ramcees
Meks.
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Drops are due Friday at midnight pacific time..
Voting stops sunday night...
Good luck to you both..
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champ match?
you?
ok this will be easy as hell then....
best of luck regardless, cuz ur gonna need it
blah blah...
ill drop u like im kicking up dust, I kill & eat textees, by the bunch
Ill suffocate u with a grocery bag, like im packing my fucking lunch
you say your sick, & I don’t think that’s something I would doubt
cuz your Nose has to run…if it wants to keep up with your mouth
Assumption is the mother of all major fuck ups, that’s very strange
cuz I just cant help but think, your mother…has a really funny name
see cats prefer my text style, cuz it puts bitches like u, down on all fours
all I can say about ur text-tile is, i always find it…somewhere on da floor
Champ Match? wtf u tryna be funny for, like ur just here for comic relief
when cats say you should try Stand Up, its cuz u look stupid on ur knees
u should go donate ur wack rhymes to charity B…don’t just hold them
Cuz if a bum held up one of those, ppl might actually feel sorry for him
took u 5years to get into a champ match, & u nearly lost it to a no show
ur skill level is zerO, so every time I punch u its like im damagin the Ozone
its funny tho, cuz ya verses always agree with me, so why devise a plan
I’ll just call u a pussy, & u'll drop 16 lines, that prove, just how Right I am
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catch'em complainin that life sux, but who cares what he's bitchin about
of course he dont like the hand he was dealt, it was my fist in his mouth
ur tryin so hard ta advance but sorry kid, I'm in a hurry ta win
so why should I stand my ground, that I'm also gonna burry u in
runnin the streets?, u know u'll lose I'm the man I truck soldiers
cuz u'll pull out all the stops, & end up gettin ran the fuck over!
looks like u risin fast so I gotta give u credit, sick like cancer da holmes raw
god damn ur fuckin blowin up, so u should prolly answer da phone call
when it comes ta M, I'm murderin shit, watch the man bleed ta death
& kids we know he aint fuckin bitches, cuz he jus RAMCEES instead
old jokes, cliches, & flips from years ago dissin bums at da worst it'll flop
so add great competition, & I just summed up the verse dat u dropped
I can tell u this, the lines I just dropped, are sayin I bested this bitch
only thing left now is for ya'll to look at him, layin next ta them shits
tryna keep pace wit me u'll get scraped, cuz I'm fast wen disgracin a lame
still, u'll be on the road ta victory too,
when u hit it harder then the paint 4 the lanes
Last edited by Meks.; April 20th, 2008 at 02:41 PM
lol, why u still editing ur verse?...im sure u could get dq'd for that, anyways this was a good battle i think, good luck
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cuz i found spelling errors...
i didnt change any lines so stop being gay..
"im sure u could get dq'd" lmao dude chill that shit out
Ramcees.
ill drop u like im kicking up dust, I kill & eat textees, by the bunch
Ill suffocate u with a grocery bag, like im packing my fucking lunch
nah.
you say your sick, & I don’t think that’s something I would doubt
cuz your Nose has to run…if it wants to keep up with your mouth
Kinda funny.
Assumption is the mother of all major fuck ups, that’s very strange
cuz I just cant help but think, your mother…has a really funny name
aosdjgsd m LMAOoaoaoaoao.
see cats prefer my text style, cuz it puts bitches like u, down on all fours
all I can say about ur text-tile is, i always find it…somewhere on da floor
kinda played.
Champ Match? wtf u tryna be funny for, like ur just here for comic relief
when cats say you should try Stand Up, its cuz u look stupid on ur knees
nah.
u should go donate ur wack rhymes to charity B…don’t just hold them
Cuz if a bum held up one of those, ppl might actually feel sorry for him
ehh.
took u 5years to get into a champ match, & u nearly lost it to a no show
ur skill level is zerO, so every time I punch u its like im damagin the Ozone
meh.
its funny tho, cuz ya verses always agree with me, so why devise a plan
I’ll just call u a pussy, & u'll drop 16 lines, that prove, just how Right I am
nah.
