LLL Jr. Week 6
Word Holiday Season is over
League has been cut
Each week there will be a boot match giving others the chance to get in...
Usual rules...Check by wednesday drop by friday
any problems pm me
good luck :2thumb:
Happy new year
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LLL Jr. Week 6
Word Holiday Season is over
League has been cut
Each week there will be a boot match giving others the chance to get in...
Usual rules...Check by wednesday drop by friday
any problems pm me
good luck :2thumb:
Happy new year
You’re a fucking pussy, so it pleases me when you wince
Cause Aines set this battle up..................
......................................And you haven’t came online since
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Your respected? There’s no way. Your concepts are boring and old.
The only time you get hailed upon is when the weather is freezing cold.
Damn replacement. You aren’t the dude that I’m supposed to be beating.
We all know you wouldn’t be here if D.Zaster wasn’t caught cheating.
My shit is easily above yours. You have no chance in this battle, whore.
The only time you hangover me is when you got drunk the night before.
You don’t make smart decisions. So I’m gonna to put you in your place.
Like when you called out IJL, knowing a joker always beats an ace.
With that name and that avatar. You have finally proven your gay.
Because I don’t like to playboy, but I’ll beat his ass any day!
You’ll need the luck of the Irish to win. Grab yourself a clover.
If your New Years resolution is not to lose, that shit is over.
can't believe Aes no showed, smh
v/ emanate
Mehh was busy sry guys...i'll drop now love you all :)
Blah i let you in my crew, but dude just to cover you.
& man fuck wrestling........it's been too long since ECW's
I run you bitch, get off of it, i booted u from my faction.
& noone knows your sexuality......s'why he loves trans-actions.
I'll smother you, man you've sucked too long kid i'll trash ya
& i'd tell u to show up dope, but u already fucked that up
Your a sad joke, emanate? why would i even care?
& dude would NEVER have a name.......
.....if i wouldn't have had a spare*
But really who cares? man this kid will never get a win.
& your deserving of this title....pfft lying is a sin.
You’re a fucking pussy, so it pleases me when you wince
Cause Aines set this battle up..................
......................................And you haven’t came online since
So so, didn't hit that hard
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Your respected? There’s no way. Your concepts are boring and old.
The only time you get hailed upon is when the weather is freezing cold.
Cool
Damn replacement. You aren’t the dude that I’m supposed to be beating.
We all know you wouldn’t be here if D.Zaster wasn’t caught cheating.
Decent
My shit is easily above yours. You have no chance in this battle, whore.
The only time you hangover me is when you got drunk the night before.
Cool
You don’t make smart decisions. So I’m gonna to put you in your place.
Like when you called out IJL, knowing a joker always beats an ace.
Nah
With that name and that avatar. You have finally proven your gay.
Because I don’t like to playboy, but I’ll beat his ass any day!
Odd, not feeling
You’ll need the luck of the Irish to win. Grab yourself a clover.
If your New Years resolution is not to lose, that shit is over.
Nah, too simple
Blah i let you in my crew, but dude just to cover you.
& man fuck wrestling........it's been too long since ECW's
Niice
I run you bitch, get off of it, i booted u from my faction.
& noone knows your sexuality......s'why he loves trans-actions.
Nah
I'll smother you, man you've sucked too long kid i'll trash ya
& i'd tell u to show up dope, but u already fucked that up
Not feelin, weak concept
Your a sad joke, emanate? why would i even care?
& dude would NEVER have a name.......
.....if i wouldn't have had a spare*
Ok
But really who cares? man this kid will never get a win.
& your deserving of this title....pfft lying is a sin.
Nah
I thought Emanate took this, Aes had the ECW bar which was the line of the battle but Emanate was just more consistent, and had a better verse overall.
v/ Emanate
uppin, sry came worse then decent, had to show as fast as possible.
You’re a fucking pussy, so it pleases me when you wince
Cause Aines set this battle up..................
......................................And you haven’t came online since
.lol, aight pretty decnet opening punch, lets see the setup...
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Your respected? There’s no way. Your concepts are boring and old.
The only time you get hailed upon is when the weather is freezing cold.
Pretty good, haven't seen too many of these
Damn replacement. You aren’t the dude that I’m supposed to be beating.
We all know you wouldn’t be here if D.Zaster wasn’t caught cheating.
Say word, nice line
My shit is easily above yours. You have no chance in this battle, whore.
The only time you hangover me is when you got drunk the night before.
Alright, but I think this could of been worded a lot better, like him hangin over kats he knocked out, hence being drunk, i ono You don’t make smart decisions. So I’m gonna to put you in your place.
