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there's no use trying, when I am rhymin, my punches do it one time and
as I'm spy'n, you seem like the Private Ryan of these Front Lines, man//
you gots no weapons, you gots no heart, niggaz be easily stomping you dead
bet money if I opened your chest, the insides would be darker than under-the-bed//
but I got you thoroughly read, you a waste of time, don't know why the mods let me bother
got me quoting your mother like "mmm, mmm, mmm... nigga, you like your dead-beat father"//
so take a swing if you can Net, no strange thing if you ran at the sight of my bombs
next time you'll learn to use a Samsung Galaxy when you wanna take a swipe at an icon//
we know you a light job, you don't drop lines smart, we gonna put you in ya place
you may think we swallow'n your Kool-Aid until we spit nigga... and punch-you-in-your-face//
netcees make you cower and quake, beg and plead, tucked in your hiding place like a snitch
bet you won't even respond to this spit, got this nigga in outer space whisper'n "biiiiitch"//
ain't no such thing as half way crooks.
Check my rap sheet, I NEVER DUCK==I'll take multiple battles in one day ask Anybody who know me:
All I need is an Established AGREEment you Fkn rookie!
ALotta niggas get L's, AY bro feelin like a crook cuz he took some
N when this carbon Pop n dye Ock's hide, bet his bottle head leak like a shook1!
Screamin Aeeyo! n won't shut up, so if u wanna press ya luck try it
I'll slay ya bitch where u lay, n only then can yu tell me to Keep the Fuck quiet!
Quote:
Originally Posted by AeeYo
^TWO HRS LATER<(he posts battle/I'm offline/jus logged on @ 11am)Quote:
Originally Posted by Networth
Like you tryn cuff a bitch... it took forever 'fore you got in that bed
If Net dont get a response I leave the cutty, spend all his time lookin at threads!
Frontn like I knew that battle was set, but didn't think I'd drop? quit
Now I'ma throw this quick key I made at ya face hoe, u just upset the locksmith!
N try some slick shit w/ My bitch, im comin forum, he gettin clocked
I'll notify u once u TapaTalk, cause I'll send these messengers through ya inbox!
Now niggas know how he boost, n won't lend a hand in defendin him
Im bouta show ya underlyin tendency, as I make habits tearin you limb from limb!
FOH Herb
Up for votes
there's no use trying, when I am rhymin, my punches do it one time and
as I'm spy'n, you seem like the Private Ryan of these Front Lines, man//
--miss
you gots no weapons, you gots no heart, niggaz be easily stomping you dead
bet money if I opened your chest, the insides would be darker than under-the-bed//
--darker than under the bed???? Lol wtf..noooooo
but I got you thoroughly read, you a waste of time, don't know why the mods let me bother
got me quoting your mother like "mmm, mmm, mmm... nigga, you like your dead-beat father"//
--mom mom mmm??? Back2back horrible bars
so take a swing if you can Net, no strange thing if you ran at the sight of my bombs
next time you'll learn to use a Samsung Galaxy when you wanna take a swipe at an icon//
--supa lite
we know you a light job, you don't drop lines smart, we gonna put you in ya place
you may think we swallow'n your Kool-Aid until we spit nigga... and punch-you-in-your-face//
--hell no
netcees make you cower and quake, beg and plead, tucked in your hiding place like a snitch
bet you won't even respond to this spit, got this nigga in outer space whisper'n "biiiiitch"//
--im gonna whisper.... "no"
*******************
Check my rap sheet, I NEVER DUCK==I'll take multiple battles in one day ask Anybody who know me:
All I need is an Established AGREEment you Fkn rookie!
--lol
ALotta niggas get L's, AY bro feelin like a crook cuz he took some
N when this carbon Pop n dye Ock's hide, bet his bottle head leak like a shook1!
--ok
Screamin Aeeyo! n won't shut up, so if u wanna press ya luck try it
I'll slay ya bitch where u lay, n only then can yu tell me to Keep the Fuck quiet!
--cool
Like you tryn cuff a bitch... it took forever 'fore you got in that bed
If Net dont get a response I leave the cutty, spend all his time lookin at threads!
--not feelin
Frontn like I knew that battle was set, but didn't think I'd drop? quit
Now I'ma throw this quick key I made at ya face hoe, u just upset the locksmith!
--dope
N try some slick shit w/ My bitch, im comin forum, he gettin clocked
I'll notify u once u TapaTalk, cause I'll send these messengers through ya inbox!
