Heavy Weight Champ Match!!!!!!!!
12-20 lines
Agree on limit or match 1st poster
Check in by Wednesday 1159 pm eastern
Verses due Friday 1159 pm eastern
Marv.J
M-Vario
Heavy Weight Champ Match!!!!!!!!
12-20 lines
Agree on limit or match 1st poster
Check in by Wednesday 1159 pm eastern
Verses due Friday 1159 pm eastern
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um going 20
marv lets just go all in on the points.
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20 sounds good....its a bet all points
g/l bruh
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wtf im not even late?
vario a probly talk about my jail time but ima still murder this movin target.
told myself when i leave the can-isle make it,he's makin $5 at a supermarket.
his styles trash im not impressed at all tired of the lie's this nigga shout.
in the champ match u did beat A.T,m but ur 30 without a dyme in ur account.
i could easily beat fire out this sloppy fag but i rather let the shotty blast.
and i hope CD's there for you after i break every Disc your body has.
talk tuff when you high but lord kno's ya..a bitch clown when ur sober.
if i lose to homes i'll be mad ass hell then im burnin his down forclosure.
nigga your wife's like a keyboard see dog i got in her head like a perm.
i enter the pus when i want,got control & command sorry she'll never return.
you sucker for a slut you love when that groupie's on top of you.
nah we aint run a train on her ass more like that movie unstoppable.
why this kid tlk cocky?,dirty ass nigga even his crib's all sloppy.
got caught stealin toilet tissue then snitch'd so he can get off scott free.
all jokes aside you dropped late. like always. maybe you should set your clock AHEAD 30 minutes or so. if this wasnt a champ match you could have counted on the DQ.
Originally Posted by Hu$h
Karp bodied you up with words, Hu$h was gonna put ya body in a crutch
guess you didnt realize fighting back..involves you throwing an actual punch
you got a monopoly on bitchassness, if u had skill Hu$h gave u a chance to flaunt it
u think here you Macy victory, shit he'll avoid parkplace like there's a hotel on it
he got that whatchamacallit style that gets snickers no laughter
when we talk bout Mar's Bars, its always something sweet beneath the wrapper
Don't test me im official, Xbox generation u'd think this was close call in hoops
3pt arch in NBA Live double tap and shoot J, so cross that line for sure u'll get 2
swear'n up and down he aint homo, hairy dudes is what this fruit prefers
ask him what he likes about bearmen he'll say pause....then purr
it took one Hollow, shit any of his punches could've put u in a box
funny history repeating itself not seeing, MJ Farewell with a shot
your a DQ informant, from jail to RB snitching fuck it i guess im forced to off this jerk
had 6 months but did three, seems your weakness for telling is a curious officer
ill tell you how we handle'em, high way hit 85, ask'em to make sure the window works
let ya stick ya head out the window for fresh air...but make you do it feet first
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uppn for votes...
(way to bitch out on 20 lines)
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vario a probly talk about my jail time but ima still murder this movin target.
told myself when i leave the can-isle make it,he's makin $5 at a supermarket.
aight opener, liked it more on the first read
his styles trash im not impressed at all tired of the lie's this nigga shout.
in the champ match u did beat A.T,m but ur 30 without a dyme in ur account.
this had kinda lost me for a second, its cool tho
i could easily beat fire out this sloppy fag but i rather let the shotty blast.
and i hope CD's there for you after i break every Disc your body has.
good bar, thought it wud be predictable but i liked the flip
talk tuff when you high but lord kno's ya..a bitch clown when ur sober.
if i lose to homes i'll be mad ass hell then im burnin his down forclosure.
aight i guess, think you could of worded the first part of the last line better
nigga your wife's like a keyboard see dog i got in her head like a perm.
i enter the pus when i want,got control & command sorry she'll never return.
you kinda gotta read this with the right, flow..real nice bar tho
you sucker for a slut you love when that groupie's on top of you.
nah we aint run a train on her ass more like that movie unstoppable.
kinda funny, aight
why this kid tlk cocky?,dirty ass nigga even his crib's all sloppy.
got caught stealin toilet tissue then snitch'd so he can get off scott free.
nah i aint like the closer
vs.
