FL HW Champ Match: Barcotic Vs Camoflawge

[Mafioso.]

Now I'm forced to shed some light on the truth, it's kind of a dark thing
I'd tell him to show his true colors, but I've seen enuff pink in Arch's sig..
He thinks he's a teacher of text battling but let's put the frontin' aside
..cuz if he were to tutor..fart or even shit, it'd resemble one of his lines..
He must like to hide who he really is, he sure as hell ain't showin' much
..but he'll come out of his shell one day, too bad his closet's bolted shut..

.....vs

this vets grinnin but when all's said n done..my texts winnin
and he'll just take the boat back n keep fishin for 'cepts in it


n bar's droppin champion verses..not many spit as sick as dun
..but...
its only a matter of time before we find where he bit them from

hes a popular one, look at all the bitches sayn stuff to this fruit
sluts chasin him and yellin hey u got appeal...stuck to ur boot
he thought he had it but the bitch is wrong.. acting like he kissin on
tits n thongs but the only thing dude got upstairs is his sis n mom

yo on sum real shit this was a good battle I wish all FL was like this....this is why i think they should bring EFL back so we can have more battles like this...but yo bar nothing new u always got sum creative clever shit in your verses the wordplay and structure was on point as usual keep doing ya thing
camo-this is prolly one of the best verses I've seen from u u can tell u wanted this win u also had some creative shit in your verse the wordplay was on point to but just post the verse regular no need to post it center wise...but yo cam i gotta respect the fact that u came hard with good bars close battle but no hate i gotta give it to camo he suprised me v/camo

[.deadproof.]

Barcotic

We're battling for a cause and people are supportin' this weak joke 
..they even leave campaigns..in the back of his throat for each vote..
-good opener.. good flow to the punch
Now I'm forced to shed some light on the truth, it's kind of a dark thing
..I'd tell him to show his true colors, but I've seen enuff pink in Arch's sig..
-no.. sayin a dude wears pink doesn't mean anything..  
He thinks he's a teacher of text battling but let's put the frontin' aside
..cuz if he were to tutor..fart or even shit, it'd resemble one of his lines..
-nice wordplay.. nice punch
He must like to hide who he really is, he sure as hell ain't showin' much
..but he'll come out of his shell one day, too bad his closet's bolted shut..
-nice
This is MY kingdom and I'm rulin' it like King Arthur, yes it's proven
..and if nobody likes Camelot, then I'm sure they loved his execution....
-nice closer

VS

CaMoFLaWGe

this vets grinnin but when all's said n done..my texts winnin
and he'll just take the boat back n keep fishin for 'cepts in it
-nice I know what u mean..
n bar's droppin champion verses..not many spit as sick as dun
..but...
its only a matter of time before we find where he bit them from
-haha continuing on the biting.. nice one
this fag plays hockey cause it involves balls n he needs sticks
and wit that butterfly style u know he drops to his knees quick
-good one, talkin bout hockey goalies
hes a popular one, look at all the bitches sayn stuff to this fruit
sluts chasin him and yellin hey u got appeal...stuck to ur boot
-great wordplay, nice way to punch, using fruit in your set up and punch very nice
he thought he had it but the bitch is wrong.. acting like he kissin on
tits n thongs but the only thing dude got upstairs is his sis n mom
-nice personal about what he said in chat.. nice way to close it out.

Very hard decision as this was one of the best battles I've ever read. Barcotic cane hard with his opener and closer, barely better than camo said, both u guys had great punches in every single line but bar, your second bar, about the pink, that didn't really hit all that hard, and Camo stayed with all his lines, I'll give credit to the wordplay used by barcotic but I'm pretty sure u said the tutor thing somewhere else, closer was a+, camo on the other hand,  used wordplay and greaat personals, which barcotic lacked, so with that being said, I'm giving this vote to Camo.. For hitting in everysingle bar.. personals, and concepts, alright yall.. peace out and g/L in later battles.. 