--nah
Now niggas know how he boost, n won't lend a hand in defendin him
Im bouta show ya underlyin tendency, as I make habits tearin you limb from limb!
--decent finish
V- Net
Bump! i will vote on this today!
Aeeyo
no use trying, when I am rhymin, my punches do it one time and
as I'm spy'n, you seem like the Private Ryan of these Front Lines, man//
set up didnt really lead into the punch or compliment it except for the rhyme scheme BUT i see where you were going with the punch. it was just a bit under developed tho. a proper set up for have have establish where the "front lines/Private Ryan" punch was headed.
you gots no weapons, you gots no heart, niggaz be easily stomping you dead
bet money if I opened your chest, the insides would be darker than under-the-bed//
wasnt really feeling this one bro. it came off a bit soft. didn feel like you were attacking him enough
but I got you thoroughly read, you a waste of time, don't know why the mods let me bother
got me quoting your mother like "mmm, mmm, mmm... nigga, you like your dead-beat father"//
this was a decent jab. im a fan of the kind of abstract punches.
so take a swing if you can Net, no strange thing if you ran at the sight of my bombs
next time you'll learn to use a Samsung Galaxy when you wanna take a swipe at an icon//
im gonna say this was a jab because of wording. this punch had fire potential
we know you a light job, you don't drop lines smart, we gonna put you in ya place
you may think we swallow'n your Kool-Aid until we spit nigga... and punch-you-in-your-face//
i wasnt feel this one. the metaphor was kind of there but the conclusion was too direct.
netcees make you cower and quake, beg and plead, tucked in your hiding place like a snitch
bet you won't even respond to this spit, got this nigga in outer space whisper'n "biiiiitch"//
lol was this a key an peele reference wasnt a haymaker but i laughed a bit. this was ok
vs
Networth
ALotta niggas get L's, AY bro feelin like a crook cuz he took some
N when this carbon Pop n dye Ock's hide, bet his bottle head leak like a shook1!
this was a decent opener.
Screamin Aeeyo! n won't shut up, so if u wanna press ya luck try it
I'll slay ya bitch where u lay, n only then can yu tell me to Keep the Fuck quiet!
too simple. if you are gonna go this simple have some nasty sarcasm or satire with it.
Quote Originally Posted by AeeYo View Post
Post 12-16 lines. I'm good to respond.
Quote Originally Posted by Networth View Post
Looks like you took too long killa, lemme know if you down for one, i can post by tonight @AeeYo ^TWO HRS LATER<(he posts battle/I'm offline/jus logged on @ 11am)
Like you tryn cuff a bitch... it took forever 'fore you got in that bed
If Net dont get a response I leave the cutty, spend all his time lookin at threads!
not feeling this one.
Frontn like I knew that battle was set, but didn't think I'd drop? quit
Now I'ma throw this quick key I made at ya face hoe, u just upset the locksmith!
this was a bit witty i like it
N try some slick shit w/ My bitch, im comin forum, he gettin clocked
I'll notify u once u TapaTalk, cause I'll send these messengers through ya inbox!
doest tapatalk still work on here? lol i think this is an dead concept.
Now niggas know how he boost, n won't lend a hand in defendin him
Im bouta show ya underlyin tendency, as I make habits tearin you limb from limb!
not really feeling this closer. it wasnt a complete miss but yeh not for me
v/Networth
i feel out of the 2 verses Net had the heavier punches and his verse was overall more solid than Aeeyo's. Both had a few misses but Aeeyo's i feel were more of a reach. i know this is an older battle as both of you have show a lot of grown since this was dropped.
there's no use trying, when I am rhymin, my punches do it one time and
as I'm spy'n, you seem like the Private Ryan of these Front Lines, man//
Nothing here
you gots no weapons, you gots no heart, niggaz be easily stomping you dead
bet money if I opened your chest, the insides would be darker than under-the-bed//
again theres nothing here really...."If i opened your chest"? why not Open his just and not IF?
but I got you thoroughly read, you a waste of time, don't know why the mods let me bother
got me quoting your mother like "mmm, mmm, mmm... nigga, you like your dead-beat father"//
No man...
so take a swing if you can Net, no strange thing if you ran at the sight of my bombs
next time you'll learn to use a Samsung Galaxy when you wanna take a swipe at an icon//
what?
we know you a light job, you don't drop lines smart, we gonna put you in ya place
you may think we swallow'n your Kool-Aid until we spit nigga... and punch-you-in-your-face//
played concept.. COol aid, punch you dont think all the years of text no ones done this shit?
