10 lines
due by tomorrow midnight, not sure how long you need i see you have another one up
10 lines
due by tomorrow midnight, not sure how long you need i see you have another one up
can it be due in 45mins?
Jim you should be scared, i'll help you take a huge step on deck
Payne will finally be Unleashed.. once I've removed the chain from his neck
this time im jus guessin', maybe Jimmy can actually handle a hottie
i heard she has a fat camel toe.. along with the rest of her camel body
dudes just all talk, yaps n yaps while i just take a bow
pshh, fronts so much.. he should be at the start of the line by now
J's mainstream, he'll probly drop a bar about poppin' a hundred shots
with a style so old... its startin' to develop liver spots
fat dirty whore ur probably think that your bad now, please
your girl finally sucked your meat.. n caught a case of mad cow disease
10.
I take him down a couple notches, like I'm losin weight and adjustin' my belt
cuz you could be touchin' your own dick....still wouldn't be feelin' ya zelph
Your gay it's a fact...everyone just looks, as this dude drops and shake
cuz the last time your popped anything...it was your fat ass out of a birthday cake
and your not blowin' out no candles...your blowin' all the dicks you can handle
this guys not gay...he just flip flops like a pair of sandals
^^^^I never been the type to quote verses..but watch me mentionOnce im done with him, ill give his remainders to jimmy payne
that I don't follow rappers...but I'll still take Rizzo's sloppy seconds
you need to run, I know your scared...I hear that your not at all a fighter
Cuz the only time I'm losing Z's, when I'm pullin' an all nighter
lol i love the nameplay jokes XD , bump, nice drop Jimbo
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Jim you should be scared, i'll help you take a huge step on deck
Payne will finally be Unleashed.. once I've removed the chain from his neck
okay
this time im jus guessin', maybe Jimmy can actually handle a hottie
i heard she has a fat camel toe.. along with the rest of her camel body
meh not really feelin this
dudes just all talk, yaps n yaps while i just take a bow
pshh, fronts so much.. he should be at the start of the line by now
ok-ish
J's mainstream, he'll probly drop a bar about poppin' a hundred shots
with a style so old... its startin' to develop liver spots
meh
fat dirty whore ur probably think that your bad now, please
your girl finally sucked your meat.. n caught a case of mad cow disease
lol not a bad closer
vs
I take him down a couple notches, like I'm losin weight and adjustin' my belt
cuz you could be touchin' your own dick....still wouldn't be feelin' ya zelph
nice nameplay, good punch
Your gay it's a fact...everyone just looks, as this dude drops and shake
cuz the last time your popped anything...it was your fat ass out of a birthday cake
nah
and your not blowin' out no candles...your blowin' all the dicks you can handle
this guys not gay...he just flip flops like a pair of sandals
meh
^^^^I never been the type to quote verses..but watch me mention
that I don't follow rappers...but I'll still take Rizzo's sloppy seconds
nope, weak..seen this done a lot
you need to run, I know your scared...I hear that your not at all a fighter
Cuz the only time I'm losing Z's, when I'm pullin' an all nighter
good closer
pretty even overall..both had two ok to good punches. If i had to decide based on the good punches u both dropped then i would give the win to JP but i feel zelph was more consistent and had less misses than JP. could go either way though. Okay battle. No hate..
v/zelph
rtf vs rizzo/fourloko
punches-even. both had some nice punches in it but both came out pretty even.
multis-even. didnt really see any multis that really hit may need to step up wit it.
nameplay nd personals-def go to jimmy.some of those flips were nice maybe tha closer cuda bin worded but nice concept.
flow-both were nice u both got similar styles to each other.
vote-jimmy payne
cut threw wit tha nameplay n shit gud battle from both tho real close
I like puppies..................they taste delicious
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Jim you should be scared, i'll help you take a huge step on deck
Payne will finally be Unleashed.. once I've removed the chain from his neck
ok
this time im jus guessin', maybe Jimmy can actually handle a hottie
i heard she has a fat camel toe.. along with the rest of her camel body
meh..
dudes just all talk, yaps n yaps while i just take a bow
pshh, fronts so much.. he should be at the start of the line by now
nah..
J's mainstream, he'll probly drop a bar about poppin' a hundred shots
with a style so old... its startin' to develop liver spots
ok
fat dirty whore ur probably think that your bad now, please
your girl finally sucked your meat.. n caught a case of mad cow disease
not bad
vs
I take him down a couple notches, like I'm losin weight and adjustin' my belt
cuz you could be touchin' your own dick....still wouldn't be feelin' ya zelph
lol
Your gay it's a fact...everyone just looks, as this dude drops and shake
cuz the last time your popped anything...it was your fat ass out of a birthday cake
ok
and your not blowin' out no candles...your blowin' all the dicks you can handle
this guys not gay...he just flip flops like a pair of sandals
nah...
^^^^I never been the type to quote verses..but watch me mention
that I don't follow rappers...but I'll still take Rizzo's sloppy seconds
nope
you need to run, I know your scared...I hear that your not at all a fighter
Cuz the only time I'm losing Z's, when I'm pullin' an all nighter
ok
Close battle. Payne had the better punches, but zelph had the more consistent verse. Imma give it to Payne for the harder hitting punches. Could've gone either way though.
v/J.Payne
J's mainstream, he'll probly drop a bar about poppin' a hundred shots
with a style so old... its startin' to develop liver spots
Vs.
I take him down a couple notches, like I'm losin weight and adjustin' my belt
cuz you could be touchin' your own dick....still wouldn't be feelin' ya zelph
I'm liking both of these equally, but the awesome name reference sways it for me.
Advantage: Jimmy Payne.
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