Charged Up

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November 7th, 2015, 02:39 PM
OG Maestro

Charged Up

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J1_MsGar3Nk

0:22-0:41

[Hook]
These boys beating around the bush without causing contusions
Crew will stomp 'em to death, man, I guess they Jump To Conclusions
No confusions, but I'm Confucius with the consciousness
They useless, they need sponsorship; they 'bout to catch a consequence
I'm rapping all kinds of shit.
This mic a reconnaissance of my cognizance
But I guess these people never Change, though, that's Common Cents-
And I'm... charged up...
I'm charged up.

0:43

[Verse 1]
Time to Raise Arms to Rise... Son, this a eulogy (Day-Day / @YD)
Ya Whole Site catching bullets. I'm Up, Lifting my Community.
This the perfect start to the middle of the Fall
Their hands closed and feet out-
The same niggas Guilt Tripping from it all
Y'all ain't got the Arsenal.
Ya crew against what y'all barely can face.
A pocket full of ammunition,
If I give all I got then it's a charity case.
Okay, the flow is moving -- it's airing this place.
My drops Dump Knowledge and Take Out Trash,
But with all the old niggas like you, it couldn't compare to the Waste
...Still, I could see it coming.
And I waited for 'em to send something
Happened just like a Jailbreak,
I was at the War, 'den I could hear The Pen Rushing
I live for the craft while y'all focus on putting up wins
Suited for a Funeral for the lames that's Pushing Buttons
Professor Frost since day one but they neglect the teachers
Fake fucks got the wrong Makeups,
At least when I write nobody has to Check for Features
You faggots can't compete with the best when the threshold high
A crew of poets? But what you all specialize is telling special lies
Funny how y'all shit still stink yet y'all Washed Up...
Cleaning Up The Game y'all made; to play it didn't cost much
We starting to collect, your crew can't see how to connect
Zero Contacts = Tunnel Vision + it's obvious, y'all Lost Touch
A certain low life had attempted a "burn", I thought it was unusual
Thought he'd be more concerned with the sperm under his cuticles(@Letterman)
In Hip-Hop I'm the Alpha, bet anything that the mission is my hobby
I'll beat his ass from A to Z: that's the Definition Of A Body
So I'll be here... just waiting,
The true God MC, and I really hope you're prepared to face him
Disarm us?
Watch us drop a bomb, dust scatter as I light a cigar up
Y'all can't harm much, you niggas won't starve us.
I'm charged up.

[Outro]
I’m so sorry
Did you hope I was crying?
It was rough without you
It was rough without you

Architexts.
November 9th, 2015, 02:38 AM
Attack of the Muff

Re: Charged Up

decent this time

like the last one better but there was flow to that hook

Y'all ain't got the Arsenal.
Ya crew against what y'all barely can face.
A pocket full of ammunition,
If I give all I got then it's a charity case.
Okay, the flow is moving -- it's airing this place.
My drops Dump Knowledge and Take Out Trash,
But with all the old niggas like you, it couldn't compare to the Waste

thought that segment flowed nice. considering I listened to the beat n lined up the timing like u suggested.

the latter half I really didn't like much tho. iono. from letterman on down

good shit tho. worth a read n listen
November 9th, 2015, 04:30 PM
Endeva.

Re: Charged Up

a member of staff leaving no links! what an example tisk tisk

lmao
November 9th, 2015, 09:04 PM
OG Maestro

Re: Charged Up

Quote:

Originally Posted by Attack of the Muff

decent this time

like the last one better but there was flow to that hook

Y'all ain't got the Arsenal.
Ya crew against what y'all barely can face.
A pocket full of ammunition,
If I give all I got then it's a charity case.
Okay, the flow is moving -- it's airing this place.
My drops Dump Knowledge and Take Out Trash,
But with all the old niggas like you, it couldn't compare to the Waste

thought that segment flowed nice. considering I listened to the beat n lined up the timing like u suggested.

the latter half I really didn't like much tho. iono. from letterman on down

good shit tho. worth a read n listen

thanks bruh. this is the worm at the end of the fishing rod sort of thing tho lmao.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Endeva aka DEV

a member of staff leaving no links! what an example tisk tisk

lmao

yooo hahaha, true
http://rapbattles.com/showthread.php...ing-Conclusion
November 10th, 2015, 12:25 AM
Cody Phoenix

Re: Charged Up

2 links or ur shits closed
November 10th, 2015, 01:40 AM
Letterman

Re: Charged Up

Why didn't you @ me? Lol dead.
November 10th, 2015, 08:55 AM
OG Maestro

Re: Charged Up

Quote:

Originally Posted by 'phX

2 links or ur shits closed

lol hahahahaha.
http://rapbattles.com/showthread.php...ith-Wonderland
(:

Quote:

Originally Posted by Letterman

Why didn't you @ me? Lol dead.

I did try to, look at the verse.

Quote:

A certain low life had attempted a "burn", I thought it was unusual
Thought he'd be more concerned with the sperm under his cuticles(@Letterman)
November 10th, 2015, 10:45 AM
Cody Phoenix

Re: Charged Up

glad u got the joke lolol
November 10th, 2015, 12:39 PM
Letterman

Re: Charged Up

You fucked up boy...
November 10th, 2015, 05:38 PM
OG Maestro

Re: Charged Up

Quote:

Originally Posted by Letterman

You fucked up boy...

thas what ya momma said when ya pops nutted inside of her by accident
November 11th, 2015, 02:34 PM
graf-x

Re: Charged Up

this was cool
flow was solid.. nice drop man..

heres the lines i liked the best

Y'all ain't got the Arsenal.
Ya crew against what y'all barely can face.
A pocket full of ammunition,
If I give all I got then it's a charity case.

You faggots can't compete with the best when the threshold high
A crew of poets? But what you all specialize is telling special lies
Funny how y'all shit still stink yet y'all Washed Up...
Cleaning Up The Game y'all made; to play it didn't cost much
November 12th, 2015, 07:05 PM
OG Maestro

Re: Charged Up

Quote:

Originally Posted by mic s

this was cool
flow was solid.. nice drop man..

heres the lines i liked the best

Y'all ain't got the Arsenal.
Ya crew against what y'all barely can face.
A pocket full of ammunition,
If I give all I got then it's a charity case.

You faggots can't compete with the best when the threshold high
A crew of poets? But what you all specialize is telling special lies
Funny how y'all shit still stink yet y'all Washed Up...
Cleaning Up The Game y'all made; to play it didn't cost much

thanks big bro, salute.
November 13th, 2015, 09:48 AM
Rock girl

Re: Charged Up

Interesting topic.... this sound pretty good, it flowed nicely.
November 13th, 2015, 02:22 PM
77Funerals

Re: Charged Up

"Watch us drop a bomb, dust scatter as I light a cigar up
Y'all can't harm much, you niggas won't starve us.
I'm charged up"

i really enjoy how you used the name of this song to kind of end it with this,
really stuck with your guns and on point with your message didn't really stray.
i am not much to be a critic but i have to say all and all i really enjoyed this. your word play was pretty awesome!
November 25th, 2015, 03:11 PM
ItsPwizz

Re: Charged Up

Flow was good on this and definitely liked the lines! Would like to hear this recorded, keep at it!