1Man Dynasty (0-0) vs Renegade. (0-0)

[Aines]

LLL Jr. Week 1

Rules:

New season starts here...everyones fresh so your all equal as of now

No show your gone no matter who you are

Drop 10-20 lines agree with your opponent

Check in by wednesday drop by friday midnight, i understand that were all in different timezones so i will give way for a hour or so late

No feeding = banned from league
No biting = banned from league and site
No recycling, come up with new un original shit of your own

You must vote on four battles and leave links. you will lose two votes for every missing link. you can't vote on a no show battle and use it for your link either.

Have any problems/requests PM me and Pm me early

Last of all come hard and get yourself up to LLL.

good luck.

[Philly B. Sparkz]

Last of all come hard and get yourself up to LLL.

Haha! Im in LLL already.

10 Lines B

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=250620
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=250601
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=250599
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=250603

[1Man Dynasty]

Check-in

Links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...97#post3497497
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3497541
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3497598
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3497634

[Philly B. Sparkz]

Quick Keyin' y0

Let me describe you...

Chubby, Fat, Bloady, round. The list keeps goin' too
Ya girl stays on my lap - While you just need to run a few
I'm gunnin' foo'..Im doin' me. Best believe this cuzzin'
If your ahead of the game - Then this verse is the reset button
"Flawless Legendz"? Kid I'll meet ya squad wit the pistols
...The roster screamsss 'FL' - Hence that bein' the crews initials
Im livin’ on the edge. Lifes struggle to pass the day
…Your livin’ on the edge…of a street corner & alley way
Plus imma killa, man Im releasin' bolts wit' the gats
...N' end this dynasty..worse than the colts did the pats



GAMEover

[1Man Dynasty]

Correction, the games just started, new kid can contend
I hate to correct you again, but the dynastys not comin to an end
Especially at your hands, you write about fake shit,why? i dont understand
You write about guns, gats, and killin cats, you havent experienced this stuff first hand
You lie when you write, like P. Diddy on the mic
Why you try and rap if you haven't even lived the life
This aint a game of charades, stop actin like you speak the truth
You anti-truth, im just another corrupted youth, and i will kill you
Dont worry bout my crew, Diss on me
My LLL jr. Debut leaves you to Rest in Peace

[DaTrusHurtz]

Chubby, Fat, Bloady, round. The list keeps goin' too
Ya girl stays on my lap - While you just need to run a few
Nicely executed, but very played concept
I'm gunnin' foo'..Im doin' me. Best believe this cuzzin'
If your ahead of the game - Then this verse is the reset button
hehe, fresh, but really more of a statement than punch
"Flawless Legendz"? Kid I'll meet ya squad wit the pistols
...The roster screamsss 'FL' - Hence that bein' the crews initials
coulda been worded better but not bad
Im livin’ on the edge. Lifes struggle to pass the day
…Your livin’ on the edge…of a street corner & alley way
nothing special, but aight
Plus imma killa, man Im releasin' bolts wit' the gats
...N' end this dynasty..worse than the colts did the pats
prolly coulda thought of a better dynasty joke

vs.

Correction, the games just started, new kid can contend
I hate to correct you again, but the dynastys not comin to an end
Just a statement, no punch to this
Especially at your hands, you write about fake shit,why? i dont understand
You write about guns, gats, and killin cats, you havent experienced this stuff first hand
he doesn't actually write about guns, gats, and shit.. if he did it might work
You lie when you write, like P. Diddy on the mic
Why you try and rap if you haven't even lived the life
Eh, neither have you, lol
This aint a game of charades, stop actin like you speak the truth
You anti-truth, im just another corrupted youth, and i will kill you
You will kill him.. okay, no punch tho, just a statement
Dont worry bout my crew, Diss on me
My LLL jr. Debut leaves you to Rest in Peace
Another statement

Overall, Renegade came much weaker than he's capable of and fairly played. However, he took his played concepts and executed them extremely well for the most part. 1man, don't hate me, but you aren't ready for this league yet. Your verse screams front lines. You need more experience in front lines before you are ready here as your verse had no punches. Just a lot of threats saying how you'll kill him and stuff like that, nothing harsh. Elevate ya game if ya wanna compete here as Renegade shitted on you. Sorry

Vote - Renegade

[Marvelous_]

"Flawless Legendz"? Kid I'll meet ya squad wit the pistols
...The roster screamsss 'FL' - Hence that bein' the crews initials
Plus imma killa, man Im releasin' bolts wit' the gats
...N' end this dynasty..worse than the colts did the pats

vs.

nuttin

v/Ren

[Thor]

Chubby, Fat, Bloady, round. The list keeps goin' too
Ya girl stays on my lap - While you just need to run a few

vs

Nothing

[.:KLePTo:.]

