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2nd verse was freestyle....
i will return feed
links comin soon
[soundclick]7871811[/soundclick]
2nd verse was freestyle....
i will return feed
links comin soon
Nice drop mayne, it could of sounded better quality wise in my opinion, but thats something i struggle with. Definetly sounds like you got alot that you wanted to get off the chest, so thats cool fo sho mayne. Good stuff.
RTF?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...var=&p=7189439
Last edited by Fo Twenty; August 10th, 2009 at 03:24 AM
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Hip-Hop Ain't Dead, It lives in the North!
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I like the intro. beat is creepy in a emotional way, i like it. Verses were good. Cuts out suddenly tho.
Nice track, just work on ur flow and delivery a tad, it's always good to improve shit even the little stuff right.
Good track, emotional. I like it dogg.
this was decent..for some reason it seemed like the quality was distorted somehow..like when you'd pause it would sound like the mic cut out and came back on..flow was a bit shaky make sure you work on your delivery as well because even tho this track was deep..i couldnt really feel what you were saying so it made it boring real quick.
this has some potential but work on what i said and you should be fine.
your flow was a bit shaky. it goes a little off here and there. 1st verse was better than the second lyrically but the 2nd was still nice. real deep track like venom said. quality was kind of odd? but overall keep working. nice track just work on those things
thanks
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