WEEK 05 Wuxia (4-1) Vs MV (3-3) (WUXIA WINS)
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Re: WEEK 05 Wuxia (4-1) Vs MV (3-3)
Re: WEEK 05 Wuxia (4-1) Vs MV (3-3)
I'm only going 10 btw cool?
Re: WEEK 05 Wuxia (4-1) Vs MV (3-3)
Re: WEEK 05 Wuxia (4-1) Vs MV (3-3)
Dave fucked ur shit up cuh, go walk your ass to bed
check it out there's still blood on DDT, from where he dropped u on your head
and those PM's about Ivy?, shit was difficult to read
rofl u confessed your love to woo girl, but all ur thirsty shit didn't suitor needs
I win every time we battle, I'm feelin that it's a virtue
figured I'd complaisance I'm free now, your always willing to let me merk you
ur going to be a dad soon, give me five I'm glad asf
that's enough bromance n family shit, i'll stab ur prego wife 16x for acting up
heard your a gym teacher, u hunger for boyish meat
u get flushed with joy whenever they miss your spycam under the toilet seat
Re: WEEK 05 Wuxia (4-1) Vs MV (3-3)
im on some shit, like your bitch starting an arguments just to ghost the crib
she honestly had a bone to pick and she did it when she chose my dick
i joined to rap not watch this bland cuck collect HoF autographs then turns bars to stats
if imagination was arts and crafts this retarded ass is making charts and graphs
when the last time you copped a feel? this oldhead's been grabbing with no consent
rapey hands,
i can tell by how you write the days of touch and go have came and went
scare your bitch ass up a tree,bring his ass down with a sem
im branching out an arm if you think im going out on a limb
ill shit onto your toothbrush then ask why you have poop breath
i got to be the firstest because you speaking like the duecest
Re: WEEK 05 Wuxia (4-1) Vs MV (3-3) (OPEN FOR VOTES)
Dave fucked ur shit up cuh, go walk your ass to bed
check it out there's still blood on DDT, from where he dropped u on your head
not getting the DDT one here. may be crystal clear but might need some expl
and those PM's about Ivy?, shit was difficult to read
rofl u confessed your love to woo girl, but all ur thirsty shit didn't suitor needs
okk
I win every time we battle, I'm feelin that it's a virtue
figured I'd complaisance I'm free now, your always willing to let me merk you
cool
ur going to be a dad soon, give me five I'm glad asf
that's enough bromance n family shit, i'll stab ur prego wife 16x for acting up
this is missing a layer I might not be seeing
heard your a gym teacher, u hunger for boyish meat
u get flushed with joy whenever they miss your spycam under the toilet seat
lol wtf
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im on some shit, like your bitch starting an arguments just to ghost the crib
she honestly had a bone to pick and she did it when she chose my dick
well yeah this was ok
i joined to rap not watch this bland cuck collect HoF autographs then turns bars to stats
if imagination was arts and crafts this retarded ass is making charts and graphs
this was a long bar and missed some punctuation spaces, but missing the punchline at the end, felt a bit bland
when the last time you copped a feel? this oldhead's been grabbing with no consent
rapey hands,
i can tell by how you write the days of touch and go have came and went
not feeling the days of touch reference. will need some explanation here
scare your bitch ass up a tree,bring his ass down with a sem
im branching out an arm if you think im going out on a limb
missing the punch line here. a bit self hype
ill shit onto your toothbrush then ask why you have poop breath
i got to be the firstest because you speaking like the duecest
lmaooo whats up with the setup line. not really feeling the punchline here. missing sting
both had wtf closers lol. I generally liked Wux's verse more, I appreciate MV but a lot of the lines were bland. if I had to give any more feedback, they need to be a bit more aggressive and direct imo. but good stuff both
v/ wux
Re: WEEK 05 Wuxia (4-1) Vs MV (3-3) (OPEN FOR VOTES)
DDT bit of a reach but Il give ya it
Woo girl cool
Complaisance I didn’t realize was a word and was about to say reach but this is dope lol
Last 2 bars were misses from me the flush spy cam hahaha
Vs
Bone to pick I’ve seen a lot of flips but this was different nice
Cool scheme cool concept
Nope
Coolish wish it would have hit harder
What the heck is this closer lol
I got this at 3 3 both had ridiculous closers lol I think the comply line was the lotb so I will give it to broke here
Vote Wuxia
Re: WEEK 05 Wuxia (4-1) Vs MV (3-3) (OPEN FOR VOTES)
Complaisance looked up, it's different but worked
initials in DDT slightly unnatural but coo..
