Stompin VS Def By Mouf
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Stompin VS Def By Mouf
Battle check 1,2.........I believe stomps rules were:
1o lines
no crew votes
you spit first
my bad 10 or more lines, well here goes my verse:
I know why they call u stompin, cuz that's whats gon happen,
Except u gon be on the floor wit ya facial bones crackin,
U say u just out to be laughin well i am 2,
But we laughin fa diffrent reasons cuz i'm laughin at u,
And i'm not the only one, i got ya family on my side,
At least what's left of it cuz y parents left and ya dogs died,
I'll leave u straight tounge tied and at a loss for words,
And show u the meanin of ya name after u......bite the curb,
U got a loss comin and a...lot ta learn,
Cuz i'll have ya face burnin, like it was after an....active perm,
Leave u tac-i-turn and ya eyes left closed,
And steal ya kicks and sell em back to the hobos,
Def is a promo, like franchise material,
While u still lookin 4 ya parents on the backs of milk and cereals.
so you say my facial bones will be crackin
doubt it i might not speak to me family but its your il be slapping
hey i heard of where you been shacking
ya aunts she had a baby its yours and when it was born it was quacking
mouf you have left me lost for words
because i just found out ya a pc nerd
kritikal just a group of wanna be jailbirds
jerk off allday sit and try and crack passwords
but as we all know there aint no such thing as half way crooks
try messing with some real gangstas tear ya eyes out with fishhooks
your a geek thats it i give up cant stop laughing seen them pics out ya yearbook
Okay battles ova lets' get some votes................Favas will be returned.
aiight aiight....Pretty weak dayum battle but it's obvious Def had the less whack verse......the other kids lines was Too basic and Horribly Stretched
Vote= DEF
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=156844
Oh yeah Vote on That Easy win
ok battle...lemme break it down...
def by mouf ---
I know why they call u stompin, cuz that's whats gon happen,
Except u gon be on the floor wit ya facial bones crackin,
"ok opener"
U say u just out to be laughin well i am 2,
But we laughin fa diffrent reasons cuz i'm laughin at u,
"kinda whack"
And i'm not the only one, i got ya family on my side,
At least what's left of it cuz y parents left and ya dogs died,
"decent"
I'll leave u straight tounge tied and at a loss for words,
And show u the meanin of ya name after u......bite the curb,
"decent"
U got a loss comin and a...lot ta learn,
Cuz i'll have ya face burnin, like it was after an....active perm,
"decent"
Leave u tac-i-turn and ya eyes left closed,
And steal ya kicks and sell em back to the hobos,
"okay"
Def is a promo, like franchise material,
While u still lookin 4 ya parents on the backs of milk and cereals.
"okay ender"
mc.stompin ---
so you say my facial bones will be crackin
doubt it i might not speak to me family but its your il be slapping
"whack opener"
hey i heard of where you been shacking
ya aunts she had a baby its yours and when it was born it was quacking
"whack"
mouf you have left me lost for words
because i just found out ya a pc nerd
"okay but played"
kritikal just a group of wanna be jailbirds
jerk off allday sit and try and crack passwords
"decent"
but as we all know there aint no such thing as half way crooks
try messing with some real gangstas tear ya eyes out with fishhooks
"good but too stretched"
your a geek thats it i give up cant stop laughing seen them pics out ya yearbook
"decent finisher"
overall---
def got this one with better flow and structure overall and had better rhymes...no hating! stompin, you should be more creative and expand your vocabulary a bit. def you should try getting in some harder punches and maybe some multies to really get the better of your opponent.
v/ def by mouf
uppin fa votes #3.................
Plz get at this don't sleep on this battle, we need a winner.
upiin #4.................i need votes people c'mon.......
last upp c'mon folks score is 2-0 me and i need votes ta win....favas will be returned...let's get some votes.
Originally posted by:DBM
I know why they call u stompin, cuz that's whats gon happen,
Except u gon be on the floor wit ya facial bones crackin,
NOPE
U say u just out to be laughin well i am 2,
But we laughin fa diffrent reasons cuz i'm laughin at u,
FILLER
And i'm not the only one, i got ya family on my side,
At least what's left of it cuz y parents left and ya dogs died,
FILLER
I'll leave u straight tounge tied and at a loss for words,
And show u the meanin of ya name after u......bite the curb,
YOUR BEST BAR
U got a loss comin and a...lot ta learn,
Cuz i'll have ya face burnin, like it was after an....active perm,
NOPE
Leave u tac-i-turn and ya eyes left closed,
And steal ya kicks and sell em back to the hobos,
DIDN'T LIKE
Def is a promo, like franchise material,
While u still lookin 4 ya parents on the backs of milk and cereals.
