Alphabetized (1-0) vs Tuckzz (1-0)

[Aines]

LLL Jr. Week 2

Word

first week went kinda well no shows are gone and cats who showed and who signed up are now in...

same as last week check by wednesday drop by friday come good....if your opponent fails to check but shows then that will be allowed but they will be deducted 2 votes for failure to check.....
so all in all you MUST drop a verse this week.....

last of all voting.....im scrapping the 4 links this week, unless voting activity goes then this is how it will stay and if i catch anyone feeding off the first vote you will have votes deducted...constant offence then i'll boot your ass from the league.....


good luck all

[Mackin']

check. good luck. 10-12.

[Alphabetized]

yeah, 12 IS good....

edit..... check

[Mackin']

I felt like getting this over with.


Alphabetized is wack, havent you at all began to notice yet?
you came here to earn respect and all most did....
.......until we all saw last weeks verse when you posted it !!!
no matter how hard alpha try's .. he'll still always remain lame
i would say ur words r played, but it seems u dont use word.play
im sonnin this whore .. theres no chance of you winnin, freak
beat me? nah, ill leave you wit more L's than the initials of dis league
you crumble as i speak, he'll get whored so bad he will no-show this
it'll be like like he's fucken constipated .. cuz he wont drop no shit
there's no stoppin this, trust me, you'll never see the Gold whore..
even if you took an hour walk looking around .. a Jewelry Store !!
this dude is poor .. you'll never come close to the best at text
Face da Facts, o yeah..they already ran away..
.... from ur ugly ass the first time you attempted to face them

[Alphabetized]

Lmao @ being an underdog to tuckzz....


Its a shame tuckzz 2 com here, jus cause ya audios worse than ya txt
And no doubt you got special attributes.....
.................................. and no doubt that loosing's ya best
Tuckzz is like throwin a clock away, the way hes waste of time
u cant tell me hes in his write mind, when his drops dont even ryhme
& tuckzz, wit a style as fuck'd as urs, i aint even consider it legit
and you must feel like ya giving up...
........................................... everytime you hit submit
N'd I dunno how u can think ur elevated, when u aint even blunt high
And fuck LLL jr, when what you really need is a junior front lines
Tuckzz,u just a noob wit no rep, sad how no one gives ya shits a peep
And you need more Z's in ya name....
...............................the way ya ryhmes put people 2 sleep
Dude its deep, how u've been around for a while, n never endorced
& i consider u Yoda, the way u come up short with verses that r forced

[Marvelous_]

Alphabetized is wack, havent you at all began to notice yet?
you came here to earn respect and all most did....
.......until we all saw last weeks verse when you posted it !!!
-nah yo too stretched
no matter how hard alpha try's .. he'll still always remain lame
i would say ur words r played, but it seems u dont use word.play
-lol alright i guess, but not a hard hittin punch
im sonnin this whore .. theres no chance of you winnin, freak
beat me? nah, ill leave you wit more L's than the initials of dis league
-haha pretty cool.. best punch so far..
you crumble as i speak, he'll get whored so bad he will no-show this
it'll be like like he's fucken constipated .. cuz he wont drop no shit
-nah man, mad played, come more fresh..
there's no stoppin this, trust me, you'll never see the Gold whore..
even if you took an hour walk looking around .. a Jewelry Store !!
-decent punch
this dude is poor .. you'll never come close to the best at text
Face da Facts, o yeah..they already ran away..
.... from ur ugly ass the first time you attempted to face them
-nope, this is a weak line.

vs.

Its a shame tuckzz 2 com here, jus cause ya audios worse than ya txt
And no doubt you got special attributes.....
.................................. and no doubt that loosing's ya best
-lol decent punch..
Tuckzz is like throwin a clock away, the way hes waste of time
u cant tell me hes in his write mind, when his drops dont even ryhme
-nah, too simple n not really much of a punch at all
& tuckzz, wit a style as fuck'd as urs, i aint even consider it legit
and you must feel like ya giving up...
........................................... everytime you hit submit
-haha, gyea i like this..
N'd I dunno how u can think ur elevated, when u aint even blunt high
And fuck LLL jr, when what you really need is a junior front lines
-lol alright.. not too hard but yeh
Tuckzz,u just a noob wit no rep, sad how no one gives ya shits a peep
And you need more Z's in ya name....
...............................the way ya ryhmes put people 2 sleep
-gyea cool line.. executed well
Dude its deep, how u've been around for a while, n never endorced
& i consider u Yoda, the way u come up short with verses that r forced
-nah dont like this too much.. but yeh


