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Thread: RANDOM SHYT BOW DOWN TO A KING!!! (super flow)

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    Arrow RANDOM SHYT BOW DOWN TO A KING!!! (super flow)



    yall come n watch how i do my shyt...

    my mind is like tha bottem of tha sea in some abyss
    itz hella dark n its got monsterz that rele exists
    sometimes i just chill out n then i think n reminisce
    bout all tha shyt ive been thru n how it all consists
    to how im livin now changed my wayz but it still perstists
    i cant help it imma gangsta n thats how imma keep it on this
    dude i be rollin on em pillz drinkin jack n talkin to a miss
    im so stupid when i slang im breakin down tha work like im chris (brown)
    i kept a lil black book n my pocket with a fukin long list
    of all tha pplz i be supplyin, i got tha rok for tha assist
    they call me tha iron mayn, ive never ever fuked up my wrist
    n i got that zoo work so all tha animalz rightz pplz pissed
    they wanna fight me homie i gotta fukin dragon on my fist
    n ill hit ya so dam hard it'll make all ur insidez twist
    u lamez is rele gettin on my nervez dont think we can coexist
    so u guyz just keep on playin pussy til ya get an ovarion cyst

    if ya see me n my ride i might have a bow n arrow
    cuz im swaggin 16th century like i was jack sparrow
    i built my trap up brick by brick so im something like a pharaoh
    n its half underground so that all tha moles have to burrow
    i got landminez hidden deep in tha dirt so ur chances are narrow
    cuz if u get hit with one of these bombz itll fuk up ya marrow
    mayn i ride round in a pirate ship yep yep super old skewl camero
    n i toat weaponz some like tha joker yep yep with that super long barrel
    with em futuristic toyz ill make em fukin sing like it was in a christmas carol
    n just like a rele big storm on ur insurance list me as tha peril
    they say im fukin stranger than fiction like my name was Will Ferrell
    n that imma fukin dog with tha bitchez i keep a sex slave name Carol

    tha KING gotta infinite play list yeah something like nickz
    n im movin work from tha hood to tha country so im hangin with em hickz
    they call me harry potter at tha trap tha way i do em magic trickz
    n im whippin my new magic spell so i be stirin it with some sitckz
    once it starts lookin like its doe imma add tha hood cake mix
    n we gonna cook it up in tha oven cut it in to pieces n let em go for six
    i move that rok on tha block even when all tha jackerz are out bein dickz
    cuz i got game like David Lee u wud swear i was playin for tha knickz
    jack up my work nah imma leave em throwin up on tha ground like they sickz
    cuz i keep em toolz on me n imma flush em lames out when i get em with a fix
    if u lames dont stop imma kidnapp ur family n cook em in tha oven like brickz
    n laugh as they burn to death in my kitchen yeah i do it all for tha kickz

    so i heard u lames rele wanna know whoz bangin
    just come to my enchanted trap where we all hangin
    its beatin loud like a bitch n all our earz rangin
    n i got byrdz in tha trunk but they dont be sangin
    we all flagged up in tha hood so we all be gangin
    n we gettin into em sword fightz so we all be clang clangin
    i got work when im on tha block so u know how i be slangin
    n i dont ever get broke so nah i dont rele ever be sprangin
    when im pullin out my shyt on tha block all tha hoez me dangin
    cuz im sittin in a tropicana space ship so we call that shyt tangin
    they jump n my ride then jump on my dick so i be like they wangin
    n im addicted to gettin head n they love to suk like a vampire they be fangin

    im swaggin out retarded like i just dont give a dam
    my shoez is made outta sheep n my dam car outta lamb
    pplz callin me an idiot cuz my dam wallet is a clam
    n i got em sea shellz for em lames with long hornz like a ram
    one shot, shook tha block, when tha thang when BAM
    n it gave his back diarrhea shyttin out his organz like DAM
    i got some gurlz fire hott n imma score like NBA jam
    n im not talkin non-stick when i say im sprayin pam (im nasty)
    if ur lookin for me homie well come n see me where i am
    u can always find me at tha camp-out with more than a gram
    i got em marsh-mellowz too, n i canned it like some spam
    im so willy-wonka with tha work, yeah i make that candy yam
    but im doing more than servin feindz i run a pretty good scam
    i tell pplz im tha repo mayn then i take their shyt like GOT DAM
    tha trap is built like a fortress n on tha roof i gotta new SAM
    n its something like a mine cuz we deep in tha cavez ridin in a tram
    u lames is droppin out mayn yall cudnt even pass my exam
    thats why they gettin put in a casket or basket whenever i slam

    mayn im just doin my thang n then hit em with my grammer
    fukz up they flowz like i hit em with my hammer
    yall just sellin that fake shyt like a scammer
    see me i aint with it all that bullshyt clamor
    u can see me all ninja'd out just doin my crammer
    while yall cant come up with nothin yall just stammer
    wastin all ya time at tha store tryin to do tha glamour
    but im messin up ya cheap shotz at me with my enamour
    imma pull out tha conceptz, i gotta nuclear reactor
    n tha way im movin em balez, i do it with a tractor
    im not ever going to tha oscarz, im not a dam actor
    but i got jurrastic park flow, call me a fukin raptor
    spittin venom in ya face, thats another deadly factor
    never mind im out my mind, my best friend is a trash compactor
    call it C-3-DIE-SLOW, im blockin out ya beamz like a refractor
    ill turn ya lamez into lawn chairz, after i lay down tha lacquer

    HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA yeah mayn BOW DOWN TO ME...n if ur a fan then get at me pplz...I DO THIS SHYT FOR FUN!!!