Vs.
catch'em complainin that life sux, but who cares what he's bitchin about
of course he dont like the hand he was dealt, it was my fist in his mouth
ok.
ur tryin so hard ta advance but sorry kid, I'm in a hurry ta win
so why should I stand my ground, that I'm also gonna burry u in
lol.
runnin the streets?, u know u'll lose I'm the man I truck soldiers
cuz u'll pull out all the stops, & end up gettin ran the fuck over!
ok
looks like u risin fast so I gotta give u credit, sick like cancer da holmes raw
god damn ur fuckin blowin up, so u should prolly answer da phone call
nah
when it comes ta M, I'm murderin shit, watch the man bleed ta death
& kids we know he aint fuckin bitches, cuz he jus RAMCEES instead
ok.
old jokes, cliches, & flips from years ago dissin bums at da worst it'll flop
so add great competition, & I just summed up the verse dat u dropped
lmao.
I can tell u this, the lines I just dropped, are sayin I bested this bitch
only thing left now is for ya'll to look at him, layin next ta them shits
ok.
tryna keep pace wit me u'll get scraped, cuz I'm fast wen disgracin a lame
still, u'll be on the road ta victory too,
when u hit it harder then the paint 4 the lanes
nah.
Assumption is the mother of all major fuck ups, that’s very strange
cuz I just cant help but think, your mother…has a really funny name
Vs.
ur tryin so hard ta advance but sorry kid, I'm in a hurry ta win
so why should I stand my ground, that I'm also gonna burry u in
old jokes, cliches, & flips from years ago dissin bums at da worst it'll flop
so add great competition, & I just summed up the verse dat u dropped
Well, Ramcees had the best punch in the battle, but that was all he had. So, I have Meks winning this for staying more consitant throughout his verse. Ramcees, if you would have had one more punch that had the same effect as the one that I quotedm, you would have easily won this.
v//Meks.
lyricalz finest
thx man...can we get sum more votes............................................. .........................
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ill drop u like im kicking up dust, I kill & eat textees, by the bunch
Ill suffocate u with a grocery bag, like im packing my fucking lunch
Eh...ok starter...
you say your sick, & I don’t think that’s something I would doubt
cuz your Nose has to run…if it wants to keep up with your mouth
I get the wordplay, but how's it a punch?
Assumption is the mother of all major fuck ups, that’s very strange
cuz I just cant help but think, your mother…has a really funny name
Good-ish...
see cats prefer my text style, cuz it puts bitches like u, down on all fours
all I can say about ur text-tile is, i always find it…somewhere on da floor
No, no, no...
Champ Match? wtf u tryna be funny for, like ur just here for comic relief
when cats say you should try Stand Up, its cuz u look stupid on ur knees
Eh...ok...not so much, whatever...
u should go donate ur wack rhymes to charity B…don’t just hold them
Cuz if a bum held up one of those, ppl might actually feel sorry for him
Eh...no, I see what ya saying, ya just saying it kinda wrong...
Shoulda been, "he'd only be a bigger charity case, if he was spittin ya rhyme"...somthing like that maybe. Or, "Bums spit ya rhymes to earn more pity"
took u 5years to get into a champ match, & u nearly lost it to a no show
ur skill level is zerO, so every time I punch u its like im damagin the Ozone
No...
its funny tho, cuz ya verses always agree with me, so why devise a plan
I’ll just call u a pussy, & u'll drop 16 lines, that prove, just how Right I am
Eh...ok ending...not bad...
VS
catch'em complainin that life sux, but who cares what he's bitchin about
of course he dont like the hand he was dealt, it was my fist in his mouth
Ok-ish opener...not bad...
ur tryin so hard ta advance but sorry kid, I'm in a hurry ta win
so why should I stand my ground, that I'm also gonna burry u in
Eh again...threat shoulda been better...wordplay on ground too...
runnin the streets?, u know u'll lose I'm the man I truck soldiers
cuz u'll pull out all the stops, & end up gettin ran the fuck over!