Like when you called out IJL, knowing a joker always beats an ace.
IJILL, thas a funny and good punch.
With that name and that avatar. You have finally proven your gay.
Because I don’t like to playboy, but I’ll beat his ass any day!
wordplay aight, set up, not aight, I mean you shoulda set that up like, I'll pinup tihs herb, you know...
You’ll need the luck of the Irish to win. Grab yourself a clover.
If your New Years resolution is not to lose, that shit is over.
Meh closer, seems to simple
vs.
Blah i let you in my crew, but dude just to cover you.
& man fuck wrestling........it's been too long since ECW's
Nice, I liked this line, good wording.
I run you bitch, get off of it, i booted u from my faction.
& noone knows your sexuality......s'why he loves trans-actions.
I like it, but you shoulda set it up better, something to do with the word you were playin off of.
I'll smother you, man you've sucked too long kid i'll trash ya
& i'd tell u to show up dope, but u already fucked that up
Basic, needs more thought.
Your a sad joke, emanate? why would i even care?
& dude would NEVER have a name.......
.....if i wouldn't have had a spare*
Word, good punch, nice concept
But really who cares? man this kid will never get a win.
& your deserving of this title....pfft lying is a sin.
ok I guess, kind of meh tho.
Quotes:
A-
Blah i let you in my crew, but dude just to cover you.
& man fuck wrestling........it's been too long since ECW's
Your a sad joke, emanate? why would i even care?
& dude would NEVER have a name.......
.....if i wouldn't have had a spare*
E-
Damn replacement. You aren’t the dude that I’m supposed to be beating.
We all know you wouldn’t be here if D.Zaster wasn’t caught cheating.
Your respected? There’s no way. Your concepts are boring and old.
The only time you get hailed upon is when the weather is freezing cold.
Explanation
E-Some of your lines I kind of felt lacked in the direct approach to hit him. I mean with better wording or better set ups, they might be more effective. It just really seems that you didnt put to much time in it. I mean I like your lines, but I felt you could of went at his neck a little more.
A-I can also tell that your verse was not planned very well. See I am just excluding the other lines and going strictly on quotes with this, the ECW line is what is taking it for me. I really like the creativness, set up and delivery of it. Executed well.
With that said....
I am leaning towards A since out of the quotes, The ECW line stuck out the most to me, good battle. Come harder next week. Word.
V. Aes
1-1 excluding the tony vote because i didnt drop yet.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/private....pm&pmid=784797
I don't give a fuck let his verse count.
Oops, ignore this.
1-1 uppin people.....
You don’t make smart decisions. So I’m gonna to put you in your place.
Like when you called out IJL, knowing a joker always beats an ace.
everything else was played
vs
Blah i let you in my crew, but dude just to cover you.
& man fuck wrestling........it's been too long since ECW's
yea 1 quotable each, emanate came more consistent.
hailed upon, hangover, and playboy punches were all played, but then again so was the trans-action line.
well newayz, v/ emanate
You’re a fucking pussy, so it pleases me when you wince
Cause Aines set this battle up..................
......................................And you haven’t came online since
nah seen em b4.
Your respected? There’s no way. Your concepts are boring and old.
The only time you get hailed upon is when the weather is freezing cold.
ok
Damn replacement. You aren’t the dude that I’m supposed to be beating.
We all know you wouldn’t be here if D.Zaster wasn’t caught cheating.
ok
My shit is easily above yours. You have no chance in this battle, whore.
The only time you hangover me is when you got drunk the night before.
nah
You don’t make smart decisions. So I’m gonna to put you in your place.
Like when you called out IJL, knowing a joker always beats an ace.
i used this against acesus i think but the IJL flip makes it dope.
With that name and that avatar. You have finally proven your gay.
Because I don’t like to playboy, but I’ll beat his ass any day!
eww
You’ll need the luck of the Irish to win. Grab yourself a clover.
If your New Years resolution is not to lose, that shit is over.
meh
vs
Blah i let you in my crew, but dude just to cover you.
& man fuck wrestling........it's been too long since ECW's
DOPE
I run you bitch, get off of it, i booted u from my faction.
& noone knows your sexuality......s'why he loves trans-actions.
nah
I'll smother you, man you've sucked too long kid i'll trash ya
& i'd tell u to show up dope, but u already fucked that up
ok but no rhyme
Your a sad joke, emanate? why would i even care?
& dude would NEVER have a name.......
.....if i wouldn't have had a spare*
nah
But really who cares? man this kid will never get a win.
& your deserving of this title....pfft lying is a sin.
nah man weakish.
all in all it was a cool battle. some fresh n hard hits. emanate wins due to consistency.