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Check in Wednesday
Verses due Friday
Winner will be new champ
Vulgar
Mimic.
16 lines
Check in Wednesday
Verses due Friday
Winner will be new champ
Check.
your garbage & shouldn't be here
other than that...
check
Since your getting permantley banned anyway.... psst... dumb fuck.
Your a disgrace to FL, we never wanna hear what this gay bitch does at night,
N' i wouldn't be talkin ingredients, when Garlics, ...all the vets dicks on this site.
Yh, we made it to the Champ battle, but we'll never crown you boss,
Cuz, next time Arche draws the line, ...hopefully it's one u can't get across!
You bite alot of filler coward, so it's only right to lose your molars,
It's known gay faggit equips more strap-ons.. than attatching Wii controllers.
This transexuals gone too far, till the point he's acheivin a fuckin' lady figure,
Not resorting to bears when this dude put paddingtons, ..just to make his tits bigger.
I have proof for the future^, that this Karp is on the end of demands,In AIM Chat with Seyance.
Seyance One 7:08pm
everyone already knew dude
m
mystery was already tryna get him banned
mime12345678 7:12 pm
whats gonna happen?
Seyance One 7:12 pm
hes gonna get banned
Our 1st is too expose an embaress him, second is gettin him permantly banned!
KARP it's not official on the mag yet, but too all of Rapbattles it would be fitting,
to put him on 'Mc to look out for', not for talent, but incase any1's verse goes missin!
You should pray to all the fuckin' Gods, ..the way we brought you down to earth,
I won't hang u on my cross, i'll just let u suffer with ur parents dissapointment after birth!
Peeped ur only friend in your profile, what a surprise another biter Garr,
But i guess you can take ur two careers further, being gay whilst still biting Bars!
smh
How this loser went from LLL to FL champ match is a mystery…
Cuz the only title mimic deserves…’is worst battler in LLL history'
I get shit-faced drinking, but you know it’s hopeless when….
Mime gets shitfaced too, he’ll toss ya salad if you vote for him
Go AIM for votes and complain that you’re in a shitty position,
He’s only a happy camper….when describing his living conditions
I seen ya verse for Kon & you don’t have the skills to back it up
^We don’t need Cowboy haters to say Emmitt....was wack as fuck
Official, Pigsty, and Mime, <-- I’m exposing him this one time
He has over 5 aliases & barely made a name in the front lines….
That shit is fishy but given my history, I’m not the type to mention
But I bet his IP check raised more red flags then a Pyru convention
Your soft, he follows me around like a twitter problem…
We know your tough as nails….with hot pink & glitter on them
I beat you 3x, I can understand why you act bitter to me
But you should just thank God for being here…..literally
don't get it, don't vote...
Your a disgrace to FL, we never wanna hear what this gay bitch does at night,
N' i wouldn't be talkin ingredients, when Garlics, ...all the vets dicks on this site.
lol...aight
Yh, we made it to the Champ battle, but we'll never crown you boss,
Cuz, next time Arche draws the line, ...hopefully it's one u can't get across!
aight
You bite alot of filler coward, so it's only right to lose your molars,
It's known gay faggit equips more strap-ons.. than attatching Wii controllers.
lol
This transexuals gone too far, till the point he's acheivin a fuckin' lady figure,
Not resorting to bears when this dude put paddingtons, ..just to make his tits bigger.
meh..nuff of the gay jokes.
I have proof for the future^, that this Karp is on the end of demands,
Our 1st is too expose an embaress him, second is gettin him permantly banned!
meh..aight
KARP it's not official on the mag yet, but too all of Rapbattles it would be fitting,
to put him on 'Mc to look out for', not for talent, but incase any1's verse goes missin!
lol
You should pray to all the fuckin' Gods, ..the way we brought you down to earth,
I won't hang u on my cross, i'll just let u suffer with ur parents dissapointment after birth!
meh..na
Peeped ur only friend in your profile, what a surprise another biter Garr,
But i guess you can take ur two careers further, being gay whilst still biting Bars!
meh
.....vs
How this loser went from LLL to FL champ match is a mystery…
Cuz the only title mimic deserves…’is worst battler in LLL history'
meh, aight but weak for a opener
I get shit-faced drinking, but you know it’s hopeless when….
