Mr. DJ vs Text Emcee

[Rapstyles]

10 lines
due in 1 hour,
anything after that I'm DQ'n
house rules no feeding

..check

[Mr. DJ]

L0L @ Ya Rules..
Whatever Man Lets Go

Check

[Rapstyles]

Ill say this is my check so I'm not freeposting, just drop before 3AM eastern

[Mr. DJ]

DJ you drop first I don't want any duckin from u

^ ^
WOW!!

This Aint No Battle, WTF Is With That Post? Damn You Got Nerve Bitch
I'd Call This Wine & Dine..Cuz This Crying Faggot Getting Served Quick
He Says He's A True Text Emcee & Writes Alot, But Thats Wimp Shit
Thats Just His Excuse For Covering Up Why He's Really Limp'd Wrist
Stop Gaming We Know Your Gay, But Who Don't Know This Man Well?
He Always With A Gameboy - Thats The Only Time He Had His Handheld
I Can't Stop On The Gay Jokes..But It Is Guys Who I Can Tell He's Dated
& I'm One To Put You Down Easy - Especially Since You Never Elevated
Fuck This Dude, You Aint No True Emcee & Will Never Be Labeled An Icon
But You Can Be The New Cutting Edge..For Emo's To Practice Suicide On

10.

[Rapstyles]

People told me DJ raw, this dude fresh as hell, but they must be speakin wrong.
Cuz then they cover their ears when the DJ plays a couple of his whack songs.
DJ got cut from his job of disk jockeying, step up ya game, jus do or die
Yeah, this bitch a radio killa.. When his songs play, they radio commits suicide..
Dude, why do you call your raps good or decent, they're just whack noise..
Hands on your hip, lookin like a gay backup dancer for the backstreet boys.
Your mom says, don't worry DJ, you know I like your music, when she really hates it
And this dude says he's from D-Town..the place where the Dick is fuckin sacred.
This dude loves the environment, so we should look at him as sort of an idol,
yea, D loves to be green..because every last verse he dropped was recycled.

[Rapstyles]

(consider this an up) lol at you makin your font bigger so your verse looks longer, smh

[Vallus]

Im not voting cuz DJ says im in a voting ring
but i woulda voted for him...i liked the handheld line
the intro sucked though...wine and dines last long so
they would be served quick

and text...stop writing lines about the backstreet boys and
try to be more creative man

[Rapstyles]

Up, leave links

[Kill Myself]

^ ^
wow!!

This aint no battle, wtf is with that post? Damn you got nerve bitch
i'd call this wine & dine..cuz this crying faggot getting served quick
ehh 4/10
he says he's a true text emcee & writes alot, but thats wimp shit
thats just his excuse for covering up why he's really limp'd wrist
5/10
stop gaming we know your gay, but who don't know this man well?
He always with a gameboy - thats the only time he had his handheld
6/ lol
i can't stop on the gay jokes..but it is guys who i can tell he's dated
& i'm one to put you down easy - especially since you never elevated
5/10 cool
fuck this dude, you aint no true emcee & will never be labeled an icon
but you can be the new cutting edge..for emo's to ractice suicide on
510 ^^^ lol
10.

25/50

[Kill Myself]

People told me DJ raw, this dude fresh as hell, but they must be speakin wrong.
Cuz then they cover their ears when the DJ plays a couple of his whack songs.
4/10 weak
DJ got cut from his job of disk jockeying, step up ya game, jus do or die
Yeah, this bitch a radio killa.. When his songs play, they radio commits suicide..
^^^
6/10 lol
Dude, why do you call your raps good or decent, they're just whack noise..
Hands on your hip, lookin like a gay backup dancer for the backstreet boys.
4/10 nah
Your mom says, don't worry DJ, you know I like your music, when she really hates it
And this dude says he's from D-Town..the place where the Dick is fuckin sacred.
4/10 no homo
This dude loves the environment, so we should look at him as sort of an idol,
yea, D loves to be green..because every last verse he dropped was recycled.
5/10 ehh

23/50

vote= Mr. DJ

[Real Dope.]

