Champion
Barcotic
Challenger
Camoflawge
Due Sunday by 11:59 (EASTERN)..
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Champion
Barcotic
Challenger
Camoflawge
Due Sunday by 11:59 (EASTERN)..
Normal FL rules apply....
10.. I'll be done soon....
Let's do this...
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Quick 10....
We're battling for a cause and people are supportin' this weak joke
..they even leave campaigns..in the back of his throat for each vote..
Now I'm forced to shed some light on the truth, it's kind of a dark thing
..I'd tell him to show his true colors, but I've seen enuff pink in Arch's sig..
He thinks he's a teacher of text battling but let's put the frontin' aside
..cuz if he were to tutor..fart or even shit, it'd resemble one of his lines..
He must like to hide who he really is, he sure as hell ain't showin' much
..but he'll come out of his shell one day, too bad his closet's bolted shut..
This is MY kingdom and I'm rulin' it like King Arthur, yes it's proven
..and if nobody likes Camelot, then I'm sure they loved his execution....
Last edited by Barcotic; July 26th, 2009 at 08:16 PM
Hurr goes nothing..... Thanks for the shot at the title Bar.
Originally Posted by Barcotic
and he'll just take the boat back n keep fishin for 'cepts in it
n bar's droppin champion verses..not many spit as sick as dun
..but...
its only a matter of time before we find where he bit them from
this fag plays hockey cause it involves balls n he needs sticks
and wit that butterfly style u know he drops to his knees quick
hes a popular one, look at all the bitches sayn stuff to this fruit
sluts chasin him and yellin hey u got appeal...stuck to ur boot
he thought he had it but the bitch is wrong.. acting like he kissin on
tits n thongs but the only thing dude got upstairs is his sis n mom
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Barcotic-
We're battling for a cause and people are supportin' this weak joke
..they even leave campaigns..in the back of his throat for each vote..
wordplay was played "campaigns" has nothing to do with actual pain in his throat, which makes that part played. punch was ok though.
Now I'm forced to shed some light on the truth, it's kind of a dark thing
..I'd tell him to show his true colors, but I've seen enuff pink in Arch's sig..
this was just ok, because the pink in his sig has a hot bitch, maybe if it was a dude. good attempt, didnt hit hard
He thinks he's a teacher of text battling but let's put the frontin' aside
..cuz if he were to tutor..fart or even shit, it'd resemble one of his lines..
this was good
I think he likes to hide who he really is, he sure as hell ain't showin' us
..but he'll come out of his shell one day, too bad his closet's bolted shut..
damn this was good
This is MY kingdom and I'm rulin' it like King Arthur, yes it's proven
..and if nobody likes Camelot, then I'm sure they loved his execution....
good closer
vs.
Camoflawge-
this vets grinnin but when all's said n done..my texts winnin
and he'll just take the boat back n keep fishin for 'cepts in it
this was just ok
n bar's droppin champion verses..not many spit as sick as dun
..but...
its only a matter of time before we find where he bit them from
good personal
this fag plays hockey cause it involves balls n he needs sticks
and wit that butterfly style u know he drops to his knees quick
this was decent
hes a popular one, look at all the bitches sayn stuff to this fruit
sluts chasin him and yellin hey u got appeal...stuck to ur boot
lol nice wordplay, good punch
he thought he had it but the bitch is wrong.. acting like he kissin on
tits n thongs but the only thing dude got upstairs is his sis n mom
pretty good closer
alright this was a good, close battle. the only thing this time that makes it close was your wording bar because for the first time in a long time, you got beat. and i dont wanna hear shit out of you. you had a decent verse. your first couple, three bars were played, the pink in his sig didnt work because the girl is hot and yeah i get what you're trying to say, but it just didnt work. the pain in his throat was good, but "campaigns" has nothing to do with that. that was played. the last two bars were dope though. the coming out of the closet line hit hard, that was perfect bar. however camo came with 2 decent bars and 3 good ones instead of 2 good ones and 3 decent ones compared to you. and besides that i feel camo was more consistent here. the fruit, appeal bar hit nicely with the wordplay and had a good punch to it. and the bar about where you bite your lines from was good too. people say you bite a lot of lines bar and than re-word them. so it's not truly biting, but it's damn near it, so that was a good personal. overall, for the first time, i'm going with someone other than you bar. this is a first, damn. camo takes this one by the hairs of his chinny chin chin.
v/Camo
[QUOTE=CaMoFLaWGe™;7165805]Hurr goes nothing..... Thanks for the shot at the title Bar.
this vets grinnin but when all's said n done..my texts winnin
and he'll just take the boat back n keep fishin for 'cepts in it
ok
n bar's droppin champion verses..not many spit as sick as dun
..but...