Mime gets shitfaced too, he’ll toss ya salad if you vote for him
lol
Go AIM for votes and complain that you’re in a shitty position,
He’s only a happy camper….when describing his living conditions
lol
I seen ya verse for Kon & you don’t have the skills to back it up
^We don’t need Cowboy haters to say Emmitt....was wack as fuck
aight
Official, Pigsty, and Mime, <-- I’m exposing him this one time
He has over 5 aliases & barely made a name in the front lines….
aight
That shit is fishy but given my history, I’m not the type to mention
But I bet his IP check raised more red flags then a Pyru convention
meh
Your soft, he follows me around like a twitter problem…
We know your tough as nails….with hot pink & glitter on them
lol...but a lil mehish
I beat you 3x, I can understand why you act bitter to me
But you should just thank God for being here…..literally
lol...
pretty good battle both had some witty concepts wit sum humorous lines mimic your elavating I'm seein more creative lines from u this was an aight verse u had to many gay concepts but ya verse still was aight u can maybe take some words out os um of ya lines to make the pucnh have a better sting but str8 verse...vul u had an aight verse to you'be been doin ya thing lately I've seen a lot of witty concepts from u this month overall aight battle here fairly close but I felt Vul got this for being more wittier.
The words I write are oxygen to greatness.
Your a disgrace to FL, we never wanna hear what this gay bitch does at night,
N' i wouldn't be talkin ingredients, when Garlics, ...all the vets dicks on this site.
lol nice
Yh, we made it to the Champ battle, but we'll never crown you boss,
Cuz, next time Arche draws the line, ...hopefully it's one u can't get across!
could have been flipped better
You bite alot of filler coward, so it's only right to lose your molars,
It's known gay faggit equips more strap-ons.. than attatching Wii controllers.
the homo shit is played, but nice flip
This transexuals gone too far, till the point he's acheivin a fuckin' lady figure,
Not resorting to bears when this dude put paddingtons, ..just to make his tits bigger.
dido
I have proof for the future^, that this Karp is on the end of demands,
Our 1st is too expose an embaress him, second is gettin him permantly banned!
not enough sting
KARP it's not official on the mag yet, but too all of Rapbattles it would be fitting,
to put him on 'Mc to look out for', not for talent, but incase any1's verse goes missin!
lol little wordy but nice
You should pray to all the fuckin' Gods, ..the way we brought you down to earth,
I won't hang u on my cross, i'll just let u suffer with ur parents dissapointment after birth!
not feeling
Peeped ur only friend in your profile, what a surprise another biter Garr,
But i guess you can take ur two careers further, being gay whilst still biting Bars!
eh closer
vs
How this loser went from LLL to FL champ match is a mystery…
Cuz the only title mimic deserves…’is worst battler in LLL history'
ok
I get shit-faced drinking, but you know it’s hopeless when….
Mime gets shitfaced too, he’ll toss ya salad if you vote for him
kind of a played concept but still connected well
Go AIM for votes and complain that you’re in a shitty position,
He’s only a happy camper….when describing his living conditions
eh
I seen ya verse for Kon & you don’t have the skills to back it up
^We don’t need Cowboy haters to say Emmitt....was wack as fuck
lol
Official, Pigsty, and Mime, <-- I’m exposing him this one time
He has over 5 aliases & barely made a name in the front lines….
nice
That shit is fishy but given my history, I’m not the type to mention
But I bet his IP check raised more red flags then a Pyru convention
not feeling this one, didn't hit hard at all IMO
Your soft, he follows me around like a twitter problem…
We know your tough as nails….with hot pink & glitter on them
lol
I beat you 3x, I can understand why you act bitter to me
But you should just thank God for being here…..literally
nice closer
pretty decent battle, but i think Vulgar was still a clear winner..his drop was much smoother, and he was more consistent throughout. I think Mimic's verse got to be too wordy at times and that was definitely a negative.
