The Mentalist Vs Your Sperm Doner

[The Mentalist]

house rules
10 lines
due hr after check in
"CHECK"

[Your Sperm Doner]

In.

[Your Sperm Doner]

I earn cake killing fakes, so it's only natural I add you to the list...
Of people to target practice with, cuz ya nose perfect aim for my fist
Your a lame and a snitch, plus you have the brain of a bitch
I'm not a doctor, but my AK won't have a problem filling out this mental list
Listen bitch. When my hand hits you'll need the referees to blow the whistles
I'll leave my trade mark so big on ya face they'd replace your initials
It's offical, I've returned. I'll use you as an example so others can learn...
I'll smack you so hard wit the hammer you'd think court was adjourned
You ain't ready for war, teenager who the fuck you think you steppin too?
Cuz you a Micro ass nigga, shit... gary colemans shoe size's bigger then you

[The Mentalist]

check 1 2,,
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lyricaly il damage ya feet, lay ya underneith,, where ya body meant to be. count 6 feet.
xposin, im decomposin, diz donar like he lost the lack of energy.
suffering diz coward like he lost da oxygen. ima solve em quick like da by pass of a keygen.
my rymes leave diz kat outta his region, u ant never palm'd a gat.
dis nikka still reaching.
only time u gaining money is when u stright dreaming, ima psycho demon.
whats funny is, u ant bustin spearm he bustin blanks.
this hobo's food getten stolen by tape worm,(me im taking his shit)
u a magget, mixed wittah bit of fagget just for that ima squeese da ratches.
lay ya flatter den a matchress. u like elastic's ima stright stretch diz fag as da bullets clank wit em like maggnets.

[Your Sperm Doner]

Votes?

[Celph Taut]

Vote - Your Sperm Doner..


Not bad... The Mentalist? you were all over the place, and the content of your material is very generic and straight out tasteless... YSD, you were not far from the same faith... but a little more structured, with some OK multies to boot.... if you work on your craft, with a little more time you'll be better...


Overall, I look at it as... Doner, you were much more direct in the coming of your verse compared to The Mentalist.

[The Mentalist]

upinnnnnnnnn

[Your Sperm Doner]

votes

[Seraphym]

My break down...

YSD-
It's offical, I've returned. I'll use you as an example so others can learn...
I'll smack you so hard wit the hammer you'd think court was adjourned
(Oh, shit! Dead 'em)

vs.

The Mentalist-
suffering diz coward like he lost da oxygen.
ima solve em quick like da by pass of a keygen.
(WTF is 'keygen'? This shit had potential, but didn't make sense)

Interesting battle here. The Mentalist, son, what was that? I think you were thinking faster than u type and messed up on some shit. It happens... Had potential for good punches, but slipped up while u left YSD get 'em in on ya. YSD, good shit!

vote=YSD

[Your Sperm Doner]

^Good looking out. Bump

[STACKSSS]

ysd- more on topic
mentalist-you just lost me. just never really came at him hard

[YungDosia]

Categories...
Punches-ysd
personals-ysd
flow-ment
creativity-ysd
multies-ment
overall-ysd

vote-ysd

overall better verse came more consitantly

[Mr. DJ]

It's offical, I've returned. I'll use you as an example so others can learn...
I'll smack you so hard wit the hammer you'd think court was adjourned

vs

Nothing

Ok Very Obvious & One-Sided Battle. Sperm Was The Only One With Potential Hits Even Though He Came Off Weak But Not AS Weak As The Mentalist. He Made Attempts Of Nameplay [However It Wasnt Strong Enough] But He Still Put In More Effort, Still Put Out Multis To Help His Flow Work Well. Mentalist's Structure Was Off & His Flow Just Looked Mad Chopped Son. Work On That.

v/ S. Doner
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RTF On This Battle

[Your Sperm Doner]

Bump, need to get this closed. I'm ready to battle more peeps.

[Your Sperm Doner]

bump