10 lines.
verse due 24hrs from check.
this is my check. good luck!
oatmeal
(P.I.)GKillaZ
10 lines.
verse due 24hrs from check.
this is my check. good luck!
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"cuz they know I leave speakers abused I eat the EQs I eat through the beats whats the secret I think its the shoes" - Crooked I
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if this was a baking contest, NO 420... then oatmeal would def. win this
so ima eat em quick under a minute...
...cuz if your oatmeal man, then you got to be instant!
my raps drive-thru this dude I just laugh and call him honda cuz they suck
only time anyone would buy oatmeal... is from mcdonalds for a buck
his rhymes are so plain, dude your overrated with the weakest scheme
oat will never reach any extreme....
....for him the highest level of success is becomin peaches n cream
oat broke-out onto the scence nuts, when he first started rapping
but I dont know what happened...
....now even his kids are having allergic reactions
you aint real your light weight this is somethin he hoped to conceal .
(get his name right tho!..)
this quaker oat aint built for quotes...
.....................just a bulimic bitch who only eats an oat for a meal
iight, keyed this up!.. where you at oat.
..ill drop my links after he drops a verse
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"cuz they know I leave speakers abused I eat the EQs I eat through the beats whats the secret I think its the shoes" - Crooked I
yo forgot about this, gonna drop real quick
you rep Canada hard, this stupid guy is a flop
if hip hop lives in the north, it committed suicide when you dropped
I'm the Ovechkin of this rap shit, step to me are you serious?
your name alone proves you can only last 2 periods
my dick game is sick, I'm on that certain pedestal
I'm the clit commander...you just the virgin general
this is a joke for me, I branched out to this twig bout
btw your moms is fat as fuck, your birth wasn't the first time she pigged out
this was an easy key, its a breeze to be wastin this scrub
so I'll drop and give you 10...something your physically incapable of
sorry forgot about this shit, DQ me if you so choose
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...016/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...692/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...931/index.html
nah im not going to DQ you man, you dropped so lets get some votes. and you get some link.
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"cuz they know I leave speakers abused I eat the EQs I eat through the beats whats the secret I think its the shoes" - Crooked I
PIGKillaz
his rhymes are so plain, dude your overrated with the weakest scheme
oat will never reach any extreme....
....for him the highest level of success is becomin peaches n cream
vs
Oatmeal
this is a joke for me, I branched out to this twig bout
btw your moms is fat as fuck, your birth wasn't the first time she pigged out
this was an easy key, its a breeze to be wastin this scrub
so I'll drop and give you 10...something your physically incapable of
you guys and your quick drops lol.
PI your wording hurt you really bad. you did every bar in the 3 line format when you didnt have to. you just made them long and the bars read all jumbled. Oats had a smoother read and cleaner punches
v/Oats
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we need votes people.
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"cuz they know I leave speakers abused I eat the EQs I eat through the beats whats the secret I think its the shoes" - Crooked I
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vote people I will return the fav.
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"cuz they know I leave speakers abused I eat the EQs I eat through the beats whats the secret I think its the shoes" - Crooked I
his rhymes are so plain, dude your overrated with the weakest scheme
oat will never reach any extreme....
....for him the highest level of success is becomin peaches n cream
bit stretched maybe ok
vs
this is a joke for me, I branched out to this twig bout
btw your moms is fat as fuck, your birth wasn't the first time she pigged out
lol
vote-->oat for the better bar
his rhymes are so plain, dude your overrated with the weakest scheme
oat will never reach any extreme....
....for him the highest level of success is becomin peaches n cream
vs
this is a joke for me, I branched out to this twig bout
btw your moms is fat as fuck, your birth wasn't the first time she pigged out
this was an easy key, its a breeze to be wastin this scrub
so I'll drop and give you 10...something your physically incapable of
soz to vario for basically biting his quoting lol, but thats exactly how i saw this battle. Pig had very stretched lines, i think if you condense your lines into smoother ones, then you could very possibly be quite dangerous in FL. oatmeal just had the better verse all around.
v/oat
his rhymes are so plain, dude your overrated with the weakest scheme
oat will never reach any extreme....
....for him the highest level of success is becomin peaches n cream
vs
this is a joke for me, I branched out to this twig bout
btw your moms is fat as fuck, your birth wasn't the first time she pigged out
this was an easy key, its a breeze to be wastin this scrub
so I'll drop and give you 10...something your physically incapable of
this battle was okay, could have been a little better. gkilla you came alrgith but gotta work on your wording. and oats your shit wasnt bad... the concepts are kinda nice. just keep up what your doin.
v/ - oats
Stickin' to the script .
you rep Canada hard, this stupid guy is a flop
if hip hop lives in the north, it committed suicide when you dropped
this is a joke for me, I branched out to this twig bout
btw your moms is fat as fuck, your birth wasn't the first time she pigged out
vs.
his rhymes are so plain, dude your overrated with the weakest scheme
oat will never reach any extreme....
....for him the highest level of success is becomin peaches n cream
Vote: Oatmeal for a more polished verse and harder hitting punches. P.I.G. had some decent concepts, but they were way too wordy. Your style of stretched bars reminds me of A.T. Just get straight to the point with your concepts, or considering using something different. No hate to either...
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