vote/ Vulgar
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...279/index.html
The Last Level
Your a disgrace to FL, we never wanna hear what this gay bitch does at night,
N' i wouldn't be talkin ingredients, when Garlics, ...all the vets dicks on this site.
lol nice
Yh, we made it to the Champ battle, but we'll never crown you boss,
Cuz, next time Arche draws the line, ...hopefully it's one u can't get across!
could have been flipped better
You bite alot of filler coward, so it's only right to lose your molars,
It's known gay faggit equips more strap-ons.. than attatching Wii controllers.
the homo shit is played, but nice flip
This transexuals gone too far, till the point he's acheivin a fuckin' lady figure,
Not resorting to bears when this dude put paddingtons, ..just to make his tits bigger.
dido
I have proof for the future^, that this Karp is on the end of demands,
Our 1st is too expose an embaress him, second is gettin him permantly banned!
not enough sting
KARP it's not official on the mag yet, but too all of Rapbattles it would be fitting,
to put him on 'Mc to look out for', not for talent, but incase any1's verse goes missin!
lol little wordy but nice
You should pray to all the fuckin' Gods, ..the way we brought you down to earth,
I won't hang u on my cross, i'll just let u suffer with ur parents dissapointment after birth!
not feeling
Peeped ur only friend in your profile, what a surprise another biter Garr,
But i guess you can take ur two careers further, being gay whilst still biting Bars!
eh closer
vs
How this loser went from LLL to FL champ match is a mystery…
Cuz the only title mimic deserves…’is worst battler in LLL history'
ok
I get shit-faced drinking, but you know it’s hopeless when….
Mime gets shitfaced too, he’ll toss ya salad if you vote for him
kind of a played concept but still connected well
Go AIM for votes and complain that you’re in a shitty position,
He’s only a happy camper….when describing his living conditions
eh
I seen ya verse for Kon & you don’t have the skills to back it up
^We don’t need Cowboy haters to say Emmitt....was wack as fuck
lol
Official, Pigsty, and Mime, <-- I’m exposing him this one time
He has over 5 aliases & barely made a name in the front lines….
nice
That shit is fishy but given my history, I’m not the type to mention
But I bet his IP check raised more red flags then a Pyru convention
not feeling this one, didn't hit hard at all IMO
Your soft, he follows me around like a twitter problem…
We know your tough as nails….with hot pink & glitter on them
lol
I beat you 3x, I can understand why you act bitter to me
But you should just thank God for being here…..literally
nice closer
pretty decent battle, but i think Vulgar was still a clear winner..his drop was much smoother, and he was more consistent throughout. I think Mimic's verse got to be too wordy at times and that was definitely a negative.
vote/ Vulgar
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...279/index.html
The Last Level
Your a disgrace to FL, we never wanna hear what this gay bitch does at night,
N' i wouldn't be talkin ingredients, when Garlics, ...all the vets dicks on this site.
decent name/wordplay
Yh, we made it to the Champ battle, but we'll never crown you boss,
Cuz, next time Arche draws the line, ...hopefully it's one u can't get across!
Meh
You bite alot of filler coward, so it's only right to lose your molars,
It's known gay faggit equips more strap-ons.. than attatching Wii controllers.
No
This transexuals gone too far, till the point he's acheivin a fuckin' lady figure,
Not resorting to bears when this dude put paddingtons, ..just to make his tits bigger.
No.
I have proof for the future^, that this Karp is on the end of demands,
Our 1st is too expose an embaress him, second is gettin him permantly banned!
Meh.
KARP it's not official on the mag yet, but too all of Rapbattles it would be fitting,
to put him on 'Mc to look out for', not for talent, but incase any1's verse goes missin!