VOTE /camo 

[Vallus]

Vote - camo

Bar had a really solid verse but it was kinda simple and lacked
the real punch to it needed to take this...personals wise
he had really solid wordplay, set ups and executions
but so did camo..I feel though that camo had better
personals when bar had basically none and went harder
because of it....it gave is punches the edge needed to take this
bar had the best and worst lines of the match...
if he would have had a personal or two it may have been diff

[Ra Ill]

We're battling for a cause and people are supportin' this weak joke
..they even leave campaigns..in the back of his throat for each vote..
nice
Now I'm forced to shed some light on the truth, it's kind of a dark thing
..I'd tell him to show his true colors, but I've seen enuff pink in Arch's sig..
ok
He thinks he's a teacher of text battling but let's put the frontin' aside
..cuz if he were to tutor..fart or even shit, it'd resemble one of his lines..
nice
He must like to hide who he really is, he sure as hell ain't showin' much
..but he'll come out of his shell one day, too bad his closet's bolted shut..
ok
This is MY kingdom and I'm rulin' it like King Arthur, yes it's proven
..and if nobody likes Camelot, then I'm sure they loved his execution....
nice

vs

this vets grinnin but when all's said n done..my texts winnin
and he'll just take the boat back n keep fishin for 'cepts in it
ok
n bar's droppin champion verses..not many spit as sick as dun
..but...
its only a matter of time before we find where he bit them from
ok
this fag plays hockey cause it involves balls n he needs sticks
and wit that butterfly style u know he drops to his knees quick
meh
hes a popular one, look at all the bitches sayn stuff to this fruit
sluts chasin him and yellin hey u got appeal...stuck to ur boot
nice
he thought he had it but the bitch is wrong.. acting like he kissin on
tits n thongs but the only thing dude got upstairs is his sis n mom
ok

vote - bar

this was a cool battle i was feeling bar shit as a whole he had me laughing
cam was cool to keep the shit up though props to both

[MadJab]

We're battling for a cause and people are supportin' this weak joke
..they even leave campaigns..in the back of his throat for each vote..
--nice wordplay
Now I'm forced to shed some light on the truth, it's kind of a dark thing
..I'd tell him to show his true colors, but I've seen enuff pink in Arch's sig..
--not diggin
He thinks he's a teacher of text battling but let's put the frontin' aside
..cuz if he were to tutor..fart or even shit, it'd resemble one of his lines..
--eh
He must like to hide who he really is, he sure as hell ain't showin' much
..but he'll come out of his shell one day, too bad his closet's bolted shut..
--alright
This is MY kingdom and I'm rulin' it like King Arthur, yes it's proven
..and if nobody likes Camelot, then I'm sure they loved his execution....
-strong finisher

vs

this vets grinnin but when all's said n done..my texts winnin
and he'll just take the boat back n keep fishin for 'cepts in it
--ehh

n bar's droppin champion verses..not many spit as sick as dun
..but...
its only a matter of time before we find where he bit them from
-ok
this fag plays hockey cause it involves balls n he needs sticks
and wit that butterfly style u know he drops to his knees quick
-nice
hes a popular one, look at all the bitches sayn stuff to this fruit
sluts chasin him and yellin hey u got appeal...stuck to ur boot
-sick
he thought he had it but the bitch is wrong.. acting like he kissin on
tits n thongs but the only thing dude got upstairs is his sis n mom
-ehh


pretty close battle. hits and misses for both spitters. i look at as the following

opener:goes to bar..sick wordplay, flowed well.. Camo's was just eh, but gave him a little more umph considering it was a personal
2nd bar: just couldnt feel Bars second bar and camo spit an ok rhyme so vote to him so it went to camo
3rd bar: Barcotic had some ok wordplay but i was feeling that hockey concept/twist from camo camo gets this one
4th bar:a closet line vs a nice wordplay.. 4th bar goes to camo for the nice "appeal"
closer: definitely goes to bar.. was way too sick to pass up

although bar had the strong opener/closer, Camo's verse was solid all around and had just enough consistency to get my vote


vote camo

[..Compa..]

