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DayumNation
ur back in CD, almost didn't make the crew cut like a high and tight
the way king shat on you we figured you know exactly wut his ass is like
cant proceed to be a champ, im blocking the path so why bother
it's not possible to passim* like referencing an unknown author
ima cash machine that gives dope lines, this fiend'll never last in a brawl
when you step up AT,M'll get u drug...so i can forsee you will withdraw
bitches say ur a professional blind date cuz your face is a fright
something from out of the dark ages, that should've stayed from the light
Per$onal forgot, King backed out after winning, am I the next to get duped?
A.T.'s dying to be champ...
I guess the Make a Wish Foundation will try to make any dream come true
you're a nerd,every bar you spit is calculated, prepare and rehearsed
wuts worse is the only thing more square than you,is the shape of your verse
these newbs made you emo, if ya ass was cash Psy Ops took a loan out
so now when things look Sunny, you can still picture your brains blown out
plus ya girl likes my style, seriously on my mic she goes hammer
I come over we play house, she's the door, im the angry tenant that slams'her
winning circle on a map, A.T. knows he'll get Lost before he ever gets in
but you only have the L-attitude you'll never find ya way to a win
your concepts and bars are dead, ill end ya career with precision
this is a morg cause nowadays in FL, AT Lines are only anticipated by morticians
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Gab was on to something with "mid tier for life", your verse stands as proof,Originally Posted by Gabriel570
No matter how much u write, none of the mods will think u spit clear n nice
So just give up the rhymes n wear a shirt sayin "stuck in mid tier for life"
But honestly, its not a very funny joke................ it's just a hilarious truth,
We in the same crew, so I won't bring up my call out or how he was duckin,
Cuz my verse'll leave V more punch drunk than his girls gotta be to fuck him,
He can claim hes an atheist, nothin's worth worship, but. back to business,
So when hes on his knees he ain't praying...... cause he's just sac-religious,
This bitch aint got the courage to twist me, so all of his words will miss me,
And if Ive finally met my match... Ill strike V and leave him burnt and crispy,
Bitch, its easy to make fun of you, with them wack concepts you runnin to,
Cuz even midgets wont reach in their life, near as much as your punches do,
This pussy is known for duckin, scared to death that his skills have slipped,
So if any bitch has V by the balls............ then she ain't got much of a grip,
McCoy made a good point, you collectin points to pad the tier your stuck in,
And Quest is considering a new rule, cause you fuckin refused to quit duckin,
Your a pussy that cant budge or push me, cause you just aint stout enough,
So the only time I'm feeling pain, is opening the window I'ma throw u out of,
Your faggot thinkin will kill you, but the sight of dick leaves your pants damp,
When this bitch see's an exit sign... naturally, he tries to enter the off-ramp,
So, yeah, we can go ten bars, fuck your stratches... I'ma leave you scarred,
So we'll max out the line limit and leave....... like ur girl did your credit cards,
DayumNation
M-Var!o
ur back in CD, almost didn't make the crew cut like a high and tight
the way king shat on you we figured you know exactly wut his ass is like
guessin its a personal with him takin an L to someone. bar was an ok-ish opener
cant proceed to be a champ, im blocking the path so why bother
it's not possible to passim* like referencing an unknown author
nice word play, you should try and put some multies if ur jus rhymin last words off each line
ima cash machine that gives dope lines, this fiend'll never last in a brawl
when you step up AT,M'll get u drug...so i can forsee you will withdraw
i felt the concept. the name flip was good but besides that it was ok
bitches say ur a professional blind date cuz your face is a fright
something from out of the dark ages, that should've stayed from the light
an ugly joke...played. but i did laugh. rhymed so it did save the bar in a way.
Per$onal forgot, King backed out after winning, am I the next to get duped?
A.T.'s dying to be champ...
I guess the Make a Wish Foundation will try to make any dream come true
aah, you forced the concept a lil too much and didnt connect.
you're a nerd,every bar you spit is calculated, prepare and rehearsed
wuts worse is the only thing more square than you,is the shape of your verse
it was iight, the flow was ok and wasnt forced. but still, punch connected but not hard
these newbs made you emo, if ya ass was cash Psy Ops took a loan out
so now when things look Sunny, you can still picture your brains blown out
nothin special here.
plus ya girl likes my style, seriously on my mic she goes hammer
I come over we play house, she's the door, im the angry tenant that slams'her
a few syllables over-flowed but the tenant metaphore was funny, and cool.
winning circle on a map, A.T. knows he'll get Lost before he ever gets in
but you only have the L-attitude you'll never find ya way to a win
im sure if u worded shit better it woulda stung more. an ok bar at best tho.
your concepts and bars are dead, ill end ya career with precision
this is a morg cause nowadays in FL, AT Lines are only anticipated by morticians
ahh, you forced the concept/punch again. it was delivered ok but still for a closer? it wasnt that hard hittin
vs
A.T
Gab was on to something with "mid tier for life", your verse stands as proof,
But honestly, its not a very funny joke................ it's just a hilarious truth,
weak opener...no punch/meta/wordplay/multi/etc. didnt show anything for the opener.