this battle was decent at most.. tuckzz came w/ one or two fresh concepts..but a couple of played.. he had like 1 quotable bar in there.. wasnt feelin the rest too much, but overall.. it was a decent verse i guess.. keep up.. and alpha.. u did better than last week.. you had some fresh concepts in there.. executed couple of punches well.. you definitely had more punches and came stronger than tuckz..

v/alpha

[Untold.]

no matter how hard alpha try's .. he'll still always remain lame
i would say ur words r played, but it seems u dont use word.play
this dude is poor .. you'll never come close to the best at text
Face da Facts, o yeah..they already ran away..
.... from ur ugly ass the first time you attempted to face them

vs.

& tuckzz, wit a style as fuck'd as urs, i aint even consider it legit
and you must feel like ya giving up...
........................................... everytime you hit submit
N'd I dunno how u can think ur elevated, when u aint even blunt high
And fuck LLL jr, when what you really need is a junior front lines
Dude its deep, how u've been around for a while, n never endorced
& i consider u Yoda, the way u come up short with verses that r forced

tuckzz, either that shit was just weak or play'd. ok verse, not much to it though.
alph, that closer was pretty funny and the other 2 lines i quoted, pretty dope. good job. you did better than i expected this time.

v/ alphabetized

[Ruthless.]

v/alph. will explain in mag. some good punches in here aswell.

[Thor]

no matter how hard alpha try's .. he'll still always remain lame
i would say ur words r played, but it seems u dont use word.play
^not bad
this dude is poor .. you'll never come close to the best at text
Face da Facts, o yeah..they already ran away..
.... from ur ugly ass the first time you attempted to face them
worded poorly^

should a' been like...

u ugly fuck, just know its over, i wont just win by a hair
ide tell you to face the facts but they'd run away scared.....just keep it simple

vs

N'd I dunno how u can think ur elevated, when u aint even blunt high
And fuck LLL jr, when what you really need is a junior front lines
^could have been worded more witty

[B]V/Tucks for 1 more quoteB]

[Alphabetized]

Blah... nvm... thanks for the feed.

[Alphabetized]

uhh.. uppin this for some more feed... please?

[Lyrical God]

Alphabetized is wack, havent you at all began to notice yet?
you came here to earn respect and all most did....
.......until we all saw last weeks verse when you posted it !!!
Na...
no matter how hard alpha try's .. he'll still always remain lame
i would say ur words r played, but it seems u dont use word.play
Ok
im sonnin this whore .. theres no chance of you winnin, freak
beat me? nah, ill leave you wit more L's than the initials of dis league
lol seems pretty obvious but ive never heard it before good...
you crumble as i speak, he'll get whored so bad he will no-show this
it'll be like like he's fucken constipated .. cuz he wont drop no shit
No...
there's no stoppin this, trust me, you'll never see the Gold whore..
even if you took an hour walk looking around .. a Jewelry Store !!
No...
this dude is poor .. you'll never come close to the best at text
Face da Facts, o yeah..they already ran away..
.... from ur ugly ass the first time you attempted to face them
No..

Vs.

Its a shame tuckzz 2 com here, jus cause ya audios worse than ya txt
And no doubt you got special attributes.....
.................................. and no doubt that loosing's ya best
Ok...
Tuckzz is like throwin a clock away, the way hes waste of time
u cant tell me hes in his write mind, when his drops dont even ryhme
Bad setup decent punch
& tuckzz, wit a style as fuck'd as urs, i aint even consider it legit
and you must feel like ya giving up...
........................................... everytime you hit submit
lol decent..
N'd I dunno how u can think ur elevated, when u aint even blunt high
And fuck LLL jr, when what you really need is a junior front lines
lmao best line of the battle...
Tuckzz,u just a noob wit no rep, sad how no one gives ya shits a peep
And you need more Z's in ya name....
...............................the way ya ryhmes put people 2 sleep
lol...
Dude its deep, how u've been around for a while, n never endorced
& i consider u Yoda, the way u come up short with verses that r forced
Blah ok i guess...


