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see i already feel like your parents. "Riley your holdin me back!"
i've got this battle with cOin he feels owed to, like a dick in his ass
your a cartoon, your must be a flamer just like him
always gettin scratched out, like a life of abused vicadin
grow the fuck up and go kill yourself, suicides your only option
watchin the Boondocks, won't make you any darker. your white or have you
forgotten
like Dennis Rodman, your a mistake livin a life as a she-male
god let you live, now your drawn to the cross, i'll hammer the c-nail
females get the dick, and faggets like to lick it
riley likes to freemen from there pants, so they can cum when they visit
*c-nail=coffin nail
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i'm use to murdering lames.....and thats a pure fact son
this lame gonna need ER once i show him how i cap one
the flows insane, see you'll know its rain when it starts
noah will jump ship this time once my flows tear apart ARC
down you go, i'll slaughter every line - ya context is slayed
& compared to a video game designer, ya concepts are played
just quit cuz ya rhymes aint proving shit, you's a fake...RUN!
fuck a point...i'll put one thru ya neck before you can make one
hope you listen carefully, clean ya ears and catch the facts
so understand....i dont need q-tips when i'm battling whacks
capone:
see i already feel like your parents. "Riley your holdin me back!"
i've got this battle with cOin he feels owed to, like a dick in his ass
1.5/5 - weak opener.
your a cartoon, your must be a flamer just like him
always gettin scratched out, like a life of abused vicadin
1/5 - weak.
grow the fuck up and go kill yourself, suicides your only option
watchin the Boondocks, won't make you any darker. your white or have you
forgotten
1/5 - weak.
like Dennis Rodman, your a mistake livin a life as a she-male
god let you live, now your drawn to the cross, i'll hammer the c-nail
2/5 - decent.
females get the dick, and faggets like to lick it
riley likes to freemen from there pants, so they can cum when they visit
2.5/5 - decent attempt at name play.
8
you flowed well, you just need to take a bit more time to work on some of those lines so your whole verse has an impact, not just one or two lines.
RF:
i'm use to murdering lames.....and thats a pure fact son
this lame gonna need ER once i show him how i cap one
1/5 - weak opener.
the flows insane, see you'll know its rain when it starts
noah will jump ship this time once my flows tear apart ARC
1.5/5 - iight multis
down you go, i'll slaughter every line - ya context is slayed
& compared to a video game designer, ya concepts are played
1/5 - played.
just quit cuz ya rhymes aint proving shit, you's a fake...RUN!
fuck a point...i'll put one thru ya neck before you can make one
2/5 - decent.
hope you listen carefully, clean ya ears and catch the facts
so understand....i dont need q-tips when i'm battling whacks
2/5 - ok closer.
7.5
you had the better flow and structure in this battle. but your punchlines were just weak. if you had niice multi's like you had with some stronger punchlines you would of took this battle.
vote - capone, by .5
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"cuz they know I leave speakers abused I eat the EQs I eat through the beats whats the secret I think its the shoes" - Crooked I
Not much from both sides altho good to see ar capones attempting to punch. his 2nd bar couldve been better and the cum line well speaks for itself. Riley had tear apart arc but the wording killed it, and the line about game designers didnt connect imo. close battle could actually go either way but im gonna vote riley by a hair just because his misses were better
v riley
your a cartoon, your must be a flamer just like him
always gettin scratched out, like a life of abused vicadin
^ehh decent i guess
females get the dick, and faggets like to lick it
riley likes to freemen from there pants, so they can cum when they visit
^ok
vs
the flows insane, see you'll know its rain when it starts
noah will jump ship this time once my flows tear apart ARC
^mild nameplay
down you go, i'll slaughter every line - ya context is slayed
& compared to a video game designer, ya concepts are played
just quit cuz ya rhymes aint proving shit, you's a fake...RUN!
fuck a point...i'll put one thru ya neck before you can make one
^2 decent lines
v/: riley for being more consistent
females get the dick, and faggets like to lick it
riley likes to freemen from there pants, so they can cum when they visit
vs
the flows insane, see you'll know its rain when it starts
noah will jump ship this time once my flows tear apart ARC
the two best bars from each... i think Riley came with better punches and his attempts were a lot better.
V/ Riley Freeman
your a cartoon, your must be a flamer just like him
always gettin scratched out, like a life of abused vicadin
vs
the flows insane, see you'll know its rain when it starts
noah will jump ship this time once my flows tear apart ARC
just quit cuz ya rhymes aint proving shit, you's a fake...RUN!
fuck a point...i'll put one thru ya neck before you can make one
vote riley he came with better punches den capone on this one...capone u had some decent ideas but they jus didnt land hard enough
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