We in the same crew, so I won't bring up my call out or how he was duckin,
Cuz my verse'll leave V more punch drunk than his girls gotta be to fuck him,
funny second line, and it seems like u got lazy and wanted to choose duckin + fuck him. didnt mesh well dog.
He can claim hes an atheist, nothin's worth worship, but. back to business,
So when hes on his knees he ain't praying...... cause he's just sac-religious,
funny line, sorta basic word play but u still connected and had a 1-2 multi thrown in there.
This bitch aint got the courage to twist me, so all of his words will miss me,
And if Ive finally met my match... Ill strike V and leave him burnt and crispy
good meta, flowed well,
Bitch, its easy to make fun of you, with them wack concepts you runnin to,
Cuz even midgets wont reach in their life, near as much as your punches do,
alright bar. the punch connect tho.
This pussy is known for duckin, scared to death that his skills have slipped,
So if any bitch has V by the balls............ then she ain't got much of a grip,
again, seems u got lazy here on the creative/complex side of things and are puttin together words that are not rhymin. had it been flowin good the punch would connect, while also bein funny
McCoy made a good point, you collectin points to pad the tier your stuck in,
And Quest is considering a new rule, cause you fuckin refused to quit duckin,
good bar overall. second line seemed a bit forced. nothin great or attempts at punches but im guessin its a personal?
Your a pussy that cant budge or push me, cause you just aint stout enough,
So the only time I'm feeling pain, is opening the window I'ma throw u out of,
lol, didnt flow at all ma dude. got the concept but u forced it. and flow was choppy + not rhymin well.
Your faggot thinkin will kill you, but the sight of dick leaves your pants damp,
When this bitch see's an exit sign... naturally, he tries to enter the off-ramp,
meh. no hard punches at all. and u out of a bar u only puttin together nursery rhymes...nothin difficult/complex. damp+ramp?
So, yeah, we can go ten bars, fuck your stratches... I'ma leave you scarred,
So we'll max out the line limit and leave....... like ur girl did your credit cards,
if this wasnt your best bar, it mos def was one of. it was funny, had some wit in there includin the line limit while comparin a bitch trickin homeboy. it was a solid closer.
opener - M
flow - A
punches - A
originality - M
multies - A
wordplay - M
complexity - A
personal - tie (only because the only personals both had involved duckin)
closer - A
It had potential to be closer but M your flow was choppy at times. A.T i felt had the more complex concepts..punches. u had him on wordplay and originality comin up with the tenant line. thats what made u take the category.
but A.T was more consistent with bars...although a couple attempts missed. still he kept comin with flow, punches, etc.
vote - A.T
good luck to both.
Per$onal forgot, King backed out after winning, am I the next to get duped?
A.T.'s dying to be champ...
I guess the Make a Wish Foundation will try to make any dream come true
you're a nerd,every bar you spit is calculated, prepare and rehearsed
wuts worse is the only thing more square than you,is the shape of your verse
winning circle on a map, A.T. knows he'll get Lost before he ever gets in
but you only have the L-attitude you'll never find ya way to a win
your concepts and bars are dead, ill end ya career with precision
this is a morg cause nowadays in FL, AT Lines are only anticipated by morticians
vs
He can claim hes an atheist, nothin's worth worship, but. back to business,
So when hes on his knees he ain't praying...... cause he's just sac-religious,
Bitch, its easy to make fun of you, with them wack concepts you runnin to,
Cuz even midgets wont reach in their life, near as much as your punches do,
Your a pussy that cant budge or push me, cause you just aint stout enough,
So the only time I'm feeling pain, is opening the window I'ma throw u out of,
Your faggot thinkin will kill you, but the sight of dick leaves your pants damp,
When this bitch see's an exit sign... naturally, he tries to enter the off-ramp,
^wording killed it but shyts funny!! LMAO!!!!
