Mental Silhouette

[Morbid Dream]

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Mental Silhouette
Fryin some munchies up, I’m ripped, spit dribbles from my lips
Soon as I taste the chips, then my mind hops and skips
I See my life at peace, am I dreaming, am I on a trip
Yeah I’ve been smoking spliffs but I aint ever popping shit
So I delved into my mind to find the causes of this dilemma
Found confusion, in compound illusions to a beat less acapella
Transfixed between an octagon of doors to mental streams
Spinning around in circles tryin to search this senseless dream
Perplexed at possible prospects of plentiful doors
Is this dream or reality filled with questionable laws
Unsensible, warped I find myself sprinting but I’m on all fours
senseless cause. Hell, a realm like this nullifies metaphors
Like a mirror reflecting any image of demented thought
this dreams a hurricane twisting the rules of every law
Pursuing a Silhouette coz an answer is Requisite!
I’m sprinting like a horse to a carrot on a stick
I Stumble and trip but still cant catch up to it
Like the harder I run the further I am from the bitch
Suspended in my spot like a ventriloquist masters the script


…So don’t stop telling me that drugs are bad…
…Because gone is the clarity that once I had…


…..Relax a bit…
Yeah that shit worked like a magic trick
Now I find myself in control like I’m majestic
Mental silhouette appears like a phantom quick
in tandem now parachuting like I’m in command of it
But my reliefs a hallucinogen. I’m off the planet… twixed
thinkin what the f--- was I pursuing since I began this trip
This quest was nothing but trouble since it was concocted
I feel so unrelated to this realm like being adopted
Snapping out of it seems to be my only option
BRRRING…
……….Hell, I escaped that obnoxious realm for realities nonsense


…So don’t stop telling me that drugs are bad…
…Because gone is the clarity that once I had…
…Life always beckons…with SIRENS. Sure I understand…




But what the f--- was this mental silhouette
A thought which if I had caught it would’ve made clear all introspect
A figment of my mind… a ghost I need to intercept
It’s in my mind like a mad man in a straight jacket
Always fades to dust in enraging clusters when I reach to catch it
Now my minds fatigued, mental streams are stopped rapid
All thought paths are blocked off like rubber rebound brackets
These mind strains cause migraines, I need aspirins, 8 packets
Mental blocks… every thought is stopped by cotton patches
My thoughts are statues, frozen…I drift to sleep and a dream catches


zzzzz…
.....…zzzzzz…
...........…zzzzzz
…So don’t stop telling me that drugs are bad…
…Because gone is the clarity that once I had…
You see once upon a time I had some hind sight
But it’d take a rude awakening to get my mind right.


Mental silhouette seams to hold my hand grinning
So this time I have it in my grasp but I’m thinking
What! Speak to me or get your eerie ass dimming
My minds spinning and a second bell starts ringing
I have this thought in my hand then my grasp starts slipping
Flipping into a rage, screaming what the f--- is this shit?
Mental silhouette, comes visits till my lid is flipped?
In a hysterical fit but I cant see why I gives a shit
This is your therapist son relax sedate this kid quick
Headed for the asylum, suddenly, an image clicks
I quit my skitz .My thoughts found the thinking switch
You left ya stove on, ya house is about to burn down BITCH!!!...( mental silhouette, mental silhouette, mental silhouette)




I dont do drugs. This is a picture of my image of drug abusers.

What was the Mental silhouette-the thought that was on the verge of emerging-dude forgot to turn his stove off Refer to first line

Bells ringing was stove timer

I still express
Yo I dont smoke weed or sess
Coz its known to give a nigga brain damage

[Morbid Dream]

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Ace of Aces...Finding Myself
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hlight=Finding

Elemental Soul
Iced Out Chain Letter
http://www.rapbattles.comthread.php/...in-346472.html

Estacado
Forgotten
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=345424

[Facts Machine]

Very interesting drop, the imagery was there, but i think the emotion was the main key point to this shit, u had a nice rhyme-scheme as well and i liked what u wrote inbetween each verse. the magic trick stanza was dope. it just stood out to me. The overall concept was cool, not exactly original, but still creative in it's own way. anyways, hopefully u get more feed-back... but yeah...

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[Morbid Dream]

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[Kuekuatsheu™]

Word.

I enjoyed this drop of yours Morbid as I do most.

Your imagery was good for the story chosen. Your words were not over used or used unnecessarily. Your structure was well chosen and the placing of verses was a change for your writing style which I liked as well. You did a good job. The description of actions and thoughts was good. You didn't try and get too into it as if you were emphasizing something that did not need so. Your tone was noticeable and the flow used was good as well. I enjoyed the read as usual.

Good Work.

[Morbid Dream]

Word.

I enjoyed this drop of yours Morbid as I do most.

Your imagery was good for the story chosen. Your words were not over used or used unnecessarily. Your structure was well chosen and the placing of verses was a change for your writing style which I liked as well. You did a good job. The description of actions and thoughts was good. You didn't try and get too into it as if you were emphasizing something that did not need so. Your tone was noticeable and the flow used was good as well. I enjoyed the read as usual.

Good Work.

Thanks Ehomeboy...will RTF again