People told me DJ raw, this dude fresh as hell, but they must be speakin wrong.
Cuz then they cover their ears when the DJ plays a couple of his whack songs.
Too Forced..Try Shortening Words/Lines
DJ got cut from his job of disk jockeying, step up ya game, jus do or die
Yeah, this bitch a radio killa.. When his songs play, they radio commits suicide..
Nahh...
Dude, why do you call your raps good or decent, they're just whack noise..
Hands on your hip, lookin like a gay backup dancer for the backstreet boys.
Nahh...Whack..
Your mom says, don't worry DJ, you know I like your music, when she really hates it
And this dude says he's from D-Town..the place where the Dick is fuckin sacred.
Wern't Feeling...But Atleast An Okay Personal
This dude loves the environment, so we should look at him as sort of an idol,
yea, D loves to be green..because every last verse he dropped was recycled.
Playyed As Hell...:/

VS...

This Aint No Battle, WTF Is With That Post? Damn You Got Nerve Bitch
I'd Call This Wine & Dine..Cuz This Crying Faggot Getting Served Quick
Mehh...
He Says He's A True Text Emcee & Writes Alot, But Thats Wimp Shit
Thats Just His Excuse For Covering Up Why He's Really Limp'd Wrist
Lol...
Stop Gaming We Know Your Gay, But Who Don't Know This Man Well?
He Always With A Gameboy - Thats The Only Time He Had His Handheld
Nahh...Wording Is Ok But Concept Played.
I Can't Stop On The Gay Jokes..But It Is Guys Who I Can Tell He's Dated
& I'm One To Put You Down Easy - Especially Since You Never Elevated
Nahh...
Fuck This Dude, You Aint No True Emcee & Will Never Be Labeled An Icon
But You Can Be The New Cutting Edge..For Emo's To Practice Suicide On
Lol...Sort Of A Played Concept But Mehh Made Me Laugh.

Structure....Mr Dj
Punches....Mr Dj
Better Concepts....Mr Dj
Flow....Tie
Creativity....Tie
....My Vote Goes To MR DJ!
Simply because of better punches better concepts which made his verse work alot more effectivly...
Text you need to put more effort into your verse get more complicated...
in which will turn out effectivly in the end soo you can take these battles...
My Vote: Mr. Dj

[Real Dope.]

RTF...On My Battle With Scorp

[Rapstyles]

Lol, he makes his font bigger so his lines look longer.. w/e though, don't make new post just to say RTF..

[Mr. DJ]

Lol, he makes his font bigger so his lines look longer.. w/e though, don't make new post just to say RTF..

^ ^
What Is This Bitching About My Font? WTF? Yo Shut Up..I Always Change My Verse To A Size 1 But I Never Changed It For This Battle..If You Take The Size 1 Off My Verses It'll Look Similar To The One I Posted In This Battle..Aint No Different..No Font Changes, Just Size Change..Stop Complaining & Flooding The Thread With Dumb Shit..For Real Dude, Damn You Did Ya Part Lets Just Get Votes...
My First & Last Time Saying Something...All Votes From Here On Out

[KnowP]

He Says He's A True Text Emcee & Writes Alot, But Thats Wimp Shit
Thats Just His Excuse For Covering Up Why He's Really Limp'd Wrist
Stop Gaming We Know Your Gay, But Who Don't Know This Man Well?
He Always With A Gameboy - Thats The Only Time He Had His Handheld
I Can't Stop On The Gay Jokes..But It Is Guys Who I Can Tell He's Dated
& I'm One To Put You Down Easy - Especially Since You Never Elevated

vs

DJ got cut from his job of disk jockeying, step up ya game, jus do or die
Yeah, this bitch a radio killa.. When his songs play, they radio commits suicide..
This dude loves the environment, so we should look at him as sort of an idol,
yea, D loves to be green..because every last verse he dropped was recycled.

Both of yall are gettin more creative and thinking of punches that are out the box.
Dj was just more consitent and his wording was better. Text had the better closer
but DJ had the creativity which landed his punches harder...

v/ DJ

rtf: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...682/index.html