marvj vs sickerverse

[sickerverse]

10 lines
due 11-8-09 midnight
Check in

[MaRVJ]

check..

[sickerverse]

damn almost forgot

be back later

[MaRVJ]

fag u the type the roc a chick purse,box wit this jerk?
my left jab is serius i aint gota rap to drop a sickverse.
they want it a cute kid but your parents fail'd.
you look like a mixture of sam cassell & 1 of santa elves.
no no...your face givin me hell..ima go in1 detail.
you look like if latrell sprewell was a fuckin shemale.
why is he thinkin the try marv,i wink at this guy's broad.
throw him in the ocean...let him sync with his ipod.
you cant fuck with me son fall back remain calm.
i lol smiley face at his soundclick page,cuz it aint even got trey songz

[sickerverse]

Marv know i type sicker.. with scriptures that could Alter Ur Life Figures
ya style 'Seems Dim'.. like seeing clocks in Faulty Light Fixtures!!
one of the top rank got spank and no i dont mean i got her lyed down in the room
if Marvj ever said he has 'Legions Of Fans'.. i guess that Doctor Doom Lied To You
you need to step up to 8 Bars..stop tryin to Play Hard.. you a Fake Dog
claim strong, but I tear apart ya jaw and rip ya whole fuckin face off
we need a roadmap to your shit....basically directions to a forced flow
but once you see Sicker Verse... you'll freeze up like erections in the North pole
so As I Hammer Your Frame with the Grammar Thats Great
he couldn't have the 'look of ill' even with a Cancerous Face


G/L

[Novac]

Just to pick the best set of lines from each:

why is he thinkin the try marv,i wink at this guy's broad.
throw him in the ocean...let him sync with his ipod.

vs

Marv know i type sicker.. with scriptures that could Alter Ur Life Figures
ya style 'Seems Dim'.. like seeing clocks in Faulty Light Fixtures!!


MarVJ:
I have no idea what you were trying to say with that first line. Almost a nameplay on the second one if not for the fact his name is "Sickerverse" not "Sickverse". I don't know, other than the iPod line it's just all "ur ugly" and "ur a shemale" jokes which have been so played over and over. And just comment on the syntax, I had to read the whole verse uncomfortably slow trying to decipher this strange internet Ebonics and try to translate it to comprehensible English.

Sickerverse:
The first line actually made me say, "Oh shit" out loud; shit's dope. Your second to last line basically summed up this battle for me; your word choice was on a higher level, and your verse actually HAD some level of grammar and tangibility to it. I liked that your punches were more visual and thought out rather than "ur gay" and "ur a shemale", which was all I really got from MarVJ. I knew where my vote was going after reading your first line.


For superior flow/wordplay and more intelligent punches:

/v Sickerverse

[SHOK-VAL-U]

fag u the type the roc a chick purse,box wit this jerk?
my left jab is serius i aint gota rap to drop a sickverse.
3/5
they want it a cute kid but your parents fail'd.
you look like a mixture of sam cassell & 1 of santa elves.
2/5
no no...your face givin me hell..ima go in1 detail.
you look like if latrell sprewell was a fuckin shemale.
2/5
why is he thinkin the try marv,i wink at this guy's broad.
throw him in the ocean...let him sync with his ipod.
3/5
you cant fuck with me son fall back remain calm.
i lol smiley face at his soundclick page,cuz it aint even got trey songz
2/5

-12/25


Marv know i type sicker.. with scriptures that could Alter Ur Life Figures
ya style 'Seems Dim'.. like seeing clocks in Faulty Light Fixtures!!
3/5
one of the top rank got spank and no i dont mean i got her lyed down in the room
if Marvj ever said he has 'Legions Of Fans'.. i guess that Doctor Doom Lied To You
2/5
you need to step up to 8 Bars..stop tryin to Play Hard.. you a Fake Dog
claim strong, but I tear apart ya jaw and rip ya whole fuckin face off
2/5
we need a roadmap to your shit....basically directions to a forced flow
but once you see Sicker Verse... you'll freeze up like erections in the North pole
2/5
so As I Hammer Your Frame with the Grammar Thats Great
he couldn't have the 'look of ill' even with a Cancerous Face
2/5

-11/25

ok marv you are making your bars too short,your older style was meaner to me,but you still got punches as always. Sickerverse this is prob the best ive seen from you,but alot is played/elementary... talking about erections in battle verses is a no no,and the 'ill /cancer shit is also played.

best bars from both:

marv.

fag u the type the roc a chick purse,box wit this jerk?
my left jab is serius i aint gota rap to drop a sickverse.
3/5

Sickerverse.

Marv know i type sicker.. with scriptures that could Alter Ur Life Figures
ya style 'Seems Dim'.. like seeing clocks in Faulty Light Fixtures!!
3/5

V/ marvj

[sickerverse]

so i've witness enough to know that there will be a terrable tragic ending to this grate battle that was show cased for rapbattle to enjoy.

Understand please

marvj i was unable to proceed to reply in time due to uncontrolable situation that was far outta my reach.
I fell fast sleep after having about 1 1/2 hours to 2 hours of grate sex with wify, i was exhausted and completly not in the right state of mind and im pretty sure you can relate if not thats understandable to some might not have sex before a battle or may not even have a girl who knows why.
I do wish you can understand the situation and reason in hopes that you can be reasoning in allowing this grate clash of wits between two titans go down.
If you may allow this to go down to he last man standing it will be greatly apperciated
and show rapbattle how to have grate sportsmenship.

rap battle would only anticipate this sorda reaction for people you may refer to as "Noobs and Weak" or "Snitches an Bitches" or "Wack or disperate"
and being among those top ranked and veteren with no need to do such a cold hearted remorsful act.

I think you will find it in you that you should allow this to go to the last man standing.
on top of he fact that you have talent this should be no worry for a text emcee like yurself


so do you understand my friend why my mistake happen??

will you allow this to continue??

[SHOK-VAL-U]

He never said anything?

also if a battle is setup,and you dont spit in time,you only have yourself to blame,fuck an excuse..i dont care who it is...agreeing to a battle time limit is your word in a contract that you will be available.

no hate. but you seriously didnt need to explain,i didnt see him complain once.peace

[MaRVJ]

this kid is a super fuckin lame..why are u typin these novels about pussy...u check'd in then you came back said you forgot about the battle...then u drop 9 HOURS LATE

thats your fault son

[sickerverse]

hey then so be it my friend,
but what you illistrating is what you and your fellow rb member calls and consider a "Snitch or a Bitch or a Noob or Disperate act of being UnConfindent"

i was only trying to let rb enjoy the 2 titans clash in a ruthless battle, i was trying to give rb Quality which lacks now a days around here would you agree??

so do not take this as me being a asshole or anything i was only trying to clear a misunderstanding like i have with shok-val-u,
you see for a quick second we also had a misunderstanding but like gentlemen we have resolve our issue perfectly fine and i felt i need it to apologies to the man which i did.
you see not everybody has to act out what they really not.
im no bully nor a vet, just a guy who likes to battle for the enjoyment an excitment not to prove i am the best in the internet

[C.A.S.]

sickerverse Dq'ed