LLL Season 11: Week 3
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Drop by Midnight Friday (Eastern Time)
16 Lines Minimum
Vote on 5 Battles
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Good Luck
LLL Season 11: Week 3
Standard Rules (can be found in LLL Office)
Check in by Wednesday
Drop by Midnight Friday (Eastern Time)
16 Lines Minimum
Vote on 5 Battles
Leave links in your check in or lose 2 votes per missing link
Good Luck
Last edited by phlymo; July 20th, 2009 at 01:39 AM
Last edited by Rant; July 26th, 2009 at 07:09 PM
A.rtificial I.ntelligence
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agreed..
yeah, um....
I look at your custom title and laugh, i don't gotta be focused 'cause
i WAS ready to rumble, 'til i saw how fucking weak my opponent was
& now i'm chill, relaxed and cool. still i'm going straight at this chickens head
don't worry, i'd never bash you bad as everyone did in the predictions thread
this bitch is dead. even ya girl says so, & you dont want her choosin guy
then you'll wonder where your frequent...but that's just on the losing side
dude you'll get fried, and as far as the top goes, your never there
so i'm not Sizing you up....i'm just spreading your body EVERYWHERE
but anyways, i herd you bite? well i guess that nobody really should mind
so i won't put you in a category with chrit....he actually bites GOOD lines
your garbage as fuck. just give it up and check yourself into the clinic
'cause man your short-comings have created a teen parent epidemic
this bitch is finished, you shouldn't have even tested these waters brother..
& NOONE can detective your a man or just a bitch that's undercover
you'll get smothered. whore you need some help, you've never been menacing
so let's call this ground zero, because man you never start with ANYTHING
16.
A.rtificial I.ntelligence
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Yea,
When it's time for war,I know Ancel wont let the gun pop
Shit he wouldnt bare arms in a tank top
Ancel cant write strong enough justa fuckin weakling with girl muscle...
Hell even when he's trying to turn off the computer it becomes a power struggle
Ya fuckin weak,n also not witty,I know the truth hurts kid
Shit voters only read between the lines..because thats the best part of ya verses
I hate to be taken lightly,so prepare to get ya face smashed in
N if ya only doing this battle for kicks..I'll provide a few to ya chin
We never battled Mr but after this you'll know I kick ass from begining to finish
N I'll make a lasting impression...on ya face w/ nike signs from my tennis
My haymakers are godly,who the fuck predicted you to win it
N thats the good news too bad you'll need skills and decent concepts to go with it
I'll give this bitch a beating fit for a king,till he collaspe and fall
Then prepare to be throned into a fucking wall
And ya best punches fall short fast,you be dodged and bitch slap,cuz
When you serve combos its usally followed bye "Sir do you want fries wit that"
whew done,
Last edited by Barz.; July 24th, 2009 at 10:42 PM
I look at your custom title and laugh, i don't gotta be focused 'cause
i WAS ready to rumble, 'til i saw how fucking weak my opponent was
& now i'm chill, relaxed and cool. still i'm going straight at this chickens head
don't worry, i'd never bash you bad as everyone did in the predictions thread
but anyways, i herd you bite? well i guess that nobody really should mind
so i won't put you in a category with chrit....he actually bites GOOD lines
Ancel, those were your best bars, and props on the personals.. other than that, I wasn't feelin' most of the concepts.. you had some decent wordplay concepts BUT you used them wrong.. in order for a wordplay to work right, it needs to make sense both ways up to the actual word, THEN you can flip it however you want.. I'm not gonna type up a whole thing to show you what I mean, but if you look at how me and Phly use wordplay, you'll know what I mean.. anyway, I DID like how you came pretty personal in your verse, and you had some quotables (I didn't like the 1st one as much as the other two tho)..
Vs
Wow, wtf.. I think what I'm about to quote was Ras's ONLY original bar (maybe, just because I haven't seen it).. and even this bar is pretty fucked up.. I think it's missing the word "shoes" after the word "tennis", lol..
We never battled Mr but after this you'll know I kick ass from begining to finish
N I'll make a lasting impression...on ya face w/ nike signs from my tennis
Like wtf.. I'm not try'na be mean Ras, but YOUR WHOLE VERSE was played.. and the ONLY personal attempt at Ancel was the "throned" line.. and it wasn't even wordplay.. why?? because "throwned" isn't a word.. and "throned into a fucking wall" doesn't make sense no matter how you look at it..
