FL HW Champ Match: Vulgar vs King

[The Archetype]

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[King]

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[A. Karp]

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[King]

ready when you are

[King]

For those who don't know: Vulgar = A. Karpis = Banned for biting

I should Stand-up this hoe, after this KO I would bet he quits
Got 200 points n he's Delirious if he thinks I aint takin' HALF!, like Eddie's Bitch
I'm celebrity status, watch this star trek all over his face
Punch'll send him into light speed, see if Vulcan come down from space
And Vulgar recently found out his chick's loyalty sucked
Cuz I don't mean she was in a Tough spot when I say she got Royally fucked
Hate to bring the bitch up for four lines out of this battle
But my dick was so far down her throat, it looked like an adam's apple
Dude'll get showered with punches til hes covered with pains
I'll evaporate this scrub..........and piss in the fucking puddle after it rains
Dude connects soft, seems that you swing like a pussy on purpose
No surprise cuz Karp is know to pull punches.....out of everyone elses verses
Once I Divide ya point total in half, we know Vulgar is history
We won't see him in the after math, unless I decide to add insult to injury
I sling punches like automatic rounds flyin' straight at ya head
Knowin' Karp, even if dodging was an option, he'd still bite the bullet instead

[A. Karp]

listen,

I’m killing the rankings & murdering king on the late night
So the only time he’ll be 1st….is in a hearse driving to his gravesite
& I heard your Gow’s biggest fan, plus isn’t it dumb too
How this fag is known for talking about War more than Sun Tzu
You don’t have the balls to battle vets, we know you’re scared
Cuz when I said grow a pair….this fruit literally tried to grow a pear
Quit claiming ya hard, cuz bitches like you don’t get respect
Yeah ok I admit you have the heart……shaped tattoo on ya neck
This guy is dirty & I’m squashing his dreams of being MVP
It’s sick when your only burning desire was catching an STD
You have zero game, but I pull bitches & could fill a room
Only time they’ll say you’re a fungi…..is taking a million shrooms
So this is where I’m confused, you keep saying it’s a guy thing
But I’ll start callin him lance armstrong, we all know you’re biking
Leave tire marks all over king, theres no way he’s stopping me
I’ll write a book about driving over ya corpse & call it an auto biography


16.

[Wordz AhGod.]

Dude connects soft, seems that you swing like a pussy on purpose
No surprise cuz Karp is know to pull punches.....out of everyone elses verses
I sling punches like automatic rounds flyin' straight at ya head
Knowin' Karp, even if dodging was an option, he'd still bite the bullet instead

vs

I’m killing the rankings & murdering king on the late night
So the only time he’ll be 1st….is in a hearse driving to his gravesite
So this is where I’m confused, you keep saying it’s a guy thing
But I’ll start callin him lance armstrong, we all know you’re biking
meh, wording
Leave tire marks all over king, theres no way he’s stopping me
I’ll write a book about driving over ya corpse & call it an auto biography

blah ass battle.. I felt like Karp had the more consistant and aggressive style lines.. King didn't really bring anything decent other the two I quoted and I almost didn't quote them just cos they were repetitions of the same concept.

v/Vulgar

[Wordz AhGod.]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...546/index.html

bugger RTF here.

[YungDosia]

I should Stand-up this hoe, after this KO I would bet he quits
Got 200 points n he's Delirious if he thinks I aint takin' HALF!, like Eddie's Bitch

Ok opener, nothing special^

I'm celebrity status, watch this star trek all over his face
Punch'll send him into light speed, see if Vulcan come down from space

Not feelin it^^

And Vulgar recently found out his chick's loyalty sucked
Cuz I don't mean she was in a Tough spot when I say she got Royally fucked

Lmao! Nice likin this shit^^

Hate to bring the bitch up for four lines out of this battle
But my dick was so far down her throat, it looked like an adam's apple

Nah..^^

Dude'll get showered with punches til hes covered with pains
I'll evaporate this scrub..........and piss in the fucking puddle after it rains

Dope! 2nd fav line of ya verse^^

Dude connects soft, seems that you swing like a pussy on purpose
No surprise cuz Karp is know to pull punches.....out of everyone elses verses

haha nice personal^^

Once I Divide ya point total in half, we know Vulgar is history
We won't see him in the after math, unless I decide to add insult to injury

