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    A Tale Of Violins

    A Tale Of Violins

    Thursday 7th August 2003 – The Woman Whom Only Wore White


    My premonition of a perfect woman has taken effect
    Am I her companion position or am I a mistaken subject
    The beautiful goddess of my religion, or am I her latest project
    Or is this love modest, a horror movie, impossible to eject
    “The woman whom only wore white” as she is in distance of my sight
    With a glowing aura so bright and a smile that can light a city night
    A gorgeous and precious face, exquisite hair and a flawless complexion
    This love I shall embrace, or am I destined for bare rejection
    A prime selection, one of angels, as I dwell in eyes so divine
    As she asks for a direction, with a voice that is lovable and fine
    Her priceless hair lay perfect upon her indescribable cheek
    Sympathetic tears, unique laugh, what more could I seek
    Similarities flash present, a perfected woman in her own respectful way
    As I stare into her eyes, waves collide, as we lay on the bay
    Return to my flat and emotionless I sleep as the night turns slowly gray
    As her features fly array and astray
    No need to talk
    No need to say…

    Saturday 16th August 2003 – As Tears Descend Red

    ‘As Tears Descend Red’ is the only way to describe my reaction
    Has the devil stationed me to hell on earth, and were you apart of his faction
    Because when I heard the news I didn’t want to think or believe
    Until I saw your broken down body at the obscene murder scene
    As I face reality, the series of events played out like a bad dream
    Unforgettable memories solidified, remember the time we use to sing by the stream?
    Remember the time we use to go out and your eyes would always gleam?
    But I cannot understand this, because perfect is what our lives use to seem
    You will always be with me in my dreams and always in essence
    But I cannot see your emotions there, its not enough, I feel weak without your presence
    As day by day passes, all I can do is mourn and ask why
    Why is God shy, to open his thoughts, are they nothing but a lie?
    Its understandable Lord, but its simple, why did she die?
    She was a great person, but not good enough for your path to abide by?
    As I try to shackle the demons, but they are too cunning and sly
    As I say my last goodbye
    *bam*…
    …suicide

    Wednesday 20th August 2004 – Heavenly Divine

    Eternally I will be within the hands of my loving father and mother
    For I have completed and proceeded in life, to take care and love one another
    As the golden gates await my return to the land one could only read in a tale
    And as the angels sit beneath the thrown, to the God I will always hail
    Judgment Day is quickly arising and anxious I await the decision
    All good taken into to consideration as my premonition from every vision
    Then the Lord looks up with eyes divine and a face of a blinding light
    He looks at me with a smile and nods and allows me to enter heavens height
    Without hesitation I run up to you in heaven with arms open
    For so many days, so many years we haven’t spoken
    Your face is angelic and your eyes could bring death to any male
    With the skin of an angel, so agile, so perfect, so pale
    And as we re-unite my love once again, I see your precious face once more
    Forever mended with peace from a dove, is the heart I once tore


    And praise be to God and you my love, as holy fire wash over our sins
    And as we begin a new friendship, relationship, over our ‘tale of violins’


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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=300511
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=300297


    Uppin for some official feed now.
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    uppin guys, cmon please dont sleep on this.

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    it was a good piece. its really just one thing you over looked but otherwise it was good..
    which IMO was emotion in a sence.. the rhymes were kinda bland but the piece was once again, good. the story was kinda lenghty.. but it was kinda worth the read..

    keep doing you man n drop more peices


    rtrn the feed

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    thanks man, havnt been that active on RB lately so i just thought id drop a quick peice.

    cheers.

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