10 Lines
Blind Spit
45 Min. After Check
G/L
Celestial
Renagade911
10 Lines
Blind Spit
45 Min. After Check
G/L
Check.
Chizzeck.
you can try ya best, but i'll stab you if you rap it hard
everythings personal to you, ^ so i hope you take that to heart
Rip you apart, Smack you to leave you spinning the vinyl shit
you know your wack when.... Your repping being a Jr Semi Finalist
Im ill with it, Keystyles be hands on
Cos when i pulled this bitchs string.... Out popped a tampon
Ill smash those numbers outta your wack name, cause a wright strain
someday Renegade will go far.... he just needs a ticket for the right train
We know your wack, Quit rapping,know that Cels ill whore
And nobody swings the way you do..Like adam sandler in happy gilmore
Last edited by Cels; October 22nd, 2005 at 03:03 PM
Lets Do this...
Im always quick wit the chrome, Bust a few in this homeless's dome
N' finally give'm a house of his own
...when i leave his death bed in a funeral home
Reppin' Jersey, plz dood take it from me recognize ur Block aint frantics
I'll leave a dent in ur hood, that couldnt be fixed by the best of mechanics
Yea ur moddin, but dood wit ur Lyrics u got no reason to talk, sheesh
if the Truth Lies within my fist, watch how quick i'll leave u wit False teeth
Ur lyrics aint nuffin special, Im WAY above ur level n' that dont mean fuss
Lets jus say u can strip M.Strahan 4 his dental plan, wit the gap between us
Let me state facts, an for some this may seem out of the blue
But the ONLY way u can hand me The L...Is if we battled pink slips 4 ur crew
Shit
Structure came out fucked but o well, Look past it
Hmm... I thought Cel stop'd battling? O well... I'm about to vote.
Celestial - Very dope. The first line was sick, along with the rest of the verse, but it seem'd like you didn't even try. Good shit though. Structure was good and so were punches and personals... Dope.
Renegade - Dope shit as well... I liked the dent in your hood line the most, but other than that, nothing really stood out to me as much. But you did your thing and structure wasn't all that bad. Good drop though.
Vote/ Celestial
Holla at the sig as well... Would appreciate it.
Damn cell, you did good, naw correction, He's GGGRRRREEEEEAAATT.
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you can try ya best, but i'll stab you if you rap it hard
everythings personal to you, ^ so i hope you take that to heart
Good
Rip you apart, Smack you to leave you spinning the vinyl shit
you know your wack when.... Your repping being a Jr Semi Finalist
Good.Nice personal.
Im ill with it, Keystyles be hands on
Cos when i pulled this bitchs string.... Out popped a tampon
lol.gender joke.
Ill smash those numbers outta your wack name, cause a wright strain
someday Renegade will go far.... he just needs a ticket for the right train
history in punches.clever.
We know your wack, Quit rapping,know that Cels ill whore
And nobody swings the way you do..Like adam sandler in happy gilmore
Nice finisher.
[This was good.Original.well played with personals & punches.Flow was steady & structure was at one time a lil indexed.]7.
Im always quick wit the chrome, Bust a few in this homeless's dome
N' finally give'm a house of his own
...when i leave his death bed in a funeral home
Decent.
Reppin' Jersey, plz dood take it from me recognize ur Block aint frantics
I'll leave a dent in ur hood, that couldnt be fixed by the best of mechanics
Ok.
Yea ur moddin, but dood wit ur Lyrics u got no reason to talk, sheesh
if the Truth Lies within my fist, watch how quick i'll leave u wit False teeth
Good.Nice punch.
Ur lyrics aint nuffin special, Im WAY above ur level n' that dont mean fuss
Lets jus say u can strip M.Strahan 4 his dental plan, wit the gap between us
Nice.
Let me state facts, an for some this may seem out of the blue
But the ONLY way u can hand me The L...Is if we battled pink slips 4 ur crew
Nice finisher.
[This was ok.The structure was kind of inverted at point.Punches were nice or decent at a time good.Finisher was somewhat clever.Flow was a lil off & personals 0.]5
v-Cel.
Renagade, Battle?
no beef just want some comp.
ARTIFICIAL | PO'ETHICS | INTELLIGENCE
nyce battle 2 both jez............................................... ...........................................
Yo Ren u gettin up there hommie
Cele ur punches and wordplay waz madd dope man This is the first time I saw u battle and I am impress Thought u just worked all day but ur a dope MC FAv punch waz the happy Gilmore line The opener waz explosive tho fo real 9.8/10
Ren u came hard in this battle u had some dope ass punches and some nice wordplay
Liked the Straham line dope The opener wazn't as dope as I would expect from u but u payed off wit the closer Overall 9/10
v/Cele for comin harder
Nobody get a 10 so don't hate
For real Ren keep it up and u'll become the LLL jr Champ
I the word of the great Tupac Keep ya head up
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thanks
Renegade your first two bars is what lost this for you, they just didnt come hard. Your 4th bar(strahan) was ill, mad creative, flow was good, structure off just by a hair, overal good drop would have beat most.
Celestial stayed consistent wit your punches, nice personal, wordplay was there, good structure and flow, what I liked most i every bar hit, no fillers or weak punches, your 2nd and 4th bar was my fav, but from open to close you did your thing.
v/celestial
props to both
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