its only a matter of time before we find where he bit them from
decent
this fag plays hockey cause it involves balls n he needs sticks
and wit that butterfly style u know he drops to his knees quick
decent
hes a popular one, look at all the bitches sayn stuff to this fruit
sluts chasin him and yellin hey u got appeal...stuck to ur boot
mehh
he thought he had it but the bitch is wrong.. acting like he kissin on
tits n thongs but the only thing dude got upstairs is his sis n mom
okish
vs
We're battling for a cause and people are supportin' this weak joke
..they even leave campaigns..in the back of his throat for each vote..
mehh, ok
Now I'm forced to shed some light on the truth, it's kind of a dark thing
..I'd tell him to show his true colors, but I've seen enuff pink in Arch's sig..
lol
He thinks he's a teacher of text battling but let's put the frontin' aside
..cuz if he were to tutor..fart or even shit, it'd resemble one of his lines..
ive sen you use this before, and didnt like it then. same shit now
He must like to hide who he really is, he sure as hell ain't showin' much
..but he'll come out of his shell one day, too bad his closet's bolted shut..
mehh
This is MY kingdom and I'm rulin' it like King Arthur, yes it's proven
..and if nobody likes Camelot, then I'm sure they loved his execution....
nice
overall- much closer battle then i expected. camo came above what i expected for him, and bar came about as good as i figured he would. i've got to say in the end though that bar did more then enough to hold onto his title, he had 2 nice bars that won this one for him.
v/ Barcotic
A.rtificial I.ntelligence
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We're battling for a cause and people are supportin' this weak joke
..they even leave campaigns..in the back of his throat for each vote..
you used a similar concept to this one in your last champ match, but I'm feeling this one alot more because of the nameplay/wordplay...very nice.
Now I'm forced to shed some light on the truth, it's kind of a dark thing
..I'd tell him to show his true colors, but I've seen enuff pink in Arch's sig..
na, not really feeling this...could've been better but this seems like a filler bar to me...
He thinks he's a teacher of text battling but let's put the frontin' aside
..cuz if he were to tutor..fart or even shit, it'd resemble one of his lines..
lmao! I love fart jokes, guess that's why I like this one so much, nice wordplay...very good wording.
He must like to hide who he really is, he sure as hell ain't showin' much
..but he'll come out of his shell one day, too bad his closet's bolted shut..
meh, wasn't really feeling this one...I mean it was a good punch, wording was good...I just personally wasn't feeling it...kinda played imo...
This is MY kingdom and I'm rulin' it like King Arthur, yes it's proven
..and if nobody likes Camelot, then I'm sure they loved his execution....
lmao...very good nameplay/wordplay, and the wording was onpoint again...nice closer
Vs
this vets grinnin but when all's said n done..my texts winnin
and he'll just take the boat back n keep fishin for 'cepts in it
lol, ok'ish...pretty good personal off the quote...not great though...
n bar's droppin champion verses..not many spit as sick as dun
..but...
its only a matter of time before we find where he bit them from
imma say the same thing to you that I said to Bar in his last battle, so he knows I'm not biased...the biting concept is played...but I do like how you flipped this one with the championship verses...I like this bar...good flip...
this fag plays hockey cause it involves balls n he needs sticks
and wit that butterfly style u know he drops to his knees quick
naa, not feeling this one at all...
hes a popular one, look at all the bitches sayn stuff to this fruit
sluts chasin him and yellin hey u got appeal...stuck to ur boot
lol, good wordplay...good wording as well...
he thought he had it but the bitch is wrong.. acting like he kissin on
tits n thongs but the only thing dude got upstairs is his sis n mom
this could've been alot harsher, as a closer you should changed the wording to make it alot harsher...as it is, it's ok...but it had alot more potential...good personal though...
This was a close battle...both came very good, and I think it lived up to the Championship Match monicre...both came with good wordplay and punches, but I'm going to have to give it to Bar for having the nameplay, that was the deciding factor imo...he had some very good nameplay/wordplay punches that pulled him ahead...Very good battle though, nice verses from both.
Vote = Barcotic
Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.
Barcotic
We're battling for a cause and people are supportin' this weak joke
..they even leave campaigns..in the back of his throat for each vote..
-good opener.. good flow to the punch
Now I'm forced to shed some light on the truth, it's kind of a dark thing
..I'd tell him to show his true colors, but I've seen enuff pink in Arch's sig..
-no.. sayin a dude wears pink doesn't mean anything..
He thinks he's a teacher of text battling but let's put the frontin' aside
..cuz if he were to tutor..fart or even shit, it'd resemble one of his lines..
-nice wordplay.. nice punch
He must like to hide who he really is, he sure as hell ain't showin' much
..but he'll come out of his shell one day, too bad his closet's bolted shut..
-nice
This is MY kingdom and I'm rulin' it like King Arthur, yes it's proven
..and if nobody likes Camelot, then I'm sure they loved his execution....