Meh.
You should pray to all the fuckin' Gods, ..the way we brought you down to earth,
I won't hang u on my cross, i'll just let u suffer with ur parents dissapointment after birth!
No.
Peeped ur only friend in your profile, what a surprise another biter Garr,
But i guess you can take ur two careers further, being gay whilst still biting Bars!
Ehh...I'm assuming Bar is his only friend cause I'm to lazy to look, decent.
Vs
How this loser went from LLL to FL champ match is a mystery…
Cuz the only title mimic deserves…’is worst battler in LLL history'
played and whack. horrible opener.
I get shit-faced drinking, but you know it’s hopeless when….
Mime gets shitfaced too, he’ll toss ya salad if you vote for him
Meh.
Go AIM for votes and complain that you’re in a shitty position,
He’s only a happy camper….when describing his living conditions
Meh.
I seen ya verse for Kon & you don’t have the skills to back it up
^We don’t need Cowboy haters to say Emmitt....was wack as fuck
Nice.
Official, Pigsty, and Mime, <-- I’m exposing him this one time
He has over 5 aliases & barely made a name in the front lines….
Decent.
That shit is fishy but given my history, I’m not the type to mention
But I bet his IP check raised more red flags then a Pyru convention
No.
Your soft, he follows me around like a twitter problem…
We know your tough as nails….with hot pink & glitter on them
lol Nice. kinda played but a good flip.
I beat you 3x, I can understand why you act bitter to me
But you should just thank God for being here…..literally
Meh.
Overall: 1rst, Karp who helped you reword those concepts? lmao, your concepts were meh'ish at best but your wording was very nice. Mime, your wording was horrible, it was almost painful to read your verse, if you didn't have decent concepts I probably would've quit reading about the 4th line. Overall this was a weak battle for a champ match. Imma have to give it to the soon to be banned (again) Karpis for being consistent and having way better wording.
V/ Vulgar
Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.
seriously Mime? I thought you were better than that...
-Arch
Last edited by The Archetype; January 26th, 2010 at 05:59 AM
Your a disgrace to FL, we never wanna hear what this gay bitch does at night,
N' i wouldn't be talkin ingredients, when Garlics, ...all the vets dicks on this site.
good open, but sting wasn't what I hoped
Yh, we made it to the Champ battle, but we'll never crown you boss,
Cuz, next time Arche draws the line, ...hopefully it's one u can't get across!
nah, almost a slight to arch
You bite alot of filler coward, so it's only right to lose your molars,
It's known gay faggit equips more strap-ons.. than attatching Wii controllers.
clever, liked this line alot, good shit
This transexuals gone too far, till the point he's acheivin a fuckin' lady figure,
Not resorting to bears when this dude put paddingtons, ..just to make his tits bigger.
again clever word play offffffff paddingtons, liked
I have proof for the future^, that this Karp is on the end of demands,
Our 1st is too expose an embaress him, second is gettin him permantly banned!
bitchmade, like i'ma get u banned type shit is weak
KARP it's not official on the mag yet, but too all of Rapbattles it would be fitting,
to put him on 'Mc to look out for', not for talent, but incase any1's verse goes missin!
yeah
You should pray to all the fuckin' Gods, ..the way we brought you down to earth,
I won't hang u on my cross, i'll just let u suffer with ur parents dissapointment after birth!
played out
Peeped ur only friend in your profile, what a surprise another biter Garr,
But i guess you can take ur two careers further, being gay whilst still biting Bars!
whilst, what are you spittin, old english? meh
v.
How this loser went from LLL to FL champ match is a mystery…
Cuz the only title mimic deserves…’is worst battler in LLL history'
ok
I get shit-faced drinking, but you know it’s hopeless when….
