Originally Posted by
Professor Frost
Let's start it from scratch, I'm feeling like Grandmaster Flash
My DEVeloped clips take PICS, I don't have to rap with hands
Referencing yourself to the likes of grandmaster flash would be a pretty big statement in hip hop and a risky one at that.
I don't think you'll reap any sort of consequence, good or bad...here...but in audio you'd have drawn some attention to yourself with that line. I don't really see how "DEVeloped" is a creative reference or diss to dev in any way. I mean...idk...i get that it's supposed to be some sort of reference to dev but...it's light weight to be honest. Mostly, this bar just has flow to it but not a lot of weight to it in terms of diss or otherwise. It was ok.
I dance & laugh, these niggas ain't the Truth in the booth
All I hear are lies, when I spit it's a fountain used for the youth
Meh
Iscariot is fuckin' with Jesus, I'll crucify his neck with loose chains
DEVastated cause he'll never see me coming like a mood change
Again, referencing dev but i don't find it to be in a creative way at all. The mood change line was ok.
To light these niggas up, I don't even gotta go get the burner,
When one uppercut gives a Crimson Chin worse than Timmy Turner
Meh
But, let's see what this chopper does between their oculars
Crew keep bodies popping up, there is nobody stopping us
This is the first bad bar
Talk shit?
I'll make Dev digest his misplaced neck when I'm spraying the TEC
Lean into him, real close, then tell him to "say it with his chest"
I liked the initial first line minus the tec reference and i disliked the ending line.
Truth says he's the King of Kings -- YOU KNOW you lied, dude
I'll send shots, you'll take Cover, Girl might just wanna sign you
lol
All I spy is DEVious rappers who try to act tough on the mic
They bluff when they write,
I'll make these boys Crack under pressure like I'm fuckin' with White
^This was the first semi creative line i've seen the ending line here.
The Devious thing don't do it for me.
I'm a pimp, please, I don't compete with people that I've been beat
But, I'll make 'em hand the towel in again like we're at a swim meet
Decent
These cats scared shitless, sittin' shook; dumbfounded by the outcome
Murdered two MCs & left no TRACKS, but it still sounded like an album
I like this bar. Good.
It ain't shit to put a knife to the brain & end a life for a lame
Truth could murder me -- when pigs fly...
But then again, that works.. if his wife decides to ride a plane
This last bit was dope.
EGO!!!!!!!!! BLAAATTTTT!!!!
