LLL Season 11: Week 3
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LLL Season 11: Week 3
Standard Rules (can be found in LLL Office)
Check in by Wednesday
Drop by Midnight Friday (Eastern Time)
16 Lines Minimum
Vote on 5 Battles
Leave links in your check in or lose 2 votes per missing link
Good Luck
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Gotta key 16…won’t have time tom or Friday…
He’s probably shitting his pants cuz he knows im faster to rattle…
So watch as this pussy braces himself…before and after this battle
Your steady searching for an approach for ya rants to suck less…
But what you work forgoes to shit…passing up any chance of success
When the person I’m facing isn’t worth it I’m not the type to try…
Cuz for me this week’s like a bye..and for you this week’s like a BYE! (bye…)
He’s failed to change his image, but I bet this beating would…
Because he went from meters to miles……away from being good
This fag’s been inconsistent, he’s never truly found winnin…
But he knows the key to bf firming…since he settled down with him
You’d think this guys gay right? But your wrong, cuz instead he’s…
Had a lot of experience nailing women…giving mani’s and pedi’s
You’ll notice nobody listens to this fruit..and only a few try later…
And start to see that Accordin to him…is the plug on his new vibrator
Enough with the gay jokes…I’ll fucking bash your rep ya queer…
But I guess that just doesn’t get the job done…..like his text career
Last edited by Manic.; July 22nd, 2009 at 07:39 PM
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his whole steeze is fashioned plastic, fool got nothing much to say
cuz Manneq-uin action an oxymoron. bitch just a dummy on display
'n he don't even attract girls, if a chick spots him it's not worth sparks
cuz if he cauterize, 10 times of 10 he's in for the 'burn' part
'n it gets worse, he likes to act a chick while his sick fantasies fuel
shit, whenever his lips purse, he's offerin' tote bag for family jewels
this dude's the opposite of straight, his gene code twisted intimately
cuz the Atom's He-lix really got Eve thrown for a loop.. literally
now this idiot's offending me, all played out 'n weak mentally
honestly, Manic couldn't write something rarified penned it w/ his density
this kid is beyond bad, peeps turn the other cheek when he cross paths
would look out for his friends, but even they don't give him their contacts
this dude's best is to bitch senseless so I offend him just to end it
cuz Manic Depression only impresses when it's Hendrix on the electric
this dude can't even approach me, he too scared to die in my shadow
before grindin his axe, he's dead in his tracks or grindin' his axils
whatever.
Last edited by Meters; July 25th, 2009 at 08:45 PM
no show...gay.
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if you don't got you verse up tonight..it's a dq. you're lucky i don't give a shit.
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thanks, had to rush again, silly shit. pz
iight. votes. now.
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Your steady searching for an approach for ya rants to suck less…
But what you work forgoes to shit…passing up any chance of success
He’s failed to change his image, but I bet this beating would…
Because he went from meters to miles……away from being good
vs.
his whole steeze is fashioned plastic, fool got nothing much to say
cuz Manneq-uin action an oxymoron. bitch just a dummy on display
'n he don't even attract girls, if a chick spots him it's not worth sparks
cuz if he cauterize, 10 times of 10 he's in for the 'burn' part
this dude's the opposite of straight, his gene code twisted intimately
cuz the Atom's He-lix really got Eve thrown for a loop.. literally
this dude's best is to bitch senseless so I offend him just to end it
cuz Manic Depression only impresses when it's Hendrix on the electric
Manic, u had a few nice lines in here, especially the meters to miles thing, that was simple but direct and dope. The forgo thing was also nice, but other than that, not a lot stood out to me n' u had some played things like the bye and nailed lines. Miles came really nice, maybe the best verse I seen thus far this week. The wording on his lines wasn't perfect, but it was good, and the concepts were pretty dope, especially the opener and Atom line, I liked those a lot. I think Miles this fairly easily with more quotables and consistency.
Vote - Miles
Manic:
He’s failed to change his image, but I bet this beating would…
Because he went from meters to miles……away from being good
nice nameplay and diss here
You’d think this guys gay right? But your wrong, cuz instead he’s…
Had a lot of experience nailing women…giving mani’s and pedi’s
nice flip here
vs.
Miles:
his whole steeze is fashioned plastic, fool got nothing much to say
cuz Manneq-uin action an oxymoron. bitch just a dummy on display
this is probably my favorite line in the whole battle
this dude's the opposite of straight, his gene code twisted intimately
cuz the Atom's He-lix really got Eve thrown for a loop.. literally
dont think ive ever seen a dna type line flipped and worded cool....not till now...this was a nice bar here
Overall: pretty interesting battle here...could definitely go either way but i gotta give this one to Miles--manics verse wasnt consistent, there was some flat out played/corny lines ie: the "bye" line and miles had the best line of the battle with the mannequin action/oxymoron line...shit was fresh there...good shit yall
He’s probably shitting his pants cuz he knows im faster to rattle…
So watch as this pussy braces himself…before and after this battle
nah
Your steady searching for an approach for ya rants to suck less…
But what you work forgoes to shit…passing up any chance of success
meh, wp doesn't well
When the person I’m facing isn’t worth it I’m not the type to try…
Cuz for me this week’s like a bye..and for you this week’s like a BYE! (bye…)
meh
He’s failed to change his image, but I bet this beating would…
Because he went from meters to miles……away from being good
predictable/played nameplay, average
This fag’s been inconsistent, he’s never truly found winnin…
But he knows the key to bf firming…since he settled down with him
ehhh
You’d think this guys gay right? But your wrong, cuz instead he’s…
Had a lot of experience nailing women…giving mani’s and pedi’s
played and the wording wasn't nice
You’ll notice nobody listens to this fruit..and only a few try later…
And start to see that Accordin to him…is the plug on his new vibrator
i guess...
