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Thread: Bars/Bullets

  1. August 21st, 2003, 09:56 PM #1
    younggadget
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    Bars/Bullets

    Bars=black, Bullets=red

    Verbal ryhthem presicisly in tuned with the beat/
    Full clip jammed inide of a empty gun/
    Awating for the perfect time just to speak/
    I can't wait to see this nigga,he bet not run/
    My time come,as soon as the music breaks/
    I caught this busta,begging is way too late/
    I spit a few bars,about 6 or 7/
    Another nigga who family say he went to heaven/
    The chorus comes,this is what makes or breaks a song/
    The hooks come with their flamers on/
    I spit a few more bars,like that in a snappy/
    I bust at the cops feeling real trigger happy/
    The beat skips,this messes up my flow/
    I ran out of bars I can't spit no mo'/
    Then I drop the mic to the floor/
    The murderer,is breathing no more/
    Last edited by younggadget; August 22nd, 2003 at 08:12 PM
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  2. August 21st, 2003, 10:27 PM #2
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    Please do not read until 12:00.I dont wont to be banned!!
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  3. August 21st, 2003, 10:40 PM #3
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    lol tight peace twin i liked it even the poetic stanza but what is the real subject?
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
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  4. August 21st, 2003, 10:43 PM #4
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    I'll tell you at 12:00..I accindently created 2 new topics and I might get in troube if Sureal see's this
    So please stop posting until 12:00
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  5. August 21st, 2003, 11:12 PM #5
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    Originally posted by younggadget
    I'll tell you at 12:00..I accindently created 2 new topics and I might get in troube if Sureal see's this
    So please stop posting until 12:00
    Lmao..........U wont get banned.............But if Sureal sees this , he will close this thread
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  6. August 21st, 2003, 11:28 PM #6
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    I dont want it closed...I want it to saty open
    do you know how annoying it is entering that vb code over and over again?....lets get some comments about this peice...fuck it.....
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  7. August 21st, 2003, 11:35 PM #7
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    IT REaDS 335 AM HERE
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
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  8. August 21st, 2003, 11:39 PM #8
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    it's 10:44 in detroit...but hey...like I said fuck it...
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  9. August 21st, 2003, 11:40 PM #9
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    PEEP MY JOINT BATTLEN MYSELF IT IS MY BEST WORPLAY PEACE
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
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  10. August 22nd, 2003, 03:59 AM #10
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    this was uh decent..... i thought you were gonna keep going on and off with the flow like a poem but you broke off and just fucked that up.. didn't really see what you were trying to do here... pleae explain if you can.
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  11. August 22nd, 2003, 06:11 AM #11
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    Okay,you got to pay attention...
    The bars are the bullets...whenever the dude spit a few bars,the other dude shoot a few bullts...when the chorus come,the police comes...another word for chorus and hook,and that's a nickname for the police...hooks...when the dude stop rappin and drop the mic...the other dude dies....it was just a lil idea that popped in my head....
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  12. August 22nd, 2003, 11:44 AM #12
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    pretty creative bruh.. sweet daw.. sweet! i didnt get it at first.. but you explained it well.. that's some creativity daw! keep comin up wit that shit! but next time.. make us muhfuckuhz guess what the hell you tryin tuh get through.. take it easy MC.. i'm outtie!
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  13. August 22nd, 2003, 12:30 PM #13
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    it was creative,good drop,liked the concept, a very different concept and all. It did sorta breakoff towards the end, thats the only problem i had with it.
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  14. August 22nd, 2003, 08:38 PM #14
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    uppin for more replies...check out my other open mic...thats ill too...well in my opinion..
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