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Due asap
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10 lines
Due asap
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Asap? I said 1 hour..
Check. Ill just drop soon
yo.. you got a thing for little tale, so away from you i'll stay
the last time i hit up barz, a couple girls were underage
Your not ill, you lack skill, and this aint no free debate
cause i know that you'll be cold, once we have a season
change B's insane? I highly doubt that, & people ghostin all your keys’
whoever puts you in a tag match just cant paranormal team
i'll tell this kid I chill with bangers, tell em' what I rep of course..
Flash him signs on how to rap, because he never met a 4
so drop the bullshit, your not cool kid, & i'm killin you by far
I SAID to drop within an hour, cause ASAP's just what you are
typo* meant i meant
your not ill, you lack skill, and this aint no free debate
cause i know that you'll be cold, once we have a season change
Sorry for the lateness I just got finish laughing at your verse
Idk why u chose rap as a career cuz u wont get far
Shit u probally suck as golfer too cuz your verses arent up to par
I got fresh concepts more new reply's than than fl chatroom
While your style gets shitted n pissed more than stalls in the bathroom
U got weak metaphores,no flow n bad setups can u get any whacker
I think I might be going blind cuz I just cant see u making it as a rapper
You're not confrontational so quit the tough guy act g
We all know ur not a fighter,cuz we seen you smoking crack w/ Dickie
Fuckin w/ Barz is the fastest way to get punched in the kisser
Hell I can even beat you w/ lame name flips cuz you re wack mister
yo.. you got a thing for little tale, so away from you i'll stay
the last time i hit up barz, a couple girls were underage
-nice flip.. weak punch 5
Your not ill, you lack skill, and this aint no free debate
cause i know that you'll be cold, once we have a season change
-I see that the word was just misplaced.. but decent punch 7
B's insane? I highly doubt that, & people ghostin all your keys’
whoever puts you in a tag match just cant paranormal team
-very nice i liked this line.. 9
i'll tell this kid I chill with bangers, tell em' what I rep of course..
Flash him signs on how to rap, because he never met a 4
-eh i get it.. but weak punch.. 4
so drop the bullshit, your not cool kid, & i'm killin you by far
I SAID to drop within an hour, cause ASAP's just what you are
-nice.. finisher.. 833/50
Idk why u chose rap as a career cuz u wont get far
Shit u probally suck as golfer too cuz your verses arent up to par
-a golf line... weak punch 3I got fresh concepts more new reply's than than fl chatroom
While your style gets shitted n pissed more than stalls in the bathroom
-could have been worded better... decent 5U got weak metaphores,no flow n bad setups can u get any whacker
I think I might be going blind cuz I just cant see u making it as a rapper
-this was a good punch.. old concept 7You're not confrontational so quit the tough guy act g
We all know ur not a fighter,cuz we seen you smoking crack w/ Dickie
-eh the flow was really bad on this one.. punch was ok.. 6Fuckin w/ Barz is the fastest way to get punched in the kisser
Hell I can even beat you w/ lame name flips cuz you re wack mister
-horrible finisher.. just a filler line 425/50
vote Mr Wack
Decent battle. Both had their ups and downs, yet Barz had the slightly harder punches. Wack got beat by a small margin. Both had some clever lines but someones gotta win so I got Barz on this one.
Structure: even
Wordplay: even
Punches: Barz
Creativity: Barz
So my vote goes to Barz
Up, links soon
mr wack
yo.. you got a thing for little tale, so away from you i'll stay
the last time i hit up barz, a couple girls were underage
lol nice concept good np reference
Your not ill, you lack skill, and this aint no free debate
cause i know that you'll be cold, once we have a season
huh??? no ryhem scheme here
change B's insane? I highly doubt that, & people ghostin all your keys’
whoever puts you in a tag match just cant paranormal team
ok good concept flip
i'll tell this kid I chill with bangers, tell em' what I rep of course..