Good Battle fellas. best Ive seen in FL in a long time. Both had a few bars that were mehish like some of Vario's np. but he made up from them with some good concepts and originality. AT had some old concepts that were flipped pretty well and the last one i quoted was ROFLZ but not executed up to par. And i feel that's what kept you from winnin this one. Vario was jsut more original with better concepts. The Make a Wish bar was hilarious. Yall both did ya thing and repped the crew well so no love loss to either of you!
v. Vario by a pube
ur back in CD, almost didn't make the crew cut like a high and tight
the way king shat on you we figured you know exactly wut his ass is like
funny possible by quote
ima cash machine that gives dope lines, this fiend'll never last in a brawl
when you step up AT,M'll get u drug...so i can forsee you will withdraw
k
bitches say ur a professional blind date cuz your face is a fright
something from out of the dark ages, that should've stayed from the light
okish
you're a nerd,every bar you spit is calculated, prepare and rehearsed
wuts worse is the only thing more square than you,is the shape of your verse
nice
your concepts and bars are dead, ill end ya career with precision
this is a morg cause nowadays in FL, AT Lines are only anticipated by morticians
nice
vs.
We in the same crew, so I won't bring up my call out or how he was duckin,
Cuz my verse'll leave V more punch drunk than his girls gotta be to fuck him,
This pussy is known for duckin, scared to death that his skills have slipped,
So if any bitch has V by the balls............ then she ain't got much of a grip,
McCoy made a good point, you collectin points to pad the tier your stuck in,
And Quest is considering a new rule, cause you fuckin refused to quit duckin,
Your faggot thinkin will kill you, but the sight of dick leaves your pants damp,
When this bitch see's an exit sign... naturally, he tries to enter the off-ramp,
simply because i havent read the concepts you got those
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look M got this and i think AT couldve easily had this if he tried i know he didnt so
V/M
wow. what a pretty dope champ match. I read each verse like three times. both emcees had some dope punches and flips. both had personals and flow.
M.Vario
I guess A.T.'s known for his perfect structure, and that punch M'Vario was on point, although maybe a little simple, because your shit does look like a box lol. I felt that AT,M'll/withdraw line was the dopest of the battle. good name flip. also that Make a Wish Foundation was funny as hell, and a fresh concept (I haven't seen it that I can recall). & that L-attitude/Latitude line was ill too.
A.T.
for A.T. the best bar was either that exit sign/off ramp or that Pain/Window out of line had nice wordplay. also that bitch by the balls/no grip flip was cool... the punch drunk line was cool, but played out IMO, same thing with the on your knees/sac-religious line. the found my match/strike V burnt and crispy line was okay, but I felt it was more of a statement.. it didn't really connect to anything that made it dope for me. I think it's cause your first line in that bar seemed to me like straight filler I guess.
overall:
I felt that M'Vario had more personals as well and that made his lines hit harder. what really won this battle though was the closer for Vario. I felt it was more harder and again more personal with the nameflip and wordplay. overall both of ya'll are dope as fuck, and I could understand a rematch cause it was pretty close bar for bar, but in the end...
v/ M-Var!o
Ya Basic Raps Will Leave You Basically Wrapped...
It Is What It Is...
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you're a nerd,every bar you spit is calculated, prepare and rehearsed
wuts worse is the only thing more square than you,is the shape of your verse
nice
plus ya girl likes my style, seriously on my mic she goes hammer
I come over we play house, she's the door, im the angry tenant that slams'her
dope ass line
vs
We in the same crew, so I won't bring up my call out or how he was duckin,
Cuz my verse'll leave V more punch drunk than his girls gotta be to fuck him,
kinda played but good
He can claim hes an atheist, nothin's worth worship, but. back to business,
So when hes on his knees he ain't praying...... cause he's just sac-religious,
dope ass line
This bitch aint got the courage to twist me, so all of his words will miss me,
And if Ive finally met my match... Ill strike V and leave him burnt and crispy,
nice
Bitch, its easy to make fun of you, with them wack concepts you runnin to,
Cuz even midgets wont reach in their life, near as much as your punches do,
wording kinda off but ok
Nice battle guys.
M i feel like your concepts were more general and AT came harder with the intensity and worded em a lil better.
however the angry tenat line was mad dope....that hurt my goddamn feelings..rofl
But however AT came with few more consistant punches and also had some pretty nice ones that made me laugh.
coulda went either way.
