This would go best as a recorded track in my opinion, but I just looked up an instrumental and started writing off the top. The bolded words are where the "kick" in the beat should fall on, this way you can get a pretty good idea of how it's supposed to sound out loud. Leme know what you think.
Come and call my bluff I'm a diamond in the rough,
I'll be shinin' by the end of this no jewels on my cuffs,
Fools actin' tough but you lyin' to ya self,
You see poison in my rhymes when I apply 'em to ya health,
Stealthy, assassin, leave yo captain gaspin,
Use my hands don't got a heata no blastin',
So when I'm graspin' steel you know that I'm castin',
Every large-mouth bastard to the lake that they could last in,
...In a fashion I hate snitches with a passion,
Been clappin' vocalists the day they started yappin',
This never woulda' happened if I cleared up my board,
But don't get cocky with me like a prayer to the Lord,
Get prepared for war, mentally and physically,
Ya not prepared for my lines spittin' analytically,
the critically acclaimed, King of my domain,
and when you workin solo there ain't no one else to blame,
I don't plan for fame, just for those to know my name,
that contribute to my aim to rennovate the rap game,
don't fuck with plain lyrics and beats just to bump,
'cause you like the way it sounds when it's jammin' in your trunk,
You gon feel the funk from the mushrooms, bust through,
the barrier, and carry ya, mind into hysteria,
that's my blueprint I'mma drug the fuckin masses,
And hyptonize every person into takin' acid..........
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