Search and Destroy

[Johnny 6-feet]

Based on the iggy pop track of the same name:


http://www.lyricsfreak.com/i/iggy+po..._20066999.html- lyrics

- video




Search and Destroy

I'm a street walking ceetah with a heart of napalm
Fiery eyes blazing, straining hard to remain clam
Heart's a runaway train, and it's come to play games
On cunts who stay lame, plus i puncture strange viens
I'm a runaway son of a nuclear a-bomb
Mushroom clouds, pushing proud, dusty visuals, they harm
The aftermath of the blast is a town with a glaze on
I wouldn't know a cotton picking fuck if i gave one

I'm the world's forgotten boy
the one who searches and destroys

Look out honey, cause i'm using technology
So rabid its no surprise that techs'll follow me
With no apologies; stealing all commodeties
Preaching a washed out, mantra-like philophesy
With soul radiation in the dead of the night
Spitting curses at the lurkers with no head for a fight
Get the mantis stance right, strike with incredible might
Bring tidal waves of fire, raising hell on the mic

And i'm the world's forgotten boy
The one who's searching, searching to destroy
And i'm the world's forgotten boy
The one who's searching, searching to destroy

Somebody gotta save my soul, pay the ferryman
I'm away with the fairies where pippin and merry hang
Headbanging on a stage with a lost and frenzied band
On alcoholic toxins that taste of cherry and...

I'm the world's forgotten boy
The one who's searching, searching to destroy
And i'm the world's forgotten boy
The one who's searching, searching to destroy



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[LedgenZ]

Dude your like a fucking ninja when it comes to writing. You creep up from nowhere, drop a gem then sneak out. This piece was short, but remarkable in it's content. Every line was maximized to it's fullest potential, you said exactly what you wanted/needed to say and nothing else. But what's most impressive is that you did it with the reader in mind, because your wordplay and metaphorical use was top notch and thoroughly entertaining. I enjoyed every second of this drop, my only qualm is that it wasn't longer.




Favorite Lines:

I'm a street walking ceetah with a heart of napalm
Fiery eyes blazing, straining hard to remain clam
Heart's a runaway train, and it's come to play games
On cunts who stay lame, plus i puncture strange viens
I'm a runaway son of a nuclear a-bomb
Mushroom clouds, pushing proud, dusty visuals, they harm
The aftermath of the blast is a town with a glaze on
I wouldn't know a cotton picking fuck if i gave one

^That entire verse was just whoa! Full throttled aggression with perfectly placed wording, creating a smack-in-the-mouth-a-kick-in-the-nuts-just-shut-the-fuck-up-and-listen type of effect! Dopeness to say the least!




Also:

Spitting curses at the lurkers with no head for a fight
Get the mantis stance right, strike with incredible might
Bring tidal waves of fire, raising hell on the mic

^Man, I wish this piece wasn't so short. I'd love to bask in it's temperament a bit longer. Anyway, the flow here was hot, so too was the language. Like I said earlier - nothing to qualm about!



All in all this was a great drop that deserves more than one reply. Hopefully, work like this will not go unnoticed. In the mean time, however, feel secure in the fact that what you've produced here has been entertaining to at least one member.

Stay up man!




pZ

[Johnny 6-feet]

kicking this up, quit sleeping.

[Facts Machine]

nice catchy shit, i liked the rhyme-scheme, my fav part was the whole second verse. This was hardcore yet poetic, which is always a dope mixture in my opinion. i wouldn't say this was all-around original, but it had creative lines thru-out.

[Tony B]

The aftermath of the blast is a town with a glaze on
I wouldn't know a cotton picking fuck if i gave one

almost thought there was some racism there but actually this was just a dope fucking line lol this piece remind me alot of that punchline-packed OM ledgendz wrote a while back. i wanted to do a collab like that with him but didn't know who else to include....think you'd fit right in. gotta agree w/ elemental, the 2nd verse was fuckin dope. the rhyme-scheme and flow was spot on, good word choice as well. i can't watch the video because i dont want to interrupt the movie we're all watching but i'm sure it'd only make the piece even better. really not much to say except i wish this was longer lol stay up.....

rtf??

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...rk-347250.html

[Johnny 6-feet]

Thank you kindly fella's. Uppin this one time. I'll rtf tomorrow. I'm busy as fuck.

[Soule]

Excluding the few mispelled words *use WORD bro lol* this was a nice read.

The wording *excluding errors* was nice. It carried in right in spots that could use the right. The Flow was fluent, nice rhymescheme. The imagery was cool. The emotion was cool. It was nice for such a small piece. And it could even end up being a fan favorite. I liked it alot. keep writing bro.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...wn-347436.html

[Ink.]

I like it. This was an extremely fluent write, I adored your word choice and the way you placed it... I just thought it was awesome. Although a short piece your imagery portrayed it as much more so I;m saying imagery was pretty good dude. I seriously want to collaberate with you sometime I LOVE your writtens. They flow well and overall shit perfection. Again great piece I liked it.