V/AT no hate
B.Simon
My Latest
A sure as hell of a battle right here. Here goes nothing!
ur back in CD, almost didn't make the crew cut like a high and tight
the way king shat on you we figured you know exactly wut his ass is like
Ok
cant proceed to be a champ, im blocking the path so why bother
it's not possible to passim* like referencing an unknown author
Not bad
ima cash machine that gives dope lines, this fiend'll never last in a brawl
when you step up AT,M'll get u drug...so i can forsee you will withdraw
I like the nameplay-ish concept here. I think it was quite witty.
bitches say ur a professional blind date cuz your face is a fright
something from out of the dark ages, that should've stayed from the light
Lmao.
Per$onal forgot, King backed out after winning, am I the next to get duped?
A.T.'s dying to be champ...
I guess the Make a Wish Foundation will try to make any dream come true
Nice... Good punch
you're a nerd,every bar you spit is calculated, prepare and rehearsed
wuts worse is the only thing more square than you,is the shape of your verse
Lol, what is there to say... you quoted me.
these newbs made you emo, if ya ass was cash Psy Ops took a loan out
so now when things look Sunny, you can still picture your brains blown out
Ok
plus ya girl likes my style, seriously on my mic she goes hammer
I come over we play house, she's the door, im the angry tenant that slams'her
Decent
winning circle on a map, A.T. knows he'll get Lost before he ever gets in
but you only have the L-attitude you'll never find ya way to a win
Not bad
your concepts and bars are dead, ill end ya career with precision
this is a morg cause nowadays in FL, AT Lines are only anticipated by morticians
Good closer
vs
Gab was on to something with "mid tier for life", your verse stands as proof,
But honestly, its not a very funny joke................ it's just a hilarious truth,
Ok opener
We in the same crew, so I won't bring up my call out or how he was duckin,
Cuz my verse'll leave V more punch drunk than his girls gotta be to fuck him,
Ok
He can claim hes an atheist, nothin's worth worship, but. back to business,
So when hes on his knees he ain't praying...... cause he's just sac-religious,
Nice
This bitch aint got the courage to twist me, so all of his words will miss me,
And if Ive finally met my match... Ill strike V and leave him burnt and crispy,
Decent
Bitch, its easy to make fun of you, with them wack concepts you runnin to,
Cuz even midgets wont reach in their life, near as much as your punches do,
Good
This pussy is known for duckin, scared to death that his skills have slipped,
So if any bitch has V by the balls............ then she ain't got much of a grip,
Lol
McCoy made a good point, you collectin points to pad the tier your stuck in,
And Quest is considering a new rule, cause you fuckin refused to quit duckin,
Ok
Your a pussy that cant budge or push me, cause you just aint stout enough,
So the only time I'm feeling pain, is opening the window I'ma throw u out of,
Lol, good
Your faggot thinkin will kill you, but the sight of dick leaves your pants damp,
When this bitch see's an exit sign... naturally, he tries to enter the off-ramp,
Lmao. Cool line.
So, yeah, we can go ten bars, fuck your stratches... I'ma leave you scarred,
So we'll max out the line limit and leave....... like ur girl did your credit cards,
Good closer.
Honestly, this is a real close battle and probably one of the hardest I've had to vote on. Anyone could have taken it with just one extra dope line but you both came consistent as fuck and showed how talented you both are. Battles like these are the type I go back and read to get some motivation or to learn a few things. Both of you deserve to win this and for me to call it a draw wouldn't be fair to either of you really...
In terms of punches, I think both of you hit really well and quite equally really. I mainly liked M-Vario's verse from his concepts, as for AT, I liked his cause of his flips they got to me. I've got to base this stuff off of the other stuff because if I judged this from punches it would easily be a draw. Ultimately, I think the decision would be between originality vs execution... both had witty shit... especially that Make a wish line but taking in all factors I think A.T. came a little bit more complex with a few of his stuff. So...
V - A.T.
Good stuff guys. No h aate ornything, just thought it wouldn't be fair to either if I didn't choose a winner in this.
ur back in CD, almost didn't make the crew cut like a high and tight
the way king shat on you we figured you know exactly wut his ass is like
lol good personal
ima cash machine that gives dope lines, this fiend'll never last in a brawl
when you step up AT,M'll get u drug...so i can forsee you will withdraw
ohk
Per$onal forgot, King backed out after winning, am I the next to get duped?
A.T.'s dying to be champ...