Funny-ish...
looks like u risin fast so I gotta give u credit, sick like cancer da holmes raw
god damn ur fuckin blowin up, so u should prolly answer da phone call
I don't get it...
when it comes ta M, I'm murderin shit, watch the man bleed ta death
& kids we know he aint fuckin bitches, cuz he jus RAMCEES instead
Good-ish nameplay..."rams he's"
old jokes, cliches, & flips from years ago dissin bums at da worst it'll flop
so add great competition, & I just summed up the verse dat u dropped
Eh, seen the list type before...ok-ish...
I can tell u this, the lines I just dropped, are sayin I bested this bitch
only thing left now is for ya'll to look at him, layin next ta them shits
Cool...nice-ish...
tryna keep pace wit me u'll get scraped, cuz I'm fast wen disgracin a lame
still, u'll be on the road ta victory too,
when u hit it harder then the paint 4 the lanes
Good-ish again...
Kind of one-sided...Meks didn't come blazin, but he came sharp and consistent enough to walk away with this winning.
Ramcees, just a bit off-center. Direct your shit better and make sure you're punches land solidly. Make sure you don't confuse peeps with your metas. I got lost on a couple of your shots.
Peace
Meks WINS.
ill drop u like im kicking up dust, I kill & eat textees, by the bunch
Ill suffocate u with a grocery bag, like im packing my fucking lunch
eh... ok...
you say your sick, & I don’t think that’s something I would doubt
cuz your Nose has to run…if it wants to keep up with your mouth
eh... poor wording. played wordplay.
Assumption is the mother of all major fuck ups, that’s very strange
cuz I just cant help but think, your mother…has a really funny name
okay.
see cats prefer my text style, cuz it puts bitches like u, down on all fours
all I can say about ur text-tile is, i always find it…somewhere on da floor
eh, fuck no...
Champ Match? wtf u tryna be funny for, like ur just here for comic relief
when cats say you should try Stand Up, its cuz u look stupid on ur knees
okay-ish....
u should go donate ur wack rhymes to charity B…don’t just hold them
Cuz if a bum held up one of those, ppl might actually feel sorry for him
wording...
took u 5years to get into a champ match, & u nearly lost it to a no show
ur skill level is zerO, so every time I punch u its like im damagin the Ozone
nah...
its funny tho, cuz ya verses always agree with me, so why devise a plan
I’ll just call u a pussy, & u'll drop 16 lines, that prove, just how Right I am
eh, okay-ish...
vs
catch'em complainin that life sux, but who cares what he's bitchin about
of course he dont like the hand he was dealt, it was my fist in his mouth
heh, alright...
ur tryin so hard ta advance but sorry kid, I'm in a hurry ta win
so why should I stand my ground, that I'm also gonna burry u in
eh...
runnin the streets?, u know u'll lose I'm the man I truck soldiers
cuz u'll pull out all the stops, & end up gettin ran the fuck over!
I used this worplay about 2 weeks ago in LLL actually lol.
looks like u risin fast so I gotta give u credit, sick like cancer da holmes raw
god damn ur fuckin blowin up, so u should prolly answer da phone call
eh...
when it comes ta M, I'm murderin shit, watch the man bleed ta death
& kids we know he aint fuckin bitches, cuz he jus RAMCEES instead
lol, liked this...
old jokes, cliches, & flips from years ago dissin bums at da worst it'll flop
so add great competition, & I just summed up the verse dat u dropped
eh...
I can tell u this, the lines I just dropped, are sayin I bested this bitch
only thing left now is for ya'll to look at him, layin next ta them shits
alright...
tryna keep pace wit me u'll get scraped, cuz I'm fast wen disgracin a lame
still, u'll be on the road ta victory too,
when u hit it harder then the paint 4 the lanes
cool...
meks took it quite comfortably I'd say...
if there's no more votes by tomorrow he'll get the 3-0 KO...
vote Meks
lol i actually thought i could win this...
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