Okay, decentish^^

I sling punches like automatic rounds flyin' straight at ya head
Knowin' Karp, even if dodging was an option, he'd still bite the bullet instead

Fav line of ya verse! nice closer with the wordplay and personal^^





I’m killing the rankings & murdering king on the late night
So the only time he’ll be 1st….is in a hearse driving to his gravesite

Ha nice opener^^

& I heard your Gow’s biggest fan, plus isn’t it dumb too
How this fag is known for talking about War more than Sun Tzu

Nah, not feelin it^^

You don’t have the balls to battle vets, we know you’re scared
Cuz when I said grow a pair….this fruit literally tried to grow a pear

LMAO!! this made me laugh out loud funny^^

Quit claiming ya hard, cuz bitches like you don’t get respect
Yeah ok I admit you have the heart……shaped tattoo on ya neck

Nice! Liked this wordplay^^

This guy is dirty & I’m squashing his dreams of being MVP
It’s sick when your only burning desire was catching an STD

Decent, Played concept^^

You have zero game, but I pull bitches & could fill a room
Only time they’ll say you’re a fungi…..is taking a million shrooms

lol^

So this is where I’m confused, you keep saying it’s a guy thing
But I’ll start callin him lance armstrong, we all know you’re biking

lol again, this was pretty cool^^

Leave tire marks all over king, theres no way he’s stopping me
I’ll write a book about driving over ya corpse & call it an auto biography

Good closer solid punch^^



Overall pretty good read, nice battle guys. My vote is going to Vulgar tho, he had the more consistant verse and his punches hit harder to me. King had a few nice personal punchlines, but too many misses in his verse. Vulgar takes this with his punches and consistancy, no hate. good battle.

Vote-Vulgar

[The Incredible Hulk]

I should Stand-up this hoe, after this KO I would bet he quits
Got 200 points n he's Delirious if he thinks I aint takin' HALF!, like Eddie's Bitch
2/5
I'm celebrity status, watch this star trek all over his face
Punch'll send him into light speed, see if Vulcan come down from space
4/5
And Vulgar recently found out his chick's loyalty sucked
Cuz I don't mean she was in a Tough spot when I say she got Royally fucked
3/5
Hate to bring the bitch up for four lines out of this battle
But my dick was so far down her throat, it looked like an adam's apple
3/5
Dude'll get showered with punches til hes covered with pains
I'll evaporate this scrub..........and piss in the fucking puddle after it rains
3/5
Dude connects soft, seems that you swing like a pussy on purpose
No surprise cuz Karp is know to pull punches.....out of everyone elses verses
4/5
Once I Divide ya point total in half, we know Vulgar is history
We won't see him in the after math, unless I decide to add insult to injury
3/5
I sling punches like automatic rounds flyin' straight at ya head
Knowin' Karp, even if dodging was an option, he'd still bite the bullet instead
4/5


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I’m killing the rankings & murdering king on the late night
So the only time he’ll be 1st….is in a hearse driving to his gravesite
3/5
& I heard your Gow’s biggest fan, plus isn’t it dumb too
How this fag is known for talking about War more than Sun Tzu
4/5
You don’t have the balls to battle vets, we know you’re scared
Cuz when I said grow a pair….this fruit literally tried to grow a pear
3/5
Quit claiming ya hard, cuz bitches like you don’t get respect
Yeah ok I admit you have the heart……shaped tattoo on ya neck
3/5
This guy is dirty & I’m squashing his dreams of being MVP
It’s sick when your only burning desire was catching an STD
3/5
You have zero game, but I pull bitches & could fill a room
Only time they’ll say you’re a fungi…..is taking a million shrooms
3/5
So this is where I’m confused, you keep saying it’s a guy thing
But I’ll start callin him lance armstrong, we all know you’re biking
4/5
Leave tire marks all over king, theres no way he’s stopping me
I’ll write a book about driving over ya corpse & call it an auto biography
3/5

26/40


Best bars from both:

King.
I'm celebrity status, watch this star trek all over his face
Punch'll send him into light speed, see if Vulcan come down from space
4/5

Dude connects soft, seems that you swing like a pussy on purpose
No surprise cuz Karp is know to pull punches.....out of everyone elses verses
4/5

Vulgar.
& I heard your Gow’s biggest fan, plus isn’t it dumb too
How this fag is known for talking about War more than Sun Tzu
4/5

So this is where I’m confused, you keep saying it’s a guy thing
But I’ll start callin him lance armstrong, we all know you’re biking
4/5

IMO a very close battle but if i had to pick one it would be King due to harder hitting personals. Both verses had good wordplay and punches and the battle could go either way.