Karp bodied you up with words, Hu$h was gonna put ya body in a crutch
guess you didnt realize fighting back..involves you throwing an actual punch
ok, i guess
you got a monopoly on bitchassness, if u had skill Hu$h gave u a chance to flaunt it
u think here you Macy victory, shit he'll avoid parkplace like there's a hotel on it
now that u explained i get it but i didnt like the wording
he got that whatchamacallit style that gets snickers no laughter
when we talk bout Mar's Bars, its always something sweet beneath the wrapper
aight but the sweet rapper/candy wrapper thing done to death
Don't test me im official, Xbox generation u'd think this was close call in hoops
3pt arch in NBA Live double tap and shoot J, so cross that line for sure u'll get 2
i get the wordplay but i aint really like the punch, lil too much
swear'n up and down he aint homo, hairy dudes is what this fruit prefers
ask him what he likes about bearmen he'll say pause....then purr
nah wasnt feelin this one
it took one Hollow, shit any of his punches could've put u in a box
funny history repeating itself not seeing, MJ Farewell with a shot
i get it but i dont get it. idk, didnt really like this tho
your a DQ informant, from jail to RB snitching fuck it i guess im forced to off this jerk
had 6 months but did three, seems your weakness for telling is a curious officer
i see what u were tying it to but didnt connect for me
ill tell you how we handle'em, high way hit 85, ask'em to make sure the window works
let ya stick ya head out the window for fresh air...but make you do it feet first
lol..i didnt get it at first but good closer
This was a good battle.. i thought marv had a cool verse but seeing vario lately i thought he'd prolly take it. I think vario threw me off with all the quoting and i really wasnt feeling the middle to end of his verse. If you had two more bars like the closer i'd prolly gave it to you but i think marv took this.
V/Marv
T. P.
vario a probly talk about my jail time but ima still murder this movin target.
told myself when i leave the can-isle make it,he's makin $5 at a supermarket.
decent wordplay, punch is weak tho.
his styles trash im not impressed at all tired of the lie's this nigga shout.
in the champ match u did beat A.T,m but ur 30 without a dyme in ur account.
felt a miss, seemed forced as hell.
i could easily beat fire out this sloppy fag but i rather let the shotty blast.
and i hope CD's there for you after i break every Disc your body has.
better punch attempt. second line saved it, first seemed like filler
talk tuff when you high but lord kno's ya..a bitch clown when ur sober.
if i lose to homes i'll be mad ass hell then im burnin his down forclosure.
decent play with foreclosure. set up kinda wack
nigga your wife's like a keyboard see dog i got in her head like a perm.
i enter the pus when i want,got control & command sorry she'll never return.
concept was weird. delivery was wack and the punch too
you sucker for a slut you love when that groupie's on top of you.
nah we aint run a train on her ass more like that movie unstoppable.
flow was off..not a hard punch. coulda done more with it
why this kid tlk cocky?,dirty ass nigga even his crib's all sloppy.
got caught stealin toilet tissue then snitch'd so he can get off scott free.
scott free flip was cool..not the most creative original ish but the closer was okay.
vs
Karp bodied you up with words, Hu$h was gonna put ya body in a crutch
guess you didnt realize fighting back..involves you throwing an actual punch
okay bar, seemed more like a set up tho.
you got a monopoly on bitchassness, if u had skill Hu$h gave u a chance to flaunt it
u think here you Macy victory, shit he'll avoid parkplace like there's a hotel on it
decent attempt, felt stretched. reword some things and let it flow better
he got that whatchamacallit style that gets snickers no laughter
when we talk bout Mar's Bars, its always something sweet beneath the wrapper
meh, basic attempt.