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    Re: RANDOM SHYT BOW DOWN TO A KING!!! (super flow)

    this was decent......the flow was pretty good in places
    how you would go off one word for a bunch of bars
    consecutively, but in some places it felt like the flow was
    really forced and you just threw the rhyming word at
    the end of the line to keep it going......work on your spelling
    and having some wittier concepts....stay up^

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    Re: RANDOM SHYT BOW DOWN TO A KING!!! (super flow)

    well thanx bruh...yeah still cant figure out tha FORCED meaning...i mean i write for fun...it flows in my mind...i dont like RUSH to finish a line either...but i do thank u for that feed...im still lookin for new fans...yall get at me!!!
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    Re: RANDOM SHYT BOW DOWN TO A KING!!! (super flow)

    I am your biggest fan, your talent enthralls me.
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    Re: RANDOM SHYT BOW DOWN TO A KING!!! (super flow)

    i liked parts to this one made me laugh the out my mind line was hella funny had me laugh a lil there was a couple times i was scratchin my head not know what i was readin like a ninja doin crammer or something like that. that was one of the one that stuck out to me as forced but yeah i liked it

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    Re: RANDOM SHYT BOW DOWN TO A KING!!! (super flow)

    Quote Originally Posted by Sand View Post
    I am your biggest fan, your talent enthralls me.
    No you're not, I am.

    WORD P e r f e c t !


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    Re: RANDOM SHYT BOW DOWN TO A KING!!! (super flow)

    YAY FANZ!!! thank you thank you...more commin guyz...these were SUPER OLD LINES...i am currently workin on 4 other drops...so yall get ready!!! n if ur lookin for me find me online...im always down to write something...THANX AGAIN GUYS...oh PLZ TELL ME UR FAVORITE LINES!!!
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    Re: RANDOM SHYT BOW DOWN TO A KING!!! (super flow)

    this is beginner stuff. your forcing lines by inventing words like 'fangin' and 'dangin'. your fl'ow is super repetitive, same type shit over and over. some of the shit you said is just plain dumb like..

    pplz callin me an idiot cuz my dam wallet is a clam

    im so stupid when i slang im breakin down tha work like im chris (brown)

    yeah, work on the actual concept of what your saying. dont just think of something that rhymes and base the punch on that everytime. that bangin verse sounded like a bad country song. imo, this seems the work of a newb. keep it up n elevate.
    earn my money just to spend, its funny..
    cuz money come n go like my friends n buddies.


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    Re: RANDOM SHYT BOW DOWN TO A KING!!! (super flow)

    lol will do...im strivin for some FRESH SHYT...sick of that same old fukin shyt...lets rele get this shyt going!!!...yall tell me ya fav lines too!!!
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    Re: RANDOM SHYT BOW DOWN TO A KING!!! (super flow)

    Fuk U Bastards Feed This Got Dam Piece!!!
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    Re: RANDOM SHYT BOW DOWN TO A KING!!! (super flow)

    aight, it deff flowed nicely, I like how each verse had the same rhyme

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    if ya see me n my ride i might have a bow n arrow
    cuz im swaggin 16th century like i was jack sparrow
    i built my trap up brick by brick so im something like a pharaoh
    n its half underground so that all tha moles have to burrow
    i got landminez hidden deep in tha dirt so ur chances are narrow
    cuz if u get hit with one of these bombz itll fuk up ya marrow
    mayn i ride round in a pirate ship yep yep


    I dunno if it is a spelling mistake or the fact I have bearley slept in the last three days but

    when im pullin out my shyt on tha block all tha hoez me dangin

    Reads like it should be

    when im pullin out my shyt on tha block all tha hoez BE DANGLIN

    but idk im really tired haha I liked the whole piece though

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    Re: RANDOM SHYT BOW DOWN TO A KING!!! (super flow)

    lol thanx bruh...but im going for DOPENESS on all my drops!!!
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    Re: RANDOM SHYT BOW DOWN TO A KING!!! (super flow)

    not as good had its moments indeed but other places you seamed to tire of writting and just stretched more you def are not garbage just this one lacked
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Re: RANDOM SHYT BOW DOWN TO A KING!!! (super flow)

    dam i hoped it wasnt THAT obvious that i used SUPER OLD LINES...oh well...thanx for tha FEED bruh...i will RTF soon...too drunk right now...
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    Re: RANDOM SHYT BOW DOWN TO A KING!!! (super flow)

    Hey Bro that was a nice piece man but it was a tad bit long so it lost its concept stick to a topic and convey it good stuff though keep it up

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