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[Feeble]

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[Jug Uh Knot]

Damn Feebs, Damn. I thought this piece
was really nice. This piece was well
thought through. Nice flow and use
of multies. Nice structure too. I was
feeling the last four lines the most. I
didn't know you were so nice at topicals.
Keep it up, keep dropping deep open
mics, those are the ones I enjoy the
most, the ones that actually mean
something. Good work feebs.

[Mistral]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

[Richard Parker]

open mic reply #1
open mic reply #2

[Mistral]

Closed, Just Because You Are A S.Mod Doesnt Mean You Can Bend The Rules To Suit You.

[Richard Parker]

if i wanted to, i probably could. but who said i was trying to bend the rules? it was a joke. don't get so upset over it...



by the way, heres one link. i dont give a fuck if this is opened or not, but i'll give my links anyway to make you happy. btw, i give the best replies this forum has ever seen so don't act like i only post pieces. shit. here's an average reply, still better than 99.9% of people who give feedback tho:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...79#post1412579
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...35#post1412635

[Mistral]

Then get 2 valid links and re-open it lol

[Richard Parker]

fine then. opened. now reply to it yo !

[Ill-Fresh]

cuz we're part of it, our might roused & started it
the axis of evil is really white house to parliament
that was dope there...

liked the concept of this...
structure was ight...
your multi ish was well placed and you somehow kept it simple but made it complex...hmmm?...nice drop...and nice topic

can you hit this up: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...841post1412841

[Feeble]

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[Evolve]

LOL.. great piece Feebs. I like it. Flow was on point & i was feeling your message. Overall good.

[Nahlidge]

Word .. Nice piece here .. Multies helped it out quite a bit .. Added to the flow of it .. Pretty nice read .. Some good thoughts in it .. Short but to the point .. Felt you let the multies get in ur way a bit .. But it was still pretty nice .. Keep writin' .. One

[Telekinetic]

Nice shit man. Flow was killin it at times. The first line was ill.
Good concept too. I just think it needs more imagry. Make it longer.
Overall tho it was nice, i liked the multies. Take some time on it and it
could be in the hall. Good job man. Keep writing

If you dont care hit my OM up I think its really good lemmy know what u think
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=129474
I need some good feedback thanks man

[Bounce]

Nice read feeble, short yet full of meaning. A bit loaded which really made the flow so easy to follow, although in most peices I consider this a negative, but in a complex drop, it only added to it's overall appeal. I can not side with the content, but I can tell you put effort into this, it's as if you want to get it off your chest. So I was really feeling the emotion that you transfered from your being, into this write, great job on that. I would have rather seen this peice given a bit more time to conclude, as the ending was far from rushed, I just feel you needed to expand on it. You made several claims, but in the form of your drop, you did not provide the reader enough insight as to why YOU personally feels as you do. I have some issue's with the contnet, but not the drop itself, artisitcally this is a good drop. Politically, well we can discuss this at a later time...

~Bounce~

[Ken Dawg]

Nice Piece..I wish you wouldn't mouth off to the mods though..it was just a simple rule..and you jus blasted him by giving false links..well we smarties don't fall for that now! Good piece though!!