Don't test me im official, Xbox generation u'd think this was close call in hoops
3pt arch in NBA Live double tap and shoot J, so cross that line for sure u'll get 2
seemed you tried to hard on the complex flow thing, it wasnt workin out that well for you. concept was oddly delivered.
swear'n up and down he aint homo, hairy dudes is what this fruit prefers
ask him what he likes about bearmen he'll say pause....then purr
wack. coulda replaced this bar with somethin that hit...needa get more creative
it took one Hollow, shit any of his punches could've put u in a box
funny history repeating itself not seeing, MJ Farewell with a shot
better name play flip. the bar was decent
your a DQ informant, from jail to RB snitching fuck it i guess im forced to off this jerk
had 6 months but did three, seems your weakness for telling is a curious officer
ehh, the set up was weak but the delivery was weaker. flow was in sync.
ill tell you how we handle'em, high way hit 85, ask'em to make sure the window works
let ya stick ya head out the window for fresh air...but make you do it feet first
flowed okay, but the closer was weak. coulda done a better set up with harder punch. but it was basic type shit.
battle wasnt that nice for a champ match, both definetely shoulda came with harder blows. s'pecially with 16 lines available to take it. you both had bad moments when it came to certain things
Marv.J - you had a pretty average verse as far as skills go. had the flow down pat pretty good...even tho u had some forced wordin but it was ok. the concepts in which you tried to paint the picture with the delivery, was brought all wrong imo.
i could easily beat fire out this sloppy fag but i rather let the shotty blast.
and i hope CD's there for you after i break every Disc your body has.
talk tuff when you high but lord kno's ya..a bitch clown when ur sober.
if i lose to homes i'll be mad ass hell then im burnin his down forclosure.
i enjoyed those couple bars the most from you. seems like the most you had it together goin for you with punches and whatnot.
M-Var!o - you had a decent opener coming in bringing flow and alittle bit of creativity. but it needed alot more if you get what im sayin. you needa bring some hits or personals/dirt you got and let em fire. too conservative with the punches in my eyes. wasnt nothin worth goin back to read or quote for your battle to compare but...
it took one Hollow, shit any of his punches could've put u in a box
funny history repeating itself not seeing, MJ Farewell with a shot
it wasnt nothin much but it was your best bar where it had personals, alright flow, and decent concept in one.
im not even gonna say either of the 2 came hard for this battle, im not. but Marv had the better idea comin into this battle of what to do and had more stuff that worked for me to spit.
no hate at all to anyone just how i see the battle.
vote - Marv
vario a probly talk about my jail time but ima still murder this movin target.
told myself when i leave the can-isle make it,he's makin $5 at a supermarket.
i could easily beat fire out this sloppy fag but i rather let the shotty blast.
and i hope CD's there for you after i break every Disc your body has.
talk tuff when you high but lord kno's ya..a bitch clown when ur sober.
if i lose to homes i'll be mad ass hell then im burnin his down forclosure.
nigga your wife's like a keyboard see dog i got in her head like a perm.
i enter the pus when i want,got control & command sorry she'll never return.
vs
he got that whatchamacallit style that gets snickers no laughter
when we talk bout Mar's Bars, its always something sweet beneath the wrapper
Vario you came too weak for this man.. your shit was really simple.. Youre opener was ur second best bar but way too statementish to be considered a nice punch.. Marv came ight. enuff to take the win here
j:
vario a probly talk about my jail time but ima still murder this movin target.
told myself when i leave the can-isle make it,he's makin $5 at a supermarket.
2/5 - decent opener.
his styles trash im not impressed at all tired of the lie's this nigga shout.
in the champ match u did beat A.T,m but ur 30 without a dyme in ur account.
3/5 - good punch.
i could easily beat fire out this sloppy fag but i rather let the shotty blast.
and i hope CD's there for you after i break every Disc your body has.
2/5 - harsh
talk tuff when you high but lord kno's ya..a bitch clown when ur sober.
if i lose to homes i'll be mad ass hell then im burnin his down forclosure.
1.5/5 - ehh.
nigga your wife's like a keyboard see dog i got in her head like a perm.
i enter the pus when i want,got control & command sorry she'll never return.
1.5/5 - ehh.
you sucker for a slut you love when that groupie's on top of you.
nah we aint run a train on her ass more like that movie unstoppable.
1.5/5 - 3 pretty weak ones in a row.
why this kid tlk cocky?,dirty ass nigga even his crib's all sloppy.
got caught stealin toilet tissue then snitch'd so he can get off scott free.
3.5/5 - good closer.
