Get Out The Way

[Cinizter]

GET OUT THE WAY



you better get out the way cause I'ma do my thing
I'm going to wipe my ass with the moon, too soon
cause now its falling and I'm calling you to save
I'm falling my friend into this new no wave
new world order, one nation of warriors
yes, last night I fell into a falling Sun
I'm not as rare as the gold in your satchel
and I only fight for lesser evils if I have to

I am disenfranchised as your dropouts
I hop out and rape your favorite scholars
I go out on your corner and beg for dollars
yelling at the man in the suit, gimme the loot!
I'll save this country and lead it to truth
Give the black man 40 acres and a mule
Send him to the world-reknown Columbine school of arts
Shooter, shooter in the cafeteria
Debating with revolutionaries about....
who gave more for country and MEN.

Don't stop the party on account of me
I'm just a guy that tries to let it be
I read my horoscope, I sift through lies
you never hear my midnight cries




Links:
Thats How The Story Goes-chim:instinx
It Will Pass-unabridged

[Adrenalyn]

i wasnt feeling this one i dont know if its was too far fetched or if i just didnt get what u were tryin to say or what
u might want to try better set ups and lines a little less random (ex "wipe my ass with the moon")

[Novac]

This reads like a pseudo-poetic rant piecing together cliche teen angst "fuck you!" attitude with quazi-political conspiracy theory and renown teen tragedy references - and it's about as confused with itself as this sentence is; meaning it was too unspecific to trigger any sort of emotion.

I feel like I didn't get anything from this because there isn't anything to get - either that or the metaphors here are layered so heavily that it's impossible to relate to any of it (which I am leaning away from).

P.s. Was that a No-Wave reference I saw or just a coincidence? Hmm, go Swans! (You probably have no idea what I'm talking about).

[Thugasaurus]

yes, last night I fell into a falling Sun
I'm not as rare as the gold in your satchel
and I only fight for lesser evils if I have to

I really liked that part. The rest was also enjoyable. I agree that it was very non-specific which takes away from it. I think if you focussed this piece a little more, it would have been much more effective.

should you feel compelled
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...567/index.html