Mafioso -VS- YungDosia

[YungDosia]

10 Lines.

Due By Midnite Tonight. WC Time.

both check in before dropping. this will be mine.

[Mafioso.]

check good luck.

[Mafioso.]

Another half ass key verse for the victory.

bitch you know you suck, so forfeit before you blow your luck.
must be lost in time...named yaself yung but all ya lines are old ass fuck.
bitch you suck I got this win jus man up and promote this L.
cuz if i got a dollar for everytime u won...I'd be broke as hell.
fuck punches I'm throwing slugs, and fucka dos noone here shows u love.
wen it cums 2 crews yung gets turned down more than 18 and over clubs.
you'll get knife woons across ya throat jus call me the neck cutter.
and I'll stomp all over your bitch so we can literally call her a STEP mother.
jus drop ya verse and stop pming me..why u actin like such a shook fag?
u suck so much if I fed of ya verse that'll just make me look bad.

[Mafioso.]

Another half ass key verse for the victory.

bitch you know you suck, so forfeit before you blow your luck.
must be lost in time...named yaself yung but all ya lines are old ass fuck.
bitch you suck I got this win jus man up and promote this L.
cuz if i got a dollar for everytime u won...I'd be broke as hell.
fuck punches I'm throwing slugs, and fucka dos noone here shows u love.
wen it cums 2 crews yung gets turned down more than 18 and over clubs.
you'll get knife woons across ya throat jus call me the neck cutter.
and I'll stomp all over your bitch so we can literally call her a STEP mother.
jus drop ya verse and stop pming me..why u actin like such a shook fag?
u suck so much if I fed of ya verse that'll just make me look bad.

[YungDosia]

Age:
18
Crew:
Dolo.
Location:
Where the money's at!
Interests:
trying to get paid
Occupation:
being a father


Nigga i do mad shows, lyrics are dope and my hooks are intense..
and this nigga's starting a Novel bout ticket master.. just to get booked for events..!!
This dude aint got cash...he can barely make rent..
Your where the moneys at, but ur trying to get paid...well its obvious now that u dont make cents..!!
Burn u like a Forman grill, shred you apart leave u torn for real..
Im beastin..this nigga dont have a mode so relies on BornToKill..!! *The Admin of the site*
Everybody beats u up in battles here, somebody bandage his skin..
Were all kinda like his daddy atleast...cuz we love taking advantage of him..!!
Is you at it again? Mafioso, only what u spit is a crime..
But its coo i let you wrap something.....only becuz its christmas time..!!


10

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...800/index.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...715/index.html

[Mafioso.]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...914/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...901/index.html

[YungDosia]

bump

[YungDosia]

bump2

[Dan K]

bitch you know you suck, so forfeit before you blow your luck.
must be lost in time...named yaself yung but all ya lines are old ass fuck.
lol kinda funny
bitch you suck I got this win jus man up and promote this L.
cuz if i got a dollar for everytime u won...I'd be broke as hell.
this is old and played
fuck punches I'm throwing slugs, and fucka dos noone here shows u love.
wen it cums 2 crews yung gets turned down more than 18 and over clubs.
not feelin it
you'll get knife woons across ya throat jus call me the neck cutter.
and I'll stomp all over your bitch so we can literally call her a STEP mother.
lol dont know why i like this dumb bar
jus drop ya verse and stop pming me..why u actin like such a shook fag?
u suck so much if I fed of ya verse that'll just make me look bad.
haha i like that a lot


vs


Nigga i do mad shows, lyrics are dope and my hooks are intense..
and this nigga's starting a Novel bout ticket master.. just to get booked for events..!!
tried way to hard, and was self gloryfing.
This dude aint got cash...he can barely make rent..
Your where the moneys at, but ur trying to get paid...well its obvious now that u dont make cents..!!
played and stretched hard..and worded TERRIBLY
Burn u like a Forman grill, shred you apart leave u torn for real..
Im beastin..this nigga dont have a mode so relies on BornToKill..!! *The Admin of the site*
not feelin it
Everybody beats u up in battles here, somebody bandage his skin..
Were all kinda like his daddy atleast...cuz we love taking advantage of him..!!
wtf? you got some daddy issues?
Is you at it again? Mafioso, only what u spit is a crime..
But its coo i let you wrap something.....only becuz its christmas time..!!
eh..devent i guess

Overall i didnt feel Yung's verse at all..you were trying way to hard homie. I didnt like Maf's verse all that much, but it had a few good moments, and they edged out Yung's verse...

Vote Maf.

[Mafioso.]

uppin.

[Mafioso.]

up 2

[YungDosia]

haha yeah right man....ill still except that vote but whatever lol...

[YungDosia]

bump

[Mafioso.]

nigga u have to accept it it was well explained...

[Jæk]

bitch you know you suck, so forfeit before you blow your luck.
must be lost in time...named yaself yung but all ya lines are old ass fuck.
nice rhyme scheme was on point punch was direct with a personal^^
bitch you suck I got this win jus man up and promote this L.
cuz if i got a dollar for everytime u won...I'd be broke as hell.
hahaha nice^^
fuck punches I'm throwing slugs, and fucka dos noone here shows u love.
wen it cums 2 crews yung gets turned down more than 18 and over clubs.
hahaha personal nice^^
you'll get knife woons across ya throat jus call me the neck cutter.
and I'll stomp all over your bitch so we can literally call her a STEP mother.
funny but weak^^
jus drop ya verse and stop pming me..why u actin like such a shook fag?
u suck so much if I fed of ya verse that'll just make me look bad.
hahaha nice^^

score= 4

vs



Nigga i do mad shows, lyrics are dope and my hooks are intense..
and this nigga's starting a Novel bout ticket master.. just to get booked for events..!!
mehh good for a freestyle but punch was weak lien was a bit stretched^^
This dude aint got cash...he can barely make rent..
Your where the moneys at, but ur trying to get paid...well its obvious now that u dont make cents..!!
haha nice that was decent a little stretched^^
Burn u like a Forman grill, shred you apart leave u torn for real..
Im beastin..this nigga dont have a mode so relies on BornToKill..!! *The Admin of the site*
haha nice good multi^^
Everybody beats u up in battles here, somebody bandage his skin..
Were all kinda like his daddy atleast...cuz we love taking advantage of him..!!
no homo^^
Is you at it again? Mafioso, only what u spit is a crime..
But its coo i let you wrap something.....only becuz its christmas time..!!
haha played but funny^^

score= 3


this was an ok battle maf did work had a line i didnt care fore but the other were nice
your flow was good punches kept comin had multis and personals
young yo uhad an ok flow it was a bit stretched you had a couple good lines but
you just didnt hit hard you need to work the structure out to help the flow and
your rhyme scheme was tight but you need to elevate
this was close
no hate
my vote=Maf