WEAK ENDING PLUS I DIDN'T KNOW MISSIN PEOPLE CAN BE ON THE BACK OF A CEREAL BOX NITHER BUT AIGHT FLOW YOU'VE DONE WAY BETTER BEFORE
Originally posted by:Stompin
so you say my facial bones will be crackin
doubt it i might not speak to me family but its your il be slapping
WEAK OPENER
hey i heard of where you been shacking
ya aunts she had a baby its yours and when it was born it was quacking
STUPID
mouf you have left me lost for words
because i just found out ya a pc nerd
DIDN'T LIKE
kritikal just a group of wanna be jailbirds
jerk off allday sit and try and crack passwords
YA BEST PUNCH,PERSONAL,AND BAR THROUGH THE WHOLE VERSE
but as we all know there aint no such thing as half way crooks
try messing with some real gangstas tear ya eyes out with fishhooks
STRETCHED TO SHIT PLUS YOU STOLE THAT LINE OFF 8 MILE THE MOVIE
your a geek thats it i give up cant stop laughing seen them pics out ya yearbook
WEAK CLOSER
you still got to work on some things and lord don't bite from other kats
and more like don't bite off movies aight then one love.
V/DBM
for overall better verse harder punches
and better structure and wordplay.
Stompin you fasho didn't win cuz you bit that bar quote:AINT NO SUCH THING IS HALF WAY CROOKS sorry aight then one love.
hit the link back peace be still.
mmm kay here goes plz return favour
def
I know why they call u stompin, cuz that's whats gon happen,
Except u gon be on the floor wit ya facial bones crackin,
U say u just out to be laughin well i am 2,
But we laughin fa diffrent reasons cuz i'm laughin at u,
And i'm not the only one, i got ya family on my side,
At least what's left of it cuz y parents left and ya dogs died,
I'll leave u straight tounge tied and at a loss for words,
And show u the meanin of ya name after u......bite the curb,
U got a loss comin and a...lot ta learn,
Cuz i'll have ya face burnin, like it was after an....active perm,
Leave u tac-i-turn and ya eyes left closed,
And steal ya kicks and sell em back to the hobos,
Def is a promo, like franchise material,
While u still lookin 4 ya parents on the backs of milk and cereals
yer i liked that nice flow good punches good structure
so you say my facial bones will be crackin
doubt it i might not speak to me family but its your il be slapping
hey i heard of where you been shacking
ya aunts she had a baby its yours and when it was born it was quacking
mouf you have left me lost for words
because i just found out ya a pc nerd
kritikal just a group of wanna be jailbirds
jerk off allday sit and try and crack passwords
but as we all know there aint no such thing as half way crooks
try messing with some real gangstas tear ya eyes out with fishhooks
your a geek thats it i give up cant stop laughing seen them pics out ya yearbook
mm ye wus good sept for the last part wich reminded me ov papa doc n eminem battle 2 much ya had sum good punches tho and a nice flow
no hate both were good but overall i think def won for good punches
MC Stompin is stomped by def...
def weren't good but his rhymes weren't from nursery books
def killed this on... if i could vote it would be for def keep it up playboy...return tha fave
I know why they call u stompin, cuz that's whats gon happen,
Except u gon be on the floor wit ya facial bones crackin,
meh... not feelin it.
U say u just out to be laughin well i am 2,
But we laughin fa diffrent reasons cuz i'm laughin at u,
i thought it was funny
And i'm not the only one, i got ya family on my side,
At least what's left of it cuz y parents left and ya dogs died,
funny... but a filler
I'll leave u straight tounge tied and at a loss for words,
And show u the meanin of ya name after u......bite the curb,
good personal.
U got a loss comin and a...lot ta learn,
Cuz i'll have ya face burnin, like it was after an....active perm,
no me gusta. ya look like ya tryin multis but ur not gettin 'em
Leave u tac-i-turn and ya eyes left closed,
And steal ya kicks and sell em back to the hobos,
meh. filler w/no point
Def is a promo, like franchise material,
While u still lookin 4 ya parents on the backs of milk and cereals.
ok, but not. overall, O-K verse... i think?
stompin:
so you say my facial bones will be crackin
doubt it i might not speak to me family but its your il be slapping
hey i heard of where you been shacking
ya aunts she had a baby its yours and when it was born it was quacking
mouf you have left me lost for words
because i just found out ya a pc nerd
kritikal just a group of wanna be jailbirds
jerk off allday sit and try and crack passwords
but as we all know there aint no such thing as half way crooks
try messing with some real gangstas tear ya eyes out with fishhooks
stolen from 8 mile. gayness.
your a geek thats it i give up cant stop laughing seen them pics out ya yearbook
an ODD # of lines?! hell- no.
stomp, man u gotta just keep at it, cuz the more you try the better u'll get. however, your verse was just... and i'm trying to be nice about it... wack as fuck.
Def took this, b/c he had the (slightly) better verse.
vote= Def