Barcotic


We're battling for a cause and people are supportin' this weak joke
..they even leave campaigns..in the back of his throat for each vote.
..Heh Very solid name play, I guess I was the few who felt you used this well..

Now I'm forced to shed some light on the truth, it's kind of a dark thing
..I'd tell him to show his true colors, but I've seen enuff pink in Arch's sig..
...Lmao! Most underrated bar right here. Everything was set up great for a personal..

He thinks he's a teacher of text battling but let's put the frontin' aside
..cuz if he were to tutor..fart or even shit, it'd resemble one of his lines..
..Lol word play punch, funny and executed well..

He must like to hide who he really is, he sure as hell ain't showin' much
..but he'll come out of his shell one day, too bad his closet's bolted shut..
..For a played concept this still made me chuckle, but still it was above eh though..

This is MY kingdom and I'm rulin' it like King Arthur, yes it's proven
..and if nobody likes Camelot, then I'm sure they loved his execution....
..Solid on the name play once again, this was flipped well..

Camoflawge

this vets grinnin but when all's said n done..my texts winnin
and he'll just take the boat back n keep fishin for 'cepts in it
..Hmmm to be honest I got the personal but I felt it was missing something, overall though Decent-ish..

n bar's droppin champion verses..not many spit as sick as dun
..but...
its only a matter of time before we find where he bit them from.
..Naw I've seen this personal/concept at bar a couple of times, nor did I thought the flip was above average..

this fag plays hockey cause it involves balls n he needs sticks
and wit that butterfly style u know he drops to his knees quick
..Lmao though I know I've seen the butterfly/drops/knees concept before it got me rolling a bit, no doubt a good flip..

hes a popular one, look at all the bitches sayn stuff to this fruit
sluts chasin him and yellin hey u got appeal...stuck to ur boot
..Lol! Not bad on word play here made me laugh, kool flip..

he thought he had it but the bitch is wrong.. acting like he kissin on
tits n thongs but the only thing dude got upstairs is his sis n mom
..Heh I liked the upstairs concept, not a bad way to close..


Favorite Lines:

Barcotic

We're battling for a cause and people are supportin' this weak joke
..they even leave campaigns..in the back of his throat for each vote..
Now I'm forced to shed some light on the truth, it's kind of a dark thing
..I'd tell him to show his true colors, but I've seen enuff pink in Arch's sig..
He thinks he's a teacher of text battling but let's put the frontin' aside
..cuz if he were to tutor..fart or even shit, it'd resemble one of his lines..





Camoflawge

this fag plays hockey cause it involves balls n he needs sticks
and wit that butterfly style u know he drops to his knees quick
hes a popular one, look at all the bitches sayn stuff to this fruit
sluts chasin him and yellin hey u got appeal...stuck to ur boot



Overall Vote- Barcotic Ight I double read this twice. Well this was close but I think Bar's wording and execution gaved him the edge right here. Not saying Camo didn't as well, cause he did. Now I was looking at played concepts and how were they flipped and I gotta say, that one bar Camo had which I've seen before decreased his chances in winning my vote. For sure Camo took Personals though, but Bar edged out the Name/word plays. Punches I felt Bar took it by one bar really. Real close one overall to vote for though but I'm sticking with my vote, not bad fellas. Again I would of broke it down a little more better but man lol.

[Barcotic]

Just to be clear Camo.. atleast one of your crew members dropped a vote (Vallus), which doesn't count.. and that makes this 5-4 for me.. and beyond that, you swayed.. that alone is DQ'able.. but fuck the D.Q cuz you lossed anyway.. it's rediculous how close it was.. I think I'll stick to the league, where shit's actually legit and accurate....