Tuckz only had 1 decent punch with his initials of this league punch. Apart from that, i wasnt feelin his verse and was mostly played. Alphas verse had me lol'n with his junior front lines, and need more Z's lines. But his whole verse was solid with consistent punches. Thats what gets him my vote... Good Battle..

Vote/Alphabetized

[Mr. Write]

Tuckzz

Alphabetized is wack, havent you at all began to notice yet?
you came here to earn respect and all most did....
.......until we all saw last weeks verse when you posted it !!!
-wayyy to stretched..this was closer to 3 lines than 2

no matter how hard alpha try's .. he'll still always remain lame
i would say ur words r played, but it seems u dont use word.play
-you just switched the words around...no.

im sonnin this whore .. theres no chance of you winnin, freak
beat me? nah, ill leave you wit more L's than the initials of dis league
-decent, it didnt reallly hit him hard tho and could be worded better

you crumble as i speak, he'll get whored so bad he will no-show this
it'll be like like he's fucken constipated .. cuz he wont drop no shit
-played to death

there's no stoppin this, trust me, you'll never see the Gold whore..
even if you took an hour walk looking around .. a Jewelry Store !!
-blah

this dude is poor .. you'll never come close to the best at text
Face da Facts, o yeah..they already ran away..
.... from ur ugly ass the first time you attempted to face them
-again this was hella stretched, almost 3 lines instead of 2


Alpha

Its a shame tuckzz 2 com here, jus cause ya audios worse than ya txt
And no doubt you got special attributes.....
.................................. and no doubt that loosing's ya best
-decent

Tuckzz is like throwin a clock away, the way hes waste of time
u cant tell me hes in his write mind, when his drops dont even ryhme
-meh, first line would have been a better ending

& tuckzz, wit a style as fuck'd as urs, i aint even consider it legit
and you must feel like ya giving up...
........................................... everytime you hit submit
-not bad

N'd I dunno how u can think ur elevated, when u aint even blunt high
And fuck LLL jr, when what you really need is a junior front lines
-haha coo

Tuckzz,u just a noob wit no rep, sad how no one gives ya shits a peep
And you need more Z's in ya name....
...............................the way ya ryhmes put people 2 sleep
-meh, not feelin it

Dude its deep, how u've been around for a while, n never endorced
& i consider u Yoda, the way u come up short with verses that r forced
-ok, couldve been worded better

v/ Alphabetized

[Alphabetized]

Got another shot at worst battle of the week? lol, thanks for the feed guys.
Guess im uppin for more! feed me biatches.

[M.O.U.S.E.]

there's no stoppin this, trust me, you'll never see the Gold whore..
even if you took an hour walk looking around .. a Jewelry Store !!
this dude is poor .. you'll never come close to the best at text
Face da Facts, o yeah..they already ran away..
.... from ur ugly ass the first time you attempted to face them

------Tuckuzz- I felt you came with some played concepts in this battle..... i almost didnt post the first quotable because it was so so but it was original. I felt you lines were also stretched just a tad bit too long... like ur closure.....was too long.....felt it didnt go together well....yuo could have worded it diffrently.... i felt the effort u put into this was average... nothin really witty here but u did ok....


vs.


& tuckzz, wit a style as fuck'd as urs, i aint even consider it legit
and you must feel like ya giving up...
........................................... everytime you hit submit
N'd I dunno how u can think ur elevated, when u aint even blunt high
And fuck LLL jr, when what you really need is a junior front lines
Dude its deep, how u've been around for a while, n never endorced
& i consider u Yoda, the way u come up short with verses that r forced

--------Alphabatized- Was impressed with the drop here.......Those six lines were kinda creative....and also witty....got a couple of chuckles from me....i felt everything flowed together..... nothing was TOO stretched....but it was acceptable.. u came with a played punch but i felt u had more quotables and more wit in this battle.....U were mad creative.

V/Alphabatized...