I guess the Make a Wish Foundation will try to make any dream come true
ohk
winning circle on a map, A.T. knows he'll get Lost before he ever gets in
but you only have the L-attitude you'll never find ya way to a win
liked this1
your concepts and bars are dead, ill end ya career with precision
this is a morg cause nowadays in FL, AT Lines are only anticipated by morticians
dope
vs
Bitch, its easy to make fun of you, with them wack concepts you runnin to,
Cuz even midgets wont reach in their life, near as much as your punches do,
a little played but ohk
This pussy is known for duckin, scared to death that his skills have slipped,
So if any bitch has V by the balls............ then she ain't got much of a grip,
hahaha
Your a pussy that cant budge or push me, cause you just aint stout enough,
So the only time I'm feeling pain, is opening the window I'ma throw u out of,
nice
So, yeah, we can go ten bars, fuck your stratches... I'ma leave you scarred,
So we'll max out the line limit and leave....... like ur girl did your credit cards,
ohk
this was a dope battle and rlly close to call. M had some nice personals nameplays. At had some nice wordplay and funny bars. but i got mvario by one quote. no hate this was a nice battle.
v/Mvar
Its simple neighbor, im blowin endo vapors
run in ya window blow out ya temple with my widow maker
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M-Var!o
ur back in CD, almost didn't make the crew cut like a high and tight
the way king shat on you we figured you know exactly wut his ass is like
good shot but was only okish
cant proceed to be a champ, im blocking the path so why bother
it's not possible to passim* like referencing an unknown author
good atmpt at a name play but its super forced
ima cash machine that gives dope lines, this fiend'll never last in a brawl
when you step up AT,M'll get u drug...so i can forsee you will withdraw
nice concept and good personal atmpt still just not very heavy
bitches say ur a professional blind date cuz your face is a fright
something from out of the dark ages, that should've stayed from the light
this was a filler bar kind of funny nothing i would use in this battle
Per$onal forgot, King backed out after winning, am I the next to get duped?
A.T.'s dying to be champ...
I guess the Make a Wish Foundation will try to make any dream come true
forced and stretched liked the idea though
you're a nerd,every bar you spit is calculated, prepare and rehearsed
wuts worse is the only thing more square than you,is the shape of your verse
lol funny
these newbs made you emo, if ya ass was cash Psy Ops took a loan out
so now when things look Sunny, you can still picture your brains blown out
nope
plus ya girl likes my style, seriously on my mic she goes hammer
I come over we play house, she's the door, im the angry tenant that slams'her
funny still not very heavy
winning circle on a map, A.T. knows he'll get Lost before he ever gets in
but you only have the L-attitude you'll never find ya way to a win
good personal and concept still lacks any force
your concepts and bars are dead, ill end ya career with precision
this is a morg cause nowadays in FL, AT Lines are only anticipated by morticians
ok line weak closer
vs
A.T
Gab was on to something with "mid tier for life", your verse stands as proof,
But honestly, its not a very funny joke................ it's just a hilarious truth,
ouch bad opener bro
We in the same crew, so I won't bring up my call out or how he was duckin,
Cuz my verse'll leave V more punch drunk than his girls gotta be to fuck him,
hahaha funny lil personal ok bar
He can claim hes an atheist, nothin's worth worship, but. back to business,
So when hes on his knees he ain't praying...... cause he's just sac-religious,
haha nice
This bitch aint got the courage to twist me, so all of his words will miss me,
And if Ive finally met my match... Ill strike V and leave him burnt and crispy
lol
Bitch, its easy to make fun of you, with them wack concepts you runnin to,
Cuz even midgets wont reach in their life, near as much as your punches do,
lol this was funny
This pussy is known for duckin, scared to death that his skills have slipped,
So if any bitch has V by the balls............ then she ain't got much of a grip,
hahaha favorite line
McCoy made a good point, you collectin points to pad the tier your stuck in,
And Quest is considering a new rule, cause you fuckin refused to quit duckin,
forced
Your a pussy that cant budge or push me, cause you just aint stout enough,
So the only time I'm feeling pain, is opening the window I'ma throw u out of,
no
in will kill you, but the sight of dick leaves your pants damp,
When this bitch see's an exit sign... naturally, he tries to enter the off-ramp,
weak filler
So, yeah, we can go ten bars, fuck your stratches... I'ma leave you scarred,
So we'll max out the line limit and leave....... like ur girl did your credit cards,
haha funny and a better closer then his
over all this was a good match but it seemed M was weak and A was just lazy
i would say A had a better flow dude M your shit was choppy bro no hate
close other wise because yeah A had a couple better wars some were really wack M seemed avg all the way through
vote 8 to 10 A
shut the fuck up! he's in here tellin jokes