suitor was pretty clean
MV
touch ang go... rhymed well
not a fan of this style imo
V wux
Re: WEEK 05 Wuxia (4-1) Vs MV (3-3)
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Wuxia
Dave fucked ur shit up cuh, go walk your ass to bed
check it out there's still blood on DDT, from where he dropped u on your head
Lmao decent
and those PM's about Ivy?, shit was difficult to read
rofl u confessed your love to woo girl, but all ur thirsty shit didn't suitor needs
Good wp
I win every time we battle, I'm feelin that it's a virtue
figured I'd complaisance I'm free now, your always willing to let me merk you
Fire
ur going to be a dad soon, give me five I'm glad asf
that's enough bromance n family shit, i'll stab ur prego wife 16x for acting up
Not a fan
heard your a gym teacher, u hunger for boyish meat
u get flushed with joy whenever they miss your spycam under the toilet seat
This was funny but really stupid lol
vs
im on some shit, like your bitch starting an arguments just to ghost the crib
she honestly had a bone to pick and she did it when she chose my dick
Didn’t like the wording in setup or execution plus none to pick played
i joined to rap not watch this bland cuck collect HoF autographs then turns bars to stats
if imagination was arts and crafts this retarded ass is making charts and graphs
lol idk this wasn’t much of a punchline. Would have been a fucking crazy line in audio tho
when the last time you copped a feel? this oldhead's been grabbing with no consent
rapey hands,
i can tell by how you write the days of touch and go have came and went
Pretty good
scare your bitch ass up a tree,bring his ass down with a sem
im branching out an arm if you think im going out on a limb
lol nahhh
ill shit onto your toothbrush then ask why you have poop breath
i got to be the firstest because you speaking like the duecest
wtf?
Honestly I think MV phoned it in this week. In my opinion. He’s been way better in the past. Wuxia did enough to win comfortably in my opinion, he had some funny lines like always and a couple good wps
v/ Wuxia
Re: WEEK 05 Wuxia (4-1) Vs MV (3-3) (OPEN FOR VOTES)
Dave fucked ur shit up cuh, go walk your ass to bed
check it out there's still blood on DDT, from where he dropped u on your head
dope
and those PM's about Ivy?, shit was difficult to read
rofl u confessed your love to woo girl, but all ur thirsty shit didn't suitor needs
i really liked this
I win every time we battle, I'm feelin that it's a virtue
figured I'd complaisance I'm free now, your always willing to let me merk you
fire
ur going to be a dad soon, give me five I'm glad asf
that's enough bromance n family shit, i'll stab ur prego wife 16x for acting up
its prego x16. just wasnt a fan of this bar
heard your a gym teacher, u hunger for boyish meat
u get flushed with joy whenever they miss your spycam under the toilet seat
decent
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im on some shit, like your bitch starting an arguments just to ghost the crib
she honestly had a bone to pick and she did it when she chose my dick
not really a fan of this
i joined to rap not watch this bland cuck collect HoF autographs then turns bars to stats
if imagination was arts and crafts this retarded ass is making charts and graphs
nice rhyme scheme but the punch isnt there for me
when the last time you copped a feel? this oldhead's been grabbing with no consent
rapey hands,
i can tell by how you write the days of touch and go have came and went
lol aight
scare your bitch ass up a tree,bring his ass down with a sem
im branching out an arm if you think im going out on a limb
i fuck with it
ill shit onto your toothbrush then ask why you have poop breath
i got to be the firstest because you speaking like the duecest
not a fan
i score this 3.5 - 2 in wux's favor
v/ wuxia
Re: WEEK 05 Wuxia (4-1) Vs MV (3-3) (OPEN FOR VOTES)
Wux had DDT opener.. shit was dope…woo girl and merk you was nice to.. closer was ok
Mv first two bars were ehh.. raped hand I was feeling.. out on limb was cool
I got Wu taking this with stronger verse VOTE WUXX
Re: WEEK 05 Wuxia (4-1) Vs MV (3-3) (OPEN FOR VOTES)
Wuxia wins (5-1)
MV falls to 3-4