Chubby, Fat, Bloady, round. The list keeps goin' too
Ya girl stays on my lap - While you just need to run a few
not really feelin this
I'm gunnin' foo'..Im doin' me. Best believe this cuzzin'
If your ahead of the game - Then this verse is the reset button
didnt like the setup but good delivery lol
"Flawless Legendz"? Kid I'll meet ya squad wit the pistols
...The roster screamsss 'FL' - Hence that bein' the crews initials
probably your best overall bar
Im livin’ on the edge. Lifes struggle to pass the day
…Your livin’ on the edge…of a street corner & alley way
nah this was weak
Plus imma killa, man Im releasin' bolts wit' the gats
...N' end this dynasty..worse than the colts did the pats
setup too e-gangsta, but good finishing line
vs.

Correction, the games just started, new kid can contend
I hate to correct you again, but the dynastys not comin to an end
Especially at your hands, you write about fake shit,why? i dont understand
You write about guns, gats, and killin cats, you havent experienced this stuff first hand
You lie when you write, like P. Diddy on the mic
Why you try and rap if you haven't even lived the life
This aint a game of charades, stop actin like you speak the truth
You anti-truth, im just another corrupted youth, and i will kill you
Dont worry bout my crew, Diss on me
My LLL jr. Debut leaves you to Rest in Peace

I would do a bar by bar breakdown but its all the same response...there just statements

v/Ren

Ren- a weaker verse from you, but wasnt much needed to get this, you had some solid punches and personals on his crew and his name. Only I owuld change really is some of the setups.

1man- overall a weak verse, it really lacked creativity, No personals were really made. you could tell that you read his verse before posting your cause you were responding to some of the things he was saying. You didnt come with any solid punches or personals. And if your going to lack personals then atleast try coming with some multies to fancy up your flow and make your verse look better

[Antonio Banderas]

Chubby, Fat, Bloady, round. The list keeps goin' too
Ya girl stays on my lap - While you just need to run a few
I'm gunnin' foo'..Im doin' me. Best believe this cuzzin'
If your ahead of the game - Then this verse is the reset button
"Flawless Legendz"? Kid I'll meet ya squad wit the pistols
...The roster screamsss 'FL' - Hence that bein' the crews initials
Im livin’ on the edge. Lifes struggle to pass the day
…Your livin’ on the edge…of a street corner & alley way

Verses

Basic rhyming random words...

Vote - Renagade, better disses and more creative. His verse had me laughin.. Great use of creative punches

[Motivated]

I'm gunnin' foo'..Im doin' me. Best believe this cuzzin'
If your ahead of the game - Then this verse is the reset button
"Flawless Legendz"? Kid I'll meet ya squad wit the pistols
...The roster screamsss 'FL' - Hence that bein' the crews initials

vs

Nuttin

Vote-ren.....Renegade didn't come to his full potential and he still got this with better punches,personals and creativity....1man needs to work on his punches and personals

[A. Know-phistage]

I'm gunnin' foo'..Im doin' me. Best believe this cuzzin'
If your ahead of the game - Then this verse is the reset button
"Flawless Legendz"? Kid I'll meet ya squad wit the pistols
...The roster screamsss 'FL' - Hence that bein' the crews initials

vs

nothen

Die Nasty had statements work on punches and rewording

v/ren easy 1

[Seck]

I'm gunnin' foo'..Im doin' me. Best believe this cuzzin'
If your ahead of the game - Then this verse is the reset button

Plus imma killa, man Im releasin' bolts wit' the gats
...N' end this dynasty..worse than the colts did the pats

vs

nothing

Vote: Rennegade

[Ari Gold]

Chubby, Fat, Bloady, round. The list keeps goin' too
Ya girl stays on my lap - While you just need to run a few
I'm gunnin' foo'..Im doin' me. Best believe this cuzzin'
If your ahead of the game - Then this verse is the reset button
"Flawless Legendz"? Kid I'll meet ya squad wit the pistols
...The roster screamsss 'FL' - Hence that bein' the crews initials

vs.

nothing

v/ren

[EmceeR]

Ren
Chubby, Fat, Bloady, round. The list keeps goin' too
Ya girl stays on my lap - While you just need to run a few
"Flawless Legendz"? Kid I'll meet ya squad wit the pistols
...The roster screamsss 'FL' - Hence that bein' the crews initials
Im livin’ on the edge. Lifes struggle to pass the day
…Your livin’ on the edge…of a street corner & alley way

Dynasty
Nothing

V/ renegade...one-sided, Dynasty u need to punch and read more so u can understand battle verses a lil better...this isnt jsut a freestyle battle like on the street yo