Enough with the gay jokes…I’ll fucking bash your rep ya queer…
But I guess that just doesn’t get the job done…..like his text career
average i guess
vs.
his whole steeze is fashioned plastic, fool got nothing much to say
cuz Manneq-uin action an oxymoron. bitch just a dummy on display
ehhh, reaching
'n he don't even attract girls, if a chick spots him it's not worth sparks
cuz if he cauterize, 10 times of 10 he's in for the 'burn' part
flip was decent
'n it gets worse, he likes to act a chick while his sick fantasies fuel
shit, whenever his lips purse, he's offerin' tote bag for family jewels
this flip a bit too played
this dude's the opposite of straight, his gene code twisted intimately
cuz the Atom's He-lix really got Eve thrown for a loop.. literally
cool idea, could have concluded it better IMO
now this idiot's offending me, all played out 'n weak mentally
honestly, Manic couldn't write something rarified penned it w/ his density
most of the ified wps have been done, this one doesn't work as well as most
this kid is beyond bad, peeps turn the other cheek when he cross paths
would look out for his friends, but even they don't give him their contacts
played
this dude's best is to bitch senseless so I offend him just to end it
cuz Manic Depression only impresses when it's Hendrix on the electric
aight
this dude can't even approach me, he too scared to die in my shadow
before grindin his axe, he's dead in his tracks or grindin' his axils
ehh
v/ meters
props for allowing the late drop tho manic
He’s failed to change his image, but I bet this beating would…
Because he went from meters to miles……away from being good
Best one so far...
You’d think this guys gay right? But your wrong, cuz instead he’s…
Had a lot of experience nailing women…giving mani’s and pedi’s
Clever concept, wording's off though...
You’ll notice nobody listens to this fruit..and only a few try later…
And start to see that Accordin to him…is the plug on his new vibrator
Eh...
VS
his whole steeze is fashioned plastic, fool got nothing much to say
cuz Manneq-uin action an oxymoron. bitch just a dummy on display
Wording's off...clever nameplay though...
'n it gets worse, he likes to act a chick while his sick fantasies fuel
shit, whenever his lips purse, he's offerin' tote bag for family jewels
Gross!
now this idiot's offending me, all played out 'n weak mentally
honestly, Manic couldn't write something rarified penned it w/ his density
Cool-ish...
this kid is beyond bad, peeps turn the other cheek when he cross paths
would look out for his friends, but even they don't give him their contacts
Good-ish...
this dude's best is to bitch senseless so I offend him just to end it
cuz Manic Depression only impresses when it's Hendrix on the electric
Nice reference, but eh on the hit...
Pretty clearly Meters has this...
Just more polished, wittier.
Manic threw ok, but it took him awhile to get going and then his wording was off some once he did. Real clever shit, just not quite the experience to get it across tightly.
Peace
Your steady searching for an approach for ya rants to suck less…
But what you work forgoes to shit…passing up any chance of success
He’s failed to change his image, but I bet this beating would…
Because he went from meters to miles……away from being good
vs.
'n he don't even attract girls, if a chick spots him it's not worth sparks
cuz if he cauterize, 10 times of 10 he's in for the 'burn' part
this dude's the opposite of straight, his gene code twisted intimately
cuz the Atom's He-lix really got Eve thrown for a loop.. literally
this dude's best is to bitch senseless so I offend him just to end it
cuz Manic Depression only impresses when it's Hendrix on the electric
overall- i thought this battle was pretty close, both guys dropped kinda nice and really showed that they are here to stay. imo, the meters to miles was def. the hardest hit in the battle, a nice personal on his name change. but i have to say other then that meters was just alot more consistent and took this one because of that.
v/ Miles
A.rtificial I.ntelligence
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He’s failed to change his image, but I bet this beating would…
Because he went from meters to miles……away from being good
You’ll notice nobody listens to this fruit..and only a few try later…
And start to see that Accordin to him…is the plug on his new vibrator
VS
his whole steeze is fashioned plastic, fool got nothing much to say
cuz Manneq-uin action an oxymoron. bitch just a dummy on display
'n it gets worse, he likes to act a chick while his sick fantasies fuel
shit, whenever his lips purse, he's offerin' tote bag for family jewels
now this idiot's offending me, all played out 'n weak mentally
honestly, Manic couldn't write something rarified penned it w/ his density
this dude's best is to bitch senseless so I offend him just to end it
cuz Manic Depression only impresses when it's Hendrix on the electric
Nice to see meters showing up n nice of Manic for letting him drop late. seems it wasnt to good of an idea for his record tho because Meters dropped a proper verse and won here pretty handley IMO.. other than that i thought manic was pretty cool just a couple played nd lame concepts.
Vote - Meters.
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