll go undefeated..In the graphics Battling League..

vs

Your writtens conjure lies so you better slit your arm with knives.
I'll beat you to a bloody pulp like citrus homocide.
You're not shit yet like farts in stretchy diapers.
Nobody reads your verses, weblinks slept on more than narcoleptic spiders

eclipse wins wit more quotables and a more witty humorous verse

Exculptifactoriusness

Thanks for all votes...

I think its 6-1.

January 3rd, 2005	#1
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January 3rd, 2005	#2
Exculptifactoriusness Lets Go GIANTS!! Join Date: May 2004 Age: 22 Posts: 2,786 Battle Record: 77-6	Yeah 10. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?p=1959729 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?p=1966985 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...86#post1970286 Last edited by Exculptifactoriusness; January 9th, 2005 at 10:04 AM.
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January 3rd, 2005	#3
Knight Mayor Call It Karma. Join Date: Jun 2003 Age: 20 Posts: 4,831 Battle Record: 5-1	Check, 10 is cool by the way http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...70#post1960070 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...73#post1963573 __________________ Last edited by Knight Mayor; January 6th, 2005 at 08:07 AM.
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January 7th, 2005	#4
Exculptifactoriusness Lets Go GIANTS!! Join Date: May 2004 Age: 22 Posts: 2,786 Battle Record: 77-6	Please show... Man just list Rb's best members, then just take you pick Feeble, SMoka, Me and many others, but I Dont See Sic.. I mean, I got a simple question for you and believe its baffling Your graphics are ill, so why kill your rep by battling..? I am rockin a sig you made, but kid text and you aren't dope & Its like ABC's forgettin shows the way your losing both Faith and Hope.. LLL Jr, must be a stepping stone, cuz major elevation you need But I must predict you'll go undefeated..In the graphics Battling League.. I just don't understand your condition, but still I'll end you quick I Mean, I make you swim in your own wackness and you'll become See Sic..
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January 7th, 2005	#5
Knight Mayor Call It Karma. Join Date: Jun 2003 Age: 20 Posts: 4,831 Battle Record: 5-1	Your writtens conjure lies so you better slit your arm with knives. I'll beat you to a bloody pulp like citrus homocide. Got you frowning like disappointed cowboys with this sad-L. I'll fight like spanish wars and end-E-in battle. I'm attackin with massive tracks to slash your navel. This match is the closest you'll ever come to havin' a label. You're not shit yet like farts in stretchy diapers. Nobody reads your verses, weblinks slept on more than narcoleptic spiders. Accurate lines? You'll witness the opposite as you read his raps. E couldn't address big words if he speaked in caps. Well im late still want to drop this shit anyways. __________________
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January 7th, 2005	#6
.......The ?....... Criminal Upper!!!! Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Nyc Age: 23 Posts: 16,125	vote eclipse, even tho the last four line of ya shit was whack you pulled out the win, other ya line were stretched and i think the structure got fucked up sumwhere cuz when i was reading it didn't come out right anyway vote eclipse __________________
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January 8th, 2005	#7
Bullet Point Light Weight Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: England, UK Age: 20 Posts: 342	eclipse: Man just list Rb's best members, then just take you pick Feeble, SMoka, Me and many others, but I Dont See Sic.. I mean, I got a simple question for you and believe its baffling Your graphics are ill, so why kill your rep by battling..? vs. See Sic: Nothing e's verse was decent. 1st 2 bars were pretty nice, the rest wasn't great. sic didn't really bring much to this battle. v/ eclipse
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January 8th, 2005	#8
Facts Machine is in the house Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Manhattan, NY Posts: 6,088 Battle Record: 34-12	Man just list Rb's best members, then just take you pick Feeble, SMoka, Me and many others, but I Dont See Sic.. nice wordplay but weak punch I mean, I got a simple question for you and believe its baffling Your graphics are ill, so why kill your rep by battling..? good punch it connected I am rockin a sig you made, but kid text and you aren't dope & Its like ABC's forgettin shows the way your losing both Faith and Hope.. wasnt feelin it much LLL Jr, must be a stepping stone, cuz major elevation you need But I must predict you'll go undefeated..In the graphics Battling League.. could have been wittier and not that good of a punch I just don't understand your condition, but still I'll end you quick I Mean, I make you swim in your own wackness and you'll become See Sic.. decent closer overall your verse is inbetween weak and decent. Your writtens conjure lies so you better slit your arm with knives. I'll beat you to a bloody pulp like citrus homocide. decent closer nice wording Got you frowning like disappointed cowboys with this sad-L. I'll fight like spanish wars and end-E-in battle. not feelin it much I'm attackin with massive tracks to slash your navel. This match is the closest you'll ever come to havin' a label. decent and nice multis You're not shit yet like farts in stretchy diapers. Nobody reads your verses, weblinks slept on more than narcoleptic spiders. good punch Accurate lines? You'll witness the opposite as you read his raps. E couldn't address big words if he speaked in caps. decent closer overall for see sic, he had a verse inbetween decent and good. so see sic gets my vote cuz he came slightly harder. good battle and goodluck on the votes ya'll. vote/see sic
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January 8th, 2005	#12
SirusX Banned Join Date: Nov 2004 Age: 24 Posts: 1,762	both verses started off solid, and both trailed off... geno quoted the best lines in the battle. v- Eclips.... reason... e droped alot more of a personal attack, more lively bars
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January 8th, 2005	#13
Amp Em.Oh.Bee Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Milwaukee Posts: 1,245 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournaments Won: 0	Both verses were pretty good, but like a few other battles here there were only a few stand out bars. There was one line that Eclipse had that just made me think "That's the battle." Because there wasn't much consistant spectacular effort put forth in the rest of either verses. I mean, I got a simple question for you and believe its baffling Your graphics are ill, so why kill your rep by battling..? Vote:...Eclipse... __________________ Musicians, Operating Business.
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January 8th, 2005	#14
Mr. Key Is chilly chill Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: From NY, to VA, to ATL Age: 23 Posts: 7,350 Battle Record: 22-6 Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Man just list Rb's best members, then just take you pick Feeble, SMoka, Me and many others, but I Dont See Sic.. I mean, I got a simple question for you and believe its baffling Your graphics are ill, so why kill your rep by battling..? LLL Jr, must be a stepping stone, cuz major elevation you need But I must predict you'll go undefeated..In the graphics Battling League.. vs Your writtens conjure lies so you better slit your arm with knives. I'll beat you to a bloody pulp like citrus homocide. You're not shit yet like farts in stretchy diapers. Nobody reads your verses, weblinks slept on more than narcoleptic spiders eclipse wins wit more quotables and a more witty humorous verse __________________ *Artificial* Intelligence
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January 9th, 2005	#15
Exculptifactoriusness Lets Go GIANTS!! Join Date: May 2004 Age: 22 Posts: 2,786 Battle Record: 77-6	Thanks for all votes... I think its 6-1.
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