Blink-182- I Miss You Remix

[AyitsJB]

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[AyitsJB]

LINKS!
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[akolyte123]

bro if you had a lisp you sound exactly like necro.but a happy one.like you downd a whole bunch of x wit smiley faces on them. umm but i really dont no what ta say about it.........um i dont no what it is about the flow but it sounds like your putting stress in the weirdest places.also it seems like you finish all your lines at the start of the next bar which im not really felling.the chorus thing comes in too early as well by like half a bar. ummm that vocal effect on that last part wit the delay was strange too make sure it fits the beat.but yeah nice work wit it keep doin you shit bro......

[.¤Infamy¤.]

lmao, if the smily face could rap, this would be his song. You sound very cheerful bro. but i guess it fit the direction you took in the track. Your flow needs improvement and you need more confidence in your delivery of it. If you could improve upon those points you could have a pretty unique style, its like rappin/talkin at the same time but try other types of delivery it seems like your new on the mic so you have time to def. build a very solid style.

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[GT Ronic]

hmmm, this was different

mixing was pretty bad, delivery was...weird? lol
lyrics were straight i guess

just not really my style at all bro.
thanks for the feedback though

[Illestry]

flow was cool
delivery was i dunno really was ok at times it just felt something was mixing.
i love the original so the beat was str8.
didnt like the hook u shulda sampled the original hook on
cool track keep it up rtf on my song i poker face

[Aargh Kelly]

this was unique...in a GOOD way. If you dropped an album and shot a music video with this unique style, i could see you being very popular or at least have a cult following. I haven't heard any of your other music but if this is your first time trying out this style..then you should think about sticking with it. It fits you. Your flow is choppy in a few spots but it was pretty smooth most of the time. you're delivery and vocals were good. Your voice is your biggest asset, it's a mainstream voice(potential to be very appealing to the masses.) overall, this is a nice track. It was different but good nonetheless.
i actually want this on my ipod. lol

Good stuff man. kudos.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...092/index.html

[Dox Phonic]

Righteo...
Listen in...
Haha... WHITE RAPS! At times it's a little forced man, as in, the flow is sorta... wow... you remind me of Slick Rick... delivery style.
It's a nice concept here man, could use some tightening up I guess. a little more passion in the lyric maybe...
Also, if you can't sing, don't try it. No offense there, but it really takes away from any professional aspect within the song.
Keep at it man... your ideas have potential.