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i hope your adreneline gives you a better pen against this magnificent veteran, as i rend
your development, i need no guns, AKs, Macs, glocks... nigga, i kill with the letter, man//
Bah, you a bitch, be calm, with your midget arms, everything you do is a pitiful reach
my bombs will Wesley Snipe your ass, showing that all your accounts is riddled with leaks//
liars and fakes get shanked and stuffed, i see you've been battlin mostly wierdos, fags and bums
so you ain't no hero, I see the real MCs seem to put a stiffy in you like you're Blankman's trunks//
now you in front of a real one, Mr. Bahriman, you play'n Atari since niggas been bangin your Ex-box
in other words, your game is week, shit nigga, i'll give you seven days to edit your text drop//
and let's not pretend your rep's hot, every line you write seems to lead you to bleek mistakes
i read other battles, i believe their shit, but verses you write takes gigantic leaps of faith//
let me tweak my aim and get ready to animal slam this flunky hard like a mosh pit of drunk retards
RB is for sasquatch and apes, dawg, you best beat it before we swing on your dumb ass monkey bars//
Ay.. my b homie I can post tonight if you with it? If not take the NS win
Nah, you're good. Post when u can
Beat down have’em fallin harder than Scott Hall, fate is death
Soon as I hear Ayo in the ring? Finish’em wen I hit’em w/a Razors Edge
All flames w/the strike force, str8 drop this weak
Give your life a lil Rizin round house kick you off your feet
Get the bat to your skull if you brave. Man I’m sicknin
Bash in Aa Cap till we can’t recognize his Atlanta Fitted
Wifey say ur weak father figure, u have no control & that’s lame
Yoshi think y’all should see Maury, Yo... plus the bitch older than that game
The goodie gang teach’em a lesson cos your frail n light
We talk bout Aa Minus success cos it didn’t take report cards to k ow you’re a failure @ life
Shorty pump blow ya back out, str8 expose this kid hard
Only reason Anus s’cos he needs to be wiped up for dropping such shit bars
So yea,
i hope your adreneline gives you a better pen against this magnificent veteran, as i rend
your development, i need no guns, AKs, Macs, glocks... nigga, i kill with the letter, man//
^ok
Bah, you a bitch, be calm, with your midget arms, everything you do is a pitiful reach
my bombs will Wesley Snipe your ass, showing that all your accounts is riddled with leaks//
^damn, pretty cool
liars and fakes get shanked and stuffed, i see you've been battlin mostly wierdos, fags and bums
so you ain't no hero, I see the real MCs seem to put a stiffy in you like you're Blankman's trunks//
^decent concept, poor delivery
now you in front of a real one, Mr. Bahriman, you play'n Atari since niggas been bangin your Ex-box
in other words, your game is week, shit nigga, i'll give you seven days to edit your text drop//
^pretty good
and let's not pretend your rep's hot, every line you write seems to lead you to bleek mistakes
i read other battles, i believe their shit, but verses you write takes gigantic leaps of faith//
^dannng good one
let me tweak my aim and get ready to animal slam this flunky hard like a mosh pit of drunk retards
RB is for sasquatch and apes, dawg, you best beat it before we swing on your dumb ass monkey bars//
^meh
4*/6
vs
Beat down have’em fallin harder than Scott Hall, fate is death
Soon as I hear Ayo in the ring? Finish’em wen I hit’em w/a Razors Edge
^ok, flow was off tho
All flames w/the strike force, str8 drop this weak
Give your life a lil Rizin round house kick you off your feet
^meh
Get the bat to your skull if you brave. Man I’m sicknin
Bash in Aa Cap till we can’t recognize his Atlanta Fitted
^good one
Wifey say ur weak father figure, u have no control & that’s lame
Yoshi think y’all should see Maury, Yo... plus the bitch older than that game
^this was good
The goodie gang teach’em a lesson cos your frail n light
We talk bout Aa Minus success cos it didn’t take report cards to k ow you’re a failure @ life
^meh, too wordy
Shorty pump blow ya back out, str8 expose this kid hard
Only reason Anus s’cos he needs to be wiped up for dropping such shit bars
^pretty cool, a bit wordy and reached from Anus(A in this)
*4/6
I got both battlers drawing in terms of total punches landed. It came down to the jabs versus the haymakers. With that being said. Aeeyo had the LineOfTheBattle W/
and let's not pretend your rep's hot, every line you write seems to lead you to bleek mistakes
i read other battles, i believe their shit, but verses you write takes gigantic leaps of faith//
^just hit harshly and was well placed in the verse
But Bahriman had the most consistent power shots throughout his verse while he was jabbed by his opponent.
Consistent lines like:
Get the bat to your skull if you brave. Man I’m sicknin
Bash in Aa Cap till we can’t recognize his Atlanta Fitted
Wifey say ur weak father figure, u have no control & that’s lame
Yoshi think y’all should see Maury, Yo... plus the bitch older than that game
V/Bahriman by a bahr
Uppin
I wasnt feeling none of the first verse at all, u need to restructure ur style or atleast have good punch lines. Second verse was wayyy better, but still not good tho. U got the formula down and had some good lines but gotta step it up against real comp. U had 3 lines I liked
V. Bahrima
Beat down have’em fallin harder than Scott Hall, fate is death
Soon as I hear Ayo in the ring? Finish’em wen I hit’em w/a Razors Edge
Wifey say ur weak father figure, u have no control & that’s lame
Yoshi think y’all should see Maury, Yo... plus the bitch older than that game
( the send bar was kinda eh,,,, but its enough to be quoted ...
vs
NOTHING.... ( try a personal, nameflip.... something'....
V- BAH
Bahr wins