V/ King.

[Switch.]

King

I should Stand-up this hoe, after this KO I would bet he quits
Got 200 points n he's Delirious if he thinks I aint takin' HALF!, like Eddie's Bitch
nice multies but only an ok starter
I'm celebrity status, watch this star trek all over his face
Punch'll send him into light speed, see if Vulcan come down from space
decent-ish
And Vulgar recently found out his chick's loyalty sucked
Cuz I don't mean she was in a Tough spot when I say she got Royally fucked
set up was good and so was punch
Hate to bring the bitch up for four lines out of this battle
But my dick was so far down her throat, it looked like an adam's apple
hmm a bit too simple imo
Dude'll get showered with punches til hes covered with pains
I'll evaporate this scrub..........and piss in the fucking puddle after it rains
Lol pretty good
Dude connects soft, seems that you swing like a pussy on purpose
No surprise cuz Karp is know to pull punches.....out of everyone elses verses
LOL niiice shit man good personal too
Once I Divide ya point total in half, we know Vulgar is history
We won't see him in the after math, unless I decide to add insult to injury
haha okay
I sling punches like automatic rounds flyin' straight at ya head
Knowin' Karp, even if dodging was an option, he'd still bite the bullet instead
sick closer..and good personal

vs

Vulgar

I’m killing the rankings & murdering king on the late night
So the only time he’ll be 1st….is in a hearse driving to his gravesite
decent starter
& I heard your Gow’s biggest fan, plus isn’t it dumb too
How this fag is known for talking about War more than Sun Tzu
meh cudda been better
You don’t have the balls to battle vets, we know you’re scared
Cuz when I said grow a pair….this fruit literally tried to grow a pear
Lol nice hit man
Quit claiming ya hard, cuz bitches like you don’t get respect
Yeah ok I admit you have the heart……shaped tattoo on ya neck
Haha pretty sick n funny
This guy is dirty & I’m squashing his dreams of being MVP
It’s sick when your only burning desire was catching an STD
Meh okay-ish
You have zero game, but I pull bitches & could fill a room
Only time they’ll say you’re a fungi…..is taking a million shrooms
Nice wordplay here..decent punch
So this is where I’m confused, you keep saying it’s a guy thing
But I’ll start callin him lance armstrong, we all know you’re biking
Damn good wordplay again..witty hit dude
Leave tire marks all over king, theres no way he’s stopping me
I’ll write a book about driving over ya corpse & call it an auto biography
Very sick closer dude

Damn this battle was pretty good imo i have to say. Both came pretty hard and this battle wasnt a let down like some other champ matches i was expecting it to be a close battle and indeed it was. Amongst all the good punches ya both had there were some off ones that were pretty average...King u had some nice personals and Vulgar u had some witty shit which made this very difficult to chose but i think one battler came slightly harder and that was............
























Vulgar

[Networth]

This one was pretty interesting.. almost too close to call really...

For those who don't know: Vulgar = A. Karpis = Banned for biting

I should Stand-up this hoe, after this KO I would bet he quits
Got 200 points n he's Delirious if he thinks I aint takin' HALF!, like Eddie's Bitch
^okay okay..
I'm celebrity status, watch this star trek all over his face
Punch'll send him into light speed, see if Vulcan come down from space
^cool cool..
And Vulgar recently found out his chick's loyalty sucked
Cuz I don't mean she was in a Tough spot when I say she got Royally fucked
^nah, no connection../
Hate to bring the bitch up for four lines out of this battle
But my dick was so far down her throat, it looked like an adam's apple
^nah, hated the setup/
Dude'll get showered with punches til hes covered with pains
I'll evaporate this scrub..........and piss in the fucking puddle after it rains
^okay..
Dude connects soft, seems that you swing like a pussy on purpose
No surprise cuz Karp is know to pull punches.....out of everyone elses verses
^not hittin hard, the concept needed to be setup w/ more than an exxplanation,
Once I Divide ya point total in half, we know Vulgar is history
We won't see him in the after math, unless I decide to add insult to injury
^okay okay pretty cool..
I sling punches like automatic rounds flyin' straight at ya head
Knowin' Karp, even if dodging was an option, he'd still bite the bullet instead
^haha LOL...niice close.

