Jeffry vs. Shell Shock

[#PrimeTime]

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[Filthy McNasty]

I'm droppin bombs on this fool, his watch stops like a dead clock,
Unlike his name, hes traumatized by my attacks so hes shell shocked,
-meh opener. ok concept, but could have hit harder imo
Shell shock, not even the highest military psychatricts could treat you,
only 5 posts? hell, mad lib rhymes wouldn't be much to beat you,
-weak
This fool is just another noob, and will end up like my last fake,
im blitzin this krieg, heavy hittin like miami heat's fast breaks,
-ok
hes got no biographical information, musta been shot by friendly fire,
runs inside his crib when he thinks he hears guns, its actually me burnin out tires,
-not feeling this one
If i came back from iraq id have a block party type parade when i came home,
body this bitch up, have his grave next to the tombs of the unknowns
-weak closer

vs.

you got balls steppin to me, trying to cum correct w/no right.. testy
this hoes like my last two periods 1 for ya head & other explains what he like monthly
-weak opener
i aint gotta look at ya history foo, this mystery true i aint seeing u
if you was worth the time i give it a few, wrist gets popped then stop his watch too
-naw... stretched concept
we can go shot for shot but he'll get it twisted cuz john mixed his sunny d with whine
end his career for all time, his call sign should be the guy holdin a mall sign
-no
he aint feel right im a newcomer, he panhandling for wins what a bummer
its summer for ya, u still wont wouldnt hold heat wearin lebrons number
-probably your best bar, however, the 'won't wouldn't' wording hurt you
you'll get hype one day, just hit the block yell a scream & gun play
like yeah this will be fun hey i footballs jeff gets took to church any given sunday
-weak closer... bad wording and concept executed horribly

Vote: Jeffry for the sub par nameplay on the opener and the wordplay on the Miami Heat line. Both of you had a lot of misses, but Jeff had better attemps overall. No hate to either... Keep elevating!

[.TayTay]

I'm droppin bombs on this fool, his watch stops like a dead clock,
Unlike his name, hes traumatized by my attacks so hes shell shocked,
Weak and predictable

vs

nothing

Jeff got this cuz he actually threw punches.