15
vs.
m-v:
Karp bodied you up with words, Hu$h was gonna put ya body in a crutch
guess you didnt realize fighting back..involves you throwing an actual punch
3/5 - good opener.
you got a monopoly on bitchassness, if u had skill Hu$h gave u a chance to flaunt it
u think here you Macy victory, shit he'll avoid parkplace like there's a hotel on it
2.5/5 - lol
he got that whatchamacallit style that gets snickers no laughter
when we talk bout Mar's Bars, its always something sweet beneath the wrapper
2/5 - iight.
Don't test me im official, Xbox generation u'd think this was close call in hoops
3pt arch in NBA Live double tap and shoot J, so cross that line for sure u'll get 2
1.5/5 - forced.
swear'n up and down he aint homo, hairy dudes is what this fruit prefers
ask him what he likes about bearmen he'll say pause....then purr
2.5/5 - lol
it took one Hollow, shit any of his punches could've put u in a box
funny history repeating itself not seeing, MJ Farewell with a shot
2/5 - ok punch
your a DQ informant, from jail to RB snitching fuck it i guess im forced to off this jerk
had 6 months but did three, seems your weakness for telling is a curious officer
2/5 - worded poor
ill tell you how we handle'em, high way hit 85, ask'em to make sure the window works
let ya stick ya head out the window for fresh air...but make you do it feet first
2/5 - ok closer.
I give my vote to marvj. this was a good very close battle. I know on final score m-v has more points but I dont think .5 more points with a whole extra bar is enough to take the win. peace
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"cuz they know I leave speakers abused I eat the EQs I eat through the beats whats the secret I think its the shoes" - Crooked I
vario a probly talk about my jail time but ima still murder this movin target.
told myself when i leave the can-isle make it,he's makin $5 at a supermarket.
i think the 2nd bar fell short
his styles trash im not impressed at all tired of the lie's this nigga shout.
in the champ match u did beat A.T,m but ur 30 without a dyme in ur account.
lol
i could easily beat fire out this sloppy fag but i rather let the shotty blast.
and i hope CD's there for you after i break every Disc your body has.
niice
talk tuff when you high but lord kno's ya..a bitch clown when ur sober.
if i lose to homes i'll be mad ass hell then im burnin his down forclosure.
liked this one
nigga your wife's like a keyboard see dog i got in her head like a perm.
i enter the pus when i want,got control & command sorry she'll never return.
ohkish
you sucker for a slut you love when that groupie's on top of you.
nah we aint run a train on her ass more like that movie unstoppable.
ehh
why this kid tlk cocky?,dirty ass nigga even his crib's all sloppy.
got caught stealin toilet tissue then snitch'd so he can get off scott free.
ohkish
vs
Karp bodied you up with words, Hu$h was gonna put ya body in a crutch
guess you didnt realize fighting back..involves you throwing an actual punch
ohk
you got a monopoly on bitchassness, if u had skill Hu$h gave u a chance to flaunt it
u think here you Macy victory, shit he'll avoid parkplace like there's a hotel on it
liked this 1
he got that whatchamacallit style that gets snickers no laughter
when we talk bout Mar's Bars, its always something sweet beneath the wrapper
playeddd even as a nameplay
Don't test me im official, Xbox generation u'd think this was close call in hoops
3pt arch in NBA Live double tap and shoot J, so cross that line for sure u'll get 2
iight
swear'n up and down he aint homo, hairy dudes is what this fruit prefers
ask him what he likes about bearmen he'll say pause....then purr
nahh
it took one Hollow, shit any of his punches could've put u in a box
funny history repeating itself not seeing, MJ Farewell with a shot
(lol thats me) ohk personal
your a DQ informant, from jail to RB snitching fuck it i guess im forced to off this jerk
had 6 months but did three, seems your weakness for telling is a curious officer
nahh
ill tell you how we handle'em, high way hit 85, ask'em to make sure the window works
let ya stick ya head out the window for fresh air...but make you do it feet first
nahh, not very strong and it made it worse that u used the word "window" in the setup and punch, made it seem to repetitive and killed the flow
mvar dropped weak compared to usual, marv came with some decent bars. not a terrible battle but i gotta give it to marv. no hate
v/MJ
Its simple neighbor, im blowin endo vapors
run in ya window blow out ya temple with my widow maker
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