netcees make you cower and quake, beg and plead, tucked in your hiding place like a snitch
bet you won't even respond to this spit, got this nigga in outer space whisper'n "biiiiitch"//
No
Vs
ALotta niggas get L's, AY bro feelin like a crook cuz he took some
N when this carbon Pop n dye Ock's hide, bet his bottle head leak like a shook1!
what does this have to do with aeyoo tho? i dont get it
Screamin Aeeyo! n won't shut up, so if u wanna press ya luck try it
I'll slay ya bitch where u lay, n only then can yu tell me to Keep the Fuck quiet!
this was cool
Quote Originally Posted by AeeYo View Post
Post 12-16 lines. I'm good to respond.
Quote Originally Posted by Networth View Post
Looks like you took too long killa, lemme know if you down for one, i can post by tonight @AeeYo ^TWO HRS LATER<(he posts battle/I'm offline/jus logged on @ 11am)
Like you tryn cuff a bitch... it took forever 'fore you got in that bed
If Net dont get a response I leave the cutty, spend all his time lookin at threads!
no
Frontn like I knew that battle was set, but didn't think I'd drop? quit
Now I'ma throw this quick key I made at ya face hoe, u just upset the locksmith!
another dated concept... come on man
N try some slick shit w/ My bitch, im comin forum, he gettin clocked
I'll notify u once u TapaTalk, cause I'll send these messengers through ya inbox!
this bar didnt make sense at all... and commin forum lmao
Now niggas know how he boost, n won't lend a hand in defendin him
Im bouta show ya underlyin tendency, as I make habits tearin you limb from limb
bland
Overall - weak battle. both had played concepts.. abunch of misses. net had bars didnt make sense aswell as aeyoo.. I got net with one quote that connected and his misses were better
V/Net
there's no use trying, when I am rhymin, my punches do it one time and
as I'm spy'n, you seem like the Private Ryan of these Front Lines, man//
Nothing here
you gots no weapons, you gots no heart, niggaz be easily stomping you dead
bet money if I opened your chest, the insides would be darker than under-the-bed//
again theres nothing here really...."If i opened your chest"? why not Open his just and not IF?
but I got you thoroughly read, you a waste of time, don't know why the mods let me bother
got me quoting your mother like "mmm, mmm, mmm... nigga, you like your dead-beat father"//
No man...
so take a swing if you can Net, no strange thing if you ran at the sight of my bombs
next time you'll learn to use a Samsung Galaxy when you wanna take a swipe at an icon//
what?
we know you a light job, you don't drop lines smart, we gonna put you in ya place
you may think we swallow'n your Kool-Aid until we spit nigga... and punch-you-in-your-face//
played concept.. COol aid, punch you dont think all the years of text no ones done this shit?
netcees make you cower and quake, beg and plead, tucked in your hiding place like a snitch
bet you won't even respond to this spit, got this nigga in outer space whisper'n "biiiiitch"//
No
Vs
ALotta niggas get L's, AY bro feelin like a crook cuz he took some
N when this carbon Pop n dye Ock's hide, bet his bottle head leak like a shook1!
what does this have to do with aeyoo tho? i dont get it
Screamin Aeeyo! n won't shut up, so if u wanna press ya luck try it
I'll slay ya bitch where u lay, n only then can yu tell me to Keep the Fuck quiet!
this was cool
Quote Originally Posted by AeeYo View Post
Post 12-16 lines. I'm good to respond.
Quote Originally Posted by Networth View Post
Looks like you took too long killa, lemme know if you down for one, i can post by tonight @AeeYo ^TWO HRS LATER<(he posts battle/I'm offline/jus logged on @ 11am)
Like you tryn cuff a bitch... it took forever 'fore you got in that bed
If Net dont get a response I leave the cutty, spend all his time lookin at threads!
no
Frontn like I knew that battle was set, but didn't think I'd drop? quit
Now I'ma throw this quick key I made at ya face hoe, u just upset the locksmith!
another dated concept... come on man
N try some slick shit w/ My bitch, im comin forum, he gettin clocked
I'll notify u once u TapaTalk, cause I'll send these messengers through ya inbox!
this bar didnt make sense at all... and commin forum lmao
Now niggas know how he boost, n won't lend a hand in defendin him
Im bouta show ya underlyin tendency, as I make habits tearin you limb from limb
bland
Overall - weak battle. both had played concepts.. abunch of misses. net had bars didnt make sense aswell as aeyoo.. I got net with one quote that connected and his misses were better
V/Net
Net wins