Mime gets shitfaced too, he’ll toss ya salad if you vote for him
funny shit
Go AIM for votes and complain that you’re in a shitty position,
He’s only a happy camper….when describing his living conditions
haha
I seen ya verse for Kon & you don’t have the skills to back it up
^We don’t need Cowboy haters to say Emmitt....was wack as fuck
old rhyme, but nice cowboy/kon tie in
Official, Pigsty, and Mime, <-- I’m exposing him this one time
He has over 5 aliases & barely made a name in the front lines….
hard hit
That shit is fishy but given my history, I’m not the type to mention
But I bet his IP check raised more red flags then a Pyru convention
keepin it real wit the ur own fucked history, red flag shit was ill
Your soft, he follows me around like a twitter problem…
We know your tough as nails….with hot pink & glitter on them
pretty funny shit, nice
I beat you 3x, I can understand why you act bitter to me
But you should just thank God for being here…..literally
ok
Mim was difficult to really feel, I got what you were trying to come across with, but it wasn't shocking and u gotta think if you said that shit to him face to face would anyone give a fuck, answer probly not.
Vulg was funny overall, you stung him some, but primarily u were hilarious and sinical, I felt ur shit, if you said it to him in real life, Id laugh.
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....Step Your Rap Game Up....
"Pop" mufukrs from Oklahoma like Coca-cola
I'ma extra terrestrial, grabbin' my testicles, these other rappers left overs, Wrap'em up like vegetables
Your a disgrace to FL, we never wanna hear what this gay bitch does at night,
N' i wouldn't be talkin ingredients, when Garlics, ...all the vets dicks on this site.
^^cool play.
Yh, we made it to the Champ battle, but we'll never crown you boss,
Cuz, next time Arche draws the line, ...hopefully it's one u can't get across!
^^ehh okay.
You bite alot of filler coward, so it's only right to lose your molars,
It's known gay faggit equips more strap-ons.. than attatching Wii controllers.
^^nah.
This transexuals gone too far, till the point he's acheivin a fuckin' lady figure,
Not resorting to bears when this dude put paddingtons, ..just to make his tits bigger.
^^nope.
I have proof for the future^, that this Karp is on the end of demands,
Our 1st is too expose an embaress him, second is gettin him permantly banned!
^^no.
KARP it's not official on the mag yet, but too all of Rapbattles it would be fitting,
to put him on 'Mc to look out for', not for talent, but incase any1's verse goes missin!
^^lol this was sick.
You should pray to all the fuckin' Gods, ..the way we brought you down to earth,
I won't hang u on my cross, i'll just let u suffer with ur parents dissapointment after birth!
^^noo.
Peeped ur only friend in your profile, what a surprise another biter Garr,
But i guess you can take ur two careers further, being gay whilst still biting Bars!
^^decent.
vs
How this loser went from LLL to FL champ match is a mystery…
Cuz the only title mimic deserves…’is worst battler in LLL history'
^^okay..
I get shit-faced drinking, but you know it’s hopeless when….
Mime gets shitfaced too, he’ll toss ya salad if you vote for him
^^nah.
Go AIM for votes and complain that you’re in a shitty position,
He’s only a happy camper….when describing his living conditions
^^lol okay.
I seen ya verse for Kon & you don’t have the skills to back it up
^We don’t need Cowboy haters to say Emmitt....was wack as fuck
^^aight.
Official, Pigsty, and Mime, <-- I’m exposing him this one time
He has over 5 aliases & barely made a name in the front lines….
^^this was sickk.
That shit is fishy but given my history, I’m not the type to mention
But I bet his IP check raised more red flags then a Pyru convention
^^lol haha cool.
Your soft, he follows me around like a twitter problem…
We know your tough as nails….with hot pink & glitter on them
^^lmao alright.
I beat you 3x, I can understand why you act bitter to me
But you should just thank God for being here…..literally
^^this was decent closer.
V/Vulgar
Pretty obvious he takes it.
Was more consistent and just came harder.
Mime, you had a couple of cool lines but not enough.
Trapped within the lights of the city..
Where it looks full of life but inside it's all empty..
And from outside it's all tempting..
What..it's all lies upon entry..
:noor:
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