Flash him signs on how to rap, because he never met a 4
ok cool flip nice wp
so drop the bullshit, your not cool kid, & i'm killin you by far
I SAID to drop within an hour, cause ASAP's just what you are
ok
barz
Idk why u chose rap as a career cuz u wont get far
Shit u probally suck as golfer too cuz your verses arent up to par
played concept no hate
I got fresh concepts more new reply's than than fl chatroom
While your style gets shitted n pissed more than stalls in the bathroom
played concept again
U got weak metaphores,no flow n bad setups can u get any whacker
I think I might be going blind cuz I just cant see u making it as a rapper
ok not bad
You're not confrontational so quit the tough guy act g
We all know ur not a fighter,cuz we seen you smoking crack w/ Dickie
nah
Fuckin w/ Barz is the fastest way to get punched in the kisser
Hell I can even beat you w/ lame name flips cuz you re wack mister
nah
V/mr wack just had better concepts no hate to barz had some played concepts and too many misses.
so drop the bullshit, your not cool kid, & i'm killin you by far
I SAID to drop within an hour, cause ASAP's just what you are
vs.
I got fresh concepts more new reply's than than fl chatroom
While your style gets shitted n pissed more than stalls in the bathroom
Barz came with one good hit, while Wack had weak punches. Wack threw more punches, and Wack had played concepts. Other then the quote, Barz's lines were miss's.
V - Wack.
Mr. Wack
change B's insane? I highly doubt that, & people ghostin all your keys’
whoever puts you in a tag match just cant paranormal team
so drop the bullshit, your not cool kid, & i'm killin you by far
I SAID to drop within an hour, cause ASAP's just what you are
some ok shit here, had some aight wp that connected directly.
BARz.
I got fresh concepts more new reply's than than fl chatroom
While your style gets shitted n pissed more than stalls in the bathroom
the shitted on and bathroom reference flips are really played my nigga, unless ur not deliverin it in some fresh ass shit no ones ever heard before, i'd stray away from those easy traps.
it's not really a quotable, but its your verse highlight f'sure. ------------------------------------------
think it was sorta close in judgin, but overall just think Wack over here had some better set ups/punches while his verse kept me a bit more interested than Barz' drop.
lotta Barz' shit just seemed to end up with references that had no sting behind em at all, no offense. keep workin on gettin more direct on Wack, show some creativity, find some better nameplays if ya can nd form those punches with decent set ups. dont just spontaniously add a punch in the last line, nahmean?
'nuffs been said here, keep doin ur thing niggy's.
Vote-> Mr.Wack
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thank for the votes guys good feedback
Mr. Wack
yo.. you got a thing for little tale, so away from you i'll stay
the last time i hit up barz, a couple girls were underage
-interesting concept, flawed execution
Your not ill, you lack skill, and this aint no free debate
cause i know that you'll be cold, once we have a season change
-meh
change B's insane? I highly doubt that, & people ghostin all your keys’
whoever puts you in a tag match just cant paranormal team
-pretty good wordplay
i'll tell this kid I chill with bangers, tell em' what I rep of course..
Flash him signs on how to rap, because he never met a 4
-no, doesnt work
so drop the bullshit, your not cool kid, & i'm killin you by far
I SAID to drop within an hour, cause ASAP's just what you are
-decent, calling him a sap
BARz
Idk why u chose rap as a career cuz u wont get far
Shit u probally suck as golfer too cuz your verses arent up to par
-Played
I got fresh concepts more new reply's than than fl chatroom
While your style gets shitted n pissed more than stalls in the bathroom
-meh
U got weak metaphores,no flow n bad setups can u get any whacker
I think I might be going blind cuz I just cant see u making it as a rapper
-nope
You're not confrontational so quit the tough guy act g
We all know ur not a fighter,cuz we seen you smoking crack w/ Dickie
-doesnt even make sense
Fuckin w/ Barz is the fastest way to get punched in the kisser
Hell I can even beat you w/ lame name flips cuz you re wack mister
-blah
Pretty one sided battle, Mr. Wack had a couple good concepts and with better wording couldve had some good punches. Barz had played concepts and bad wording. I give this one to Wack for having harder punches overall.
V/ Mr. Wack