Overall, Ancel takes this easily.. he came mostly original with his shit, and he had some quotables.. the only decent concept that wasn't played by Ras was poorly worded.. sorry Ras, but.... \\//ote: King Ancel
Last edited by Barcotic; July 25th, 2009 at 01:50 AM
I look at your custom title and laugh, i don't gotta be focused 'cause
i WAS ready to rumble, 'til i saw how fucking weak my opponent was
this bitch is dead. even ya girl says so, & you dont want her choosin guy
then you'll wonder where your frequent...but that's just on the losing side
this bitch is finished, you shouldn't have even tested these waters brother..
& NOONE can detective your a man or just a bitch that's undercover
vs.
I hate to be taken lightly,so prepare to get ya face smashed in
N if ya only doing this battle for kicks..I'll provide a few to ya chin
^^^
and this was only decent.
Vote - Ancel, pretty one sided. Fresher, harder material sums it up.
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I look at your custom title and laugh, i don't gotta be focused 'cause
i WAS ready to rumble, 'til i saw how fucking weak my opponent was
aight
& now i'm chill, relaxed and cool. still i'm going straight at this chickens head
don't worry, i'd never bash you bad as everyone did in the predictions thread
aight
this bitch is dead. even ya girl says so, & you dont want her choosin guy
then you'll wonder where your frequent...but that's just on the losing side
wp could have been executed better IMO, kinda awkward
dude you'll get fried, and as far as the top goes, your never there
so i'm not Sizing you up....i'm just spreading your body EVERYWHERE
average
but anyways, i herd you bite? well i guess that nobody really should mind
so i won't put you in a category with chrit....he actually bites GOOD lines
aight
your garbage as fuck. just give it up and check yourself into the clinic
'cause man your short-comings have created a teen parent epidemic
concept is iffy to me
this bitch is finished, you shouldn't have even tested these waters brother..
& NOONE can detective your a man or just a bitch that's undercover
old wp, average i guess
you'll get smothered. whore you need some help, you've never been menacing
so let's call this ground zero, because man you never start with ANYTHING
simple, average
vs.
When it's time for war,I know Ancel wont let the gun pop
Shit he wouldnt bare arms in a tank top
bad concept, weak wording
Ancel cant write strong enough justa fuckin weakling with girl muscle...
Hell even when he's trying to turn off the computer it becomes a power struggle
bad wording again, iv seen this concept done nicer
Ya fuckin weak,n also not witty,I know the truth hurts kid
Shit voters only read between the lines..because thats the best part of ya verses
amazingly played
I hate to be taken lightly,so prepare to get ya face smashed in
N if ya only doing this battle for kicks..I'll provide a few to ya chin
meh
We never battled Mr but after this you'll know I kick ass from begining to finish
N I'll make a lasting impression...on ya face w/ nike signs from my tennis
meh
My haymakers are godly,who the fuck predicted you to win it
N thats the good news too bad you'll need skills and decent concepts to go with it
meh
I'll give this bitch a beating fit for a king,till he collaspe and fall
Then prepare to be throned into a fucking wall
forced
And ya best punches fall short fast,you be dodged and bitch slap,cuz
When you serve combos its usally followed bye "Sir do you want fries wit that"
played
v/ ancel
and i am pretty sure ras has been exposed as a biter multiple times on multiple sites
I look at your custom title and laugh, i don't gotta be focused 'cause
i WAS ready to rumble, 'til i saw how fucking weak my opponent was
but anyways, i herd you bite? well i guess that nobody really should mind
so i won't put you in a category with chrit....he actually bites GOOD lines
this bitch is finished, you shouldn't have even tested these waters brother..
& NOONE can detective your a man or just a bitch that's undercover
vs.
When it's time for war,I know Ancel wont let the gun pop
Shit he wouldnt bare arms in a tank top
yea, this was a pretty easy battle to decide for me. ras didnt have many punches that i was feeling and ancel came with it this week..
vote - ancel
& now i'm chill, relaxed and cool. still i'm going straight at this chickens head
don't worry, i'd never bash you bad as everyone did in the predictions thread
this bitch is dead. even ya girl says so, & you dont want her choosin guy
then you'll wonder where your frequent...but that's just on the losing side
but anyways, i herd you bite? well i guess that nobody really should mind
so i won't put you in a category with chrit....he actually bites GOOD lines
this bitch is finished, you shouldn't have even tested these waters brother..