-nice closer
VS
CaMoFLaWGe
this vets grinnin but when all's said n done..my texts winnin
and he'll just take the boat back n keep fishin for 'cepts in it
-nice I know what u mean..
n bar's droppin champion verses..not many spit as sick as dun
..but...
its only a matter of time before we find where he bit them from
-haha continuing on the biting.. nice one
this fag plays hockey cause it involves balls n he needs sticks
and wit that butterfly style u know he drops to his knees quick
-good one, talkin bout hockey goalies
hes a popular one, look at all the bitches sayn stuff to this fruit
sluts chasin him and yellin hey u got appeal...stuck to ur boot
-great wordplay, nice way to punch, using fruit in your set up and punch very nice
he thought he had it but the bitch is wrong.. acting like he kissin on
tits n thongs but the only thing dude got upstairs is his sis n mom
-nice personal about what he said in chat.. nice way to close it out.
[BVery hard decision as this was one of the best battles I've ever read. Barcotic cane hard with his opener and closer, barely better than camo said, both u guys had great punches in every single line but bar, your second bar, about the pink, that didn't really hit all that hard, and Camo stayed with all his lines, I'll give credit to the wordplay used by barcotic but I'm pretty sure u said the tutor thing somewhere else, closer was a+, camo on the other hand, used wordplay and greaat personals, which barcotic lacked, so with that being said, I'm giving this vote to Camo.. For hitting in everysingle bar.. personals, and concepts, alright yall.. peace out and g/L in later battles..
VOTE /camo
][/B]
For years there's been surprise horses in this stable
Just 6 wins in, I'm the realest nigga on this label
[QUOTE=King Ancel;7165838]i agree, bar took this one but just barely, both came with the punches, personals, and wordplay but bar came off a lil stronger. Camo, if u keep it up..you'll prolly end up champin one of these days
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We're battling for a cause and people are supportin' this weak joke
..they even leave campaigns..in the back of his throat for each vote..
okay
Now I'm forced to shed some light on the truth, it's kind of a dark thing
..I'd tell him to show his true colors, but I've seen enuff pink in Arch's sig..
lol
He thinks he's a teacher of text battling but let's put the frontin' aside
..cuz if he were to tutor..fart or even shit, it'd resemble one of his lines..
eh, feels played.
He must like to hide who he really is, he sure as hell ain't showin' much
..but he'll come out of his shell one day, too bad his closet's bolted shut..
eh, okay at best.
This is MY kingdom and I'm rulin' it like King Arthur, yes it's proven
..and if nobody likes Camelot, then I'm sure they loved his execution....
lol nice...
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Was gone for a minute, but back this second.
FUCK MY BAD, Heres second half...
this vets grinnin but when all's said n done..my texts winnin
and he'll just take the boat back n keep fishin for 'cepts in it
n bar's droppin champion verses..not many spit as sick as dun
..but...
its only a matter of time before we find where he bit them from
okay
this fag plays hockey cause it involves balls n he needs sticks
and wit that butterfly style u know he drops to his knees quick
lol..nice
hes a popular one, look at all the bitches sayn stuff to this fruit
sluts chasin him and yellin hey u got appeal...stuck to ur boot
lol again, nice
he thought he had it but the bitch is wrong.. acting like he kissin on
tits n thongs but the only thing dude got upstairs is his sis n mom
eh, meh-ish.
Honestly this was close , Really close. I liked acouple bars from both but to be completely honest I'm gonna go with Camo... seem'd like his were harder hitting.
v// camo,
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Was gone for a minute, but back this second.
We're battling for a cause and people are supportin' this weak joke
..they even leave campaigns..in the back of his throat for each vote..
lol nice
Now I'm forced to shed some light on the truth, it's kind of a dark thing
..I'd tell him to show his true colors, but I've seen enuff pink in Arch's sig..
lmao... nice
He thinks he's a teacher of text battling but let's put the frontin' aside
..cuz if he were to tutor..fart or even shit, it'd resemble one of his lines..
ummm.... ok
He must like to hide who he really is, he sure as hell ain't showin' much
..but he'll come out of his shell one day, too bad his closet's bolted shut..
I like this
This is MY kingdom and I'm rulin' it like King Arthur, yes it's proven
..and if nobody likes Camelot, then I'm sure they loved his execution....
good closer
this vets grinnin but when all's said n done..my texts winnin
and he'll just take the boat back n keep fishin for 'cepts in it
umm ok
n bar's droppin champion verses..not many spit as sick as dun
..but...
its only a matter of time before we find where he bit them from
ok, now were talkin...
this fag plays hockey cause it involves balls n he needs sticks
and wit that butterfly style u know he drops to his knees quick
ok
hes a popular one, look at all the bitches sayn stuff to this fruit
sluts chasin him and yellin hey u got appeal...stuck to ur boot
lol okay
he thought he had it but the bitch is wrong.. acting like he kissin on
tits n thongs but the only thing dude got upstairs is his sis n mom
lol okay...
close one.... this was a good battle, in the end i think bar got this
so VOTE: bar
ROFL wow... Great votes guys keep 'em coming.
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wtf you quotin me for bitch....
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