v.s.

listen,

I’m killing the rankings & murdering king on the late night
So the only time he’ll be 1st….is in a hearse driving to his gravesite
^decentish..
& I heard your Gow’s biggest fan, plus isn’t it dumb too
How this fag is known for talking about War more than Sun Tzu
^coool one.. lol.
You don’t have the balls to battle vets, we know you’re scared
Cuz when I said grow a pair….this fruit literally tried to grow a pear
^ha, jus okay.
Quit claiming ya hard, cuz bitches like you don’t get respect
Yeah ok I admit you have the heart……shaped tattoo on ya neck
^haha.. okay..
This guy is dirty & I’m squashing his dreams of being MVP
It’s sick when your only burning desire was catching an STD
^oh no, big miss creatively here..
You have zero game, but I pull bitches & could fill a room
Only time they’ll say you’re a fungi…..is taking a million shrooms
^hell naw, big miss here, the setup need to be better.
So this is where I’m confused, you keep saying it’s a guy thing
But I’ll start callin him lance armstrong, we all know you’re biking
^hahaha, niice.
Leave tire marks all over king, theres no way he’s stopping me
I’ll write a book about driving over ya corpse & call it an auto biography
^decent close..bad setup..

16.

But yeah, Ima have to V/ Vulgar slightly for more hard hit, you both came with some creative bars minus bad setups and the comedy aspect played a big factor in both verses.. Vulgar's hit were a bit funnier when they connected so, he gets my vote this time.. cool Champ Match yall

[Advantage]

i should Stand-up this hoe, after this KO I would bet he quits
Got 200 points n he's Delirious if he thinks I aint takin' HALF!, like Eddie's Bitch
not sure where eddies came from?
I'm celebrity status, watch this star trek all over his face
Punch'll send him into light speed, see if Vulcan come down from space
got that nameplay but punch wasnt all that
And Vulgar recently found out his chick's loyalty sucked
Cuz I don't mean she was in a Tough spot when I say she got Royally fucked
lol ........wait a min lol
Hate to bring the bitch up for four lines out of this battle
But my dick was so far down her throat, it looked like an adam's apple
haha
Dude'll get showered with punches til hes covered with pains
I'll evaporate this scrub..........and piss in the fucking puddle after it rains
meh
Dude connects soft, seems that you swing like a pussy on purpose
No surprise cuz Karp is know to pull punches.....out of everyone elses verses
dope personal
Once I Divide ya point total in half, we know Vulgar is history
We won't see him in the after math, unless I decide to add insult to injury
good flow on this
I sling punches like automatic rounds flyin' straight at ya head
Knowin' Karp, even if dodging was an option, he'd still bite the bullet instead
cool flip

vs

I’m killing the rankings & murdering king on the late night
So the only time he’ll be 1st….is in a hearse driving to his gravesite
haha ill opened flip
& I heard your Gow’s biggest fan, plus isn’t it dumb too
How this fag is known for talking about War more than Sun Tzu
ha
You don’t have the balls to battle vets, we know you’re scared
Cuz when I said grow a pair….this fruit literally tried to grow a pear
lmfao a+ for that shit omg
Quit claiming ya hard, cuz bitches like you don’t get respect
Yeah ok I admit you have the heart……shaped tattoo on ya neck
weak
This guy is dirty & I’m squashing his dreams of being MVP
It’s sick when your only burning desire was catching an STD
nah
You have zero game, but I pull bitches & could fill a room
Only time they’ll say you’re a fungi…..is taking a million shrooms
lol thats funny G
So this is where I’m confused, you keep saying it’s a guy thing
But I’ll start callin him lance armstrong, we all know you’re biking
cool
Leave tire marks all over king, theres no way he’s stopping me
I’ll write a book about driving over ya corpse & call it an auto biography
dopenesssssssssssssssss

overall vulgar took this with witty fuckin conepts...good battle king just didnt pull it out of his pocket.....
i would give king a 7.3
and vulgar a 9.4
^better idea for ya
no hate
v/vulgar
plz rtf in sig