& NOONE can detective your a man or just a bitch that's undercover
vs
Ancel cant write strong enough justa fuckin weakling with girl muscle...
Hell even when he's trying to turn off the computer it becomes a power struggle
Ancel, u had a pretty good verse, the final 3 bars i quoted were especially nice. Just was very consistent and the wording was mostly on point and direct. Ras, I think u gotta step ur game up for this league. U had a lot of played lines like the read between the lines, just for kicks, and ur closer, among others. The power struggle line was original so I quoted it, but that was about it. Ancel got this pretty easy.
Vote - Ancel
I look at your custom title and laugh, i don't gotta be focused 'cause
i WAS ready to rumble, 'til i saw how fucking weak my opponent was
Clever...
& now i'm chill, relaxed and cool. still i'm going straight at this chickens head
don't worry, i'd never bash you bad as everyone did in the predictions thread
Again...nice...
this bitch is dead. even ya girl says so, & you dont want her choosin guy
then you'll wonder where your frequent...but that's just on the losing side
Nice wordplay on frequent...didn't care for the punch though.
your garbage as fuck. just give it up and check yourself into the clinic
'cause man your short-comings have created a teen parent epidemic
Hahaha!
this bitch is finished, you shouldn't have even tested these waters brother..
& NOONE can detective your a man or just a bitch that's undercover
Again, nice...
VS
Ya fuckin weak,n also not witty,I know the truth hurts kid
Shit voters only read between the lines..because thats the best part of ya verses
Aight...I guess...
My haymakers are godly,who the fuck predicted you to win it
N thats the good news too bad you'll need skills and decent concepts to go with it
Eh...again, I guess...
I think Ancel dropped the best shit this round...maybe not as good as me [/conceit], but definitely very tight.
And he wins.
Ancel:
I look at your custom title and laugh, i don't gotta be focused 'cause
i WAS ready to rumble, 'til i saw how fucking weak my opponent was
nothin special here
& now i'm chill, relaxed and cool. still i'm going straight at this chickens head
don't worry, i'd never bash you bad as everyone did in the predictions thread
played/simple
this bitch is dead. even ya girl says so, & you dont want her choosin guy
then you'll wonder where your frequent...but that's just on the losing side
lol...nice wordplay wit "frequent"
dude you'll get fried, and as far as the top goes, your never there
so i'm not Sizing you up....i'm just spreading your body EVERYWHERE
decent
but anyways, i herd you bite? well i guess that nobody really should mind
so i won't put you in a category with chrit....he actually bites GOOD lines
bleh...
your garbage as fuck. just give it up and check yourself into the clinic
'cause man your short-comings have created a teen parent epidemic
lol...pretty funny...
this bitch is finished, you shouldn't have even tested these waters brother..
& NOONE can detective your a man or just a bitch that's undercover
this is my favorite line of yours...possibly the battle...nice
you'll get smothered. whore you need some help, you've never been menacing
so let's call this ground zero, because man you never start with ANYTHING
lol...nice closer..
Ras:
When it's time for war,I know Ancel wont let the gun pop
Shit he wouldnt bare arms in a tank top
played and not executed very well
Ancel cant write strong enough justa fuckin weakling with girl muscle...
Hell even when he's trying to turn off the computer it becomes a power struggle
heard somethin like this before
Ya fuckin weak,n also not witty,I know the truth hurts kid
Shit voters only read between the lines..because thats the best part of ya verses
decent flip...
I hate to be taken lightly,so prepare to get ya face smashed in
N if ya only doing this battle for kicks..I'll provide a few to ya chin
cool lil flip...
We never battled Mr but after this you'll know I kick ass from begining to finish
N I'll make a lasting impression...on ya face w/ nike signs from my tennis
decent shit again...
My haymakers are godly,who the fuck predicted you to win it
N thats the good news too bad you'll need skills and decent concepts to go with it
aight...
I'll give this bitch a beating fit for a king,till he collaspe and fall
Then prepare to be throned into a fucking wall
this bar wasnt nothin special but for some reason shit made me laugh so it was cool...
And ya best punches fall short fast,you be dodged and bitch slap,cuz
When you serve combos its usally followed bye "Sir do you want fries wit that"
naw...played and not executed well...
Overall: Ancel takes this on easily...he had the best bar in the battle and a much more consistent verse...ras had a lot of lines that came of played, sounded too familiar or just wasnt worded well enough...
v/ancel
I look at your custom title and laugh, i don't gotta be focused 'cause
i WAS ready to rumble, 'til i saw how fucking weak my opponent was
& now i'm chill, relaxed and cool. still i'm going straight at this chickens head
don't worry, i'd never bash you bad as everyone did in the predictions thread
this bitch is dead. even ya girl says so, & you dont want her choosin guy
then you'll wonder where your frequent...but that's just on the losing side
VS
We never battled Mr but after this you'll know I kick ass from begining to finish
N I'll make a lasting impression...on ya face w/ nike signs from my tennis
Damn ancel started out on fire. that frequent bar was dope nd abunch of solid personals. ras came poorly worded with played concepts mostly. ancel easliy here.
vote - ancel.
I look at your custom title and laugh, i don't gotta be focused 'cause
i WAS ready to rumble, 'til i saw how fucking weak my opponent was
& now i'm chill, relaxed and cool. still i'm going straight at this chickens head
don't worry, i'd never bash you bad as everyone did in the predictions thread
but anyways, i herd you bite? well i guess that nobody really should mind
so i won't put you in a category with chrit....he actually bites GOOD lines
vs
I hate to be taken lightly,so prepare to get ya face smashed in
N if ya only doing this battle for kicks..I'll provide a few to ya chin
maybe RAS has rust to shake off or something, but i've seen a lot of these flips... Ancel got this one easily...
vote KA
I look at your custom title and laugh, i don't gotta be focused 'cause
i WAS ready to rumble, 'til i saw how fucking weak my opponent was
(wordings off but ok)
& now i'm chill, relaxed and cool. still i'm going straight at this chickens head
don't worry, i'd never bash you bad as everyone did in the predictions thread
(not bad)
this bitch is dead. even ya girl says so, & you dont want her choosin guy
then you'll wonder where your frequent...but that's just on the losing side
(never seen this wp, ok execution but cool)
dude you'll get fried, and as far as the top goes, your never there
so i'm not Sizing you up....i'm just spreading your body EVERYWHERE
(eh, ok)
but anyways, i herd you bite? well i guess that nobody really should mind
so i won't put you in a category with chrit....he actually bites GOOD lines
(funny to me)
your garbage as fuck. just give it up and check yourself into the clinic
'cause man your short-comings have created a teen parent epidemic
(nah)
this bitch is finished, you shouldn't have even tested these waters brother..
& NOONE can detective your a man or just a bitch that's undercover
(ok flip)
you'll get smothered. whore you need some help, you've never been menacing
so let's call this ground zero, because man you never start with ANYTHING
(ok)
vs.
When it's time for war,I know Ancel wont let the gun pop
Shit he wouldnt bare arms in a tank top
(played out)
Ancel cant write strong enough justa fuckin weakling with girl muscle...
Hell even when he's trying to turn off the computer it becomes a power struggle
(too played)
Ya fuckin weak,n also not witty,I know the truth hurts kid
Shit voters only read between the lines..because thats the best part of ya verses
(yeah, too played)
I hate to be taken lightly,so prepare to get ya face smashed in
N if ya only doing this battle for kicks..I'll provide a few to ya chin
(also, same as above)
We never battled Mr but after this you'll know I kick ass from begining to finish
N I'll make a lasting impression...on ya face w/ nike signs from my tennis
(.. same as above plus above and above)
My haymakers are godly,who the fuck predicted you to win it
N thats the good news too bad you'll need skills and decent concepts to go with it
(k)
I'll give this bitch a beating fit for a king,till he collaspe and fall
Then prepare to be throned into a fucking wall
(nah, don't see it)
And ya best punches fall short fast,you be dodged and bitch slap,cuz
When you serve combos its usally followed bye "Sir do you want fries wit that"
(yea, played)
Ras came w/ too obvious of played shit, ancel came better. easy
v- ancel
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