Miracle 1-2 Vs. Philly® 0-0 -Vote-
Lethal Lyricist League Week 10
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Re: Miracle 1-2 Vs. Philly® 0-0
Re: Miracle 1-2 Vs. Philly® 0-0
Re: Miracle 1-2 Vs. Philly® 0-0
no surprise im calm when i trash guys, so punches im layin 'em heavy
while u'll b ovary acting.. since everything bout u screams pussy already
keep it movin cuz im mobile wit chicks, but you really love that hoe
.. bitch used to be YOUR sidekick.. now she want mytouch bro
cuz nothing u spit is relative.. a greater rating they better give?
no matter what type of punch u develop, shit'll still b ah negative
im flat out better wit this net shit, you aint hot kid, ya bitter
pound this bitch so much he'll b starting a trendin topic on twitter
i hate fat kids behind keyboards.. just admit im the king fam
a real fucking top gun, while your just more of a wing man
Re: Miracle 1-2 Vs. Philly® 0-0
this keystyles giving you hell..every1 watch me kill this troll
and leave philly in so much kaos...rb will think the eagles won a superbowl
faggot cant stand to my swift punches...there coming in loads
he won't be left, up, right-------> posting GTA weapon codes
claiming you'll beat me?? never!!!! philly is providing a glass jaw
like farmers running out of things to paint..now u've drawn the last straw
he aint running his lips..only thing his mouth makes is a "gulp"
cuz ill eat your heart with a glass of orange juice
.........................................meaning you'll get beat to a pulp
i'm bruising this lame...it was over as soon as he seen me enter
cuz with blunt force ill leave philly cracked! right down the center
Re: Miracle 1-2 Vs. Philly® 0-0 -Vote-
no surprise im calm when i trash guys, so punches im layin 'em heavy
while u'll b ovary acting.. since everything bout u screams pussy already
lol... good opener
keep it movin cuz im mobile wit chicks, but you really love that hoe
.. bitch used to be YOUR sidekick.. now she want mytouch bro
nice hit
cuz nothing u spit is relative.. a greater rating they better give?
no matter what type of punch u develop, shit'll still b ah negative
eh... ok-ish
im flat out better wit this net shit, you aint hot kid, ya bitter
pound this bitch so much he'll b starting a trendin topic on twitter
lol... simple, but effective
i hate fat kids behind keyboards.. just admit im the king fam
a real fucking top gun, while your just more of a wing man
decent closer
vs
this keystyles giving you hell..every1 watch me kill this troll
and leave philly in so much kaos...rb will think the eagles won a superbowl
good, could have been worded a hair better, but good as is
faggot cant stand to my swift punches...there coming in loads
he won't be left, up, right-------> posting GTA weapon codes
nice
claiming you'll beat me?? never!!!! philly is providing a glass jaw
like farmers running out of things to paint..now u've drawn the last straw
concept is there, almost a good hit... ok as is
he aint running his lips..only thing his mouth makes is a "gulp"
cuz ill eat your heart with a glass of orange juice
.........................................meaning you'll get beat to a pulp
ohhhh, almost a dope punch... I like this concept, but the wording is a little off.
i'm bruising this lame...it was over as soon as he seen me enter
cuz with blunt force ill leave philly cracked! right down the center
good metaphor, ok closer
This was a lot closer than I thought it would be....
Philly had some nice bars, had me lol'ing a lot, had only one miss.
Mir had some good concepts, but small wording problems took away
from the effectiveness of the punches...
Vote- Philly... for more polished verse, props
Re: Miracle 1-2 Vs. Philly® 0-0 -Vote-
no surprise im calm when i trash guys, so punches im layin 'em heavy
while u'll b ovary acting.. since everything bout u screams pussy already
Lol.. nice.. never seen that done
keep it movin cuz im mobile wit chicks, but you really love that hoe
.. bitch used to be YOUR sidekick.. now she want mytouch bro
Ok I guess
cuz nothing u spit is relative.. a greater rating they better give?
no matter what type of punch u develop, shit'll still b ah negative
Ok I guess
im flat out better wit this net shit, you aint hot kid, ya bitter
pound this bitch so much he'll b starting a trendin topic on twitter
Decent enough
i hate fat kids behind keyboards.. just admit im the king fam
a real fucking top gun, while your just more of a wing man
Ok
vs
this keystyles giving you hell..every1 watch me kill this troll
and leave philly in so much kaos...rb will think the eagles won a superbowl
Lol.. this actually had more of an effect for me being as tho I know so many Philly fans and the Eagles never win
faggot cant stand to my swift punches...there coming in loads
he won't be left, up, right-------> posting GTA weapon codes
Nah.. could've been so much better tho
claiming you'll beat me?? never!!!! philly is providing a glass jaw
like farmers running out of things to paint..now u've drawn the last straw
Ok
he aint running his lips..only thing his mouth makes is a "gulp"
cuz ill eat your heart with a glass of orange juice
.........................................meaning you'll get beat to a pulp
Beat to a pulp is pretty played to me.. not a great flip either.. I get the heart/beat orange juice/pulp connection.. but it just didn't work the way you delivered it
i'm bruising this lame...it was over as soon as he seen me enter
cuz with blunt force ill leave philly cracked! right down the center
Ok.. definitely could've been done better but I haven't seen this done on him before
Philly came a bit flat.. but it's to be expected after his long hiatus.. but he did enough.. mirage definitely could've gotten the win here.. work on your delivery homie.. feel free to pm more experienced textcees.. even me.. for some pointers.. they help out
Vote: Philly
Re: Miracle 1-2 Vs. Philly® 0-0 -Vote-
no surprise im calm when i trash guys, so punches im layin 'em heavy
while u'll b ovary acting.. since everything bout u screams pussy already
keep it movin cuz im mobile wit chicks, but you really love that hoe
.. bitch used to be YOUR sidekick.. now she want mytouch bro
vs
i'm bruising this lame...it was over as soon as he seen me enter
cuz with blunt force ill leave philly cracked! right down the center
Miracle came pretty bland. Philly was witty, but the wording hurt. Also sorta played, but he's been gone for awhile so its to be expected.
v/Philly
Re: Miracle 1-2 Vs. Philly® 0-0 -Vote-
no surprise im calm when i trash guys, so punches im layin 'em heavy
while u'll b ovary acting.. since everything bout u screams pussy already
im flat out better wit this net shit, you aint hot kid, ya bitter
pound this bitch so much he'll b starting a trendin topic on twitter
vs.
faggot cant stand to my swift punches...there coming in loads
he won't be left, up, right-------> posting GTA weapon codes
pretty weak/one sided battle here. philly, glad your back. and you were definitely more polished than ur opponent. but your verse was very, uh, play'd? yea.. not too many hard hitters and sure could'a used a bit more sting in your punches. but i know you know how to battle and it's prolly been a while since you've dropped anythin in a while. but you easily took this. as for miracle, honestly homie, you may wanna consider battling a bit more in Front Lines. your verse was mediocre at best and them punches were weak! especially that "orange juice" line.. like, no. you can't be bringing stuff like that here and expect to win. real talk. but keep battling in FL and elevating, and im sure in no time you'll be LLL material.
v/ Philly
Re: Miracle 1-2 Vs. Philly® 0-0 -Vote-
no surprise im calm when i trash guys, so punches im layin 'em heavy
while u'll b ovary acting.. since everything bout u screams pussy already
lol cool
im flat out better wit this net shit, you aint hot kid, ya bitter
pound this bitch so much he'll b starting a trendin topic on twitter
haha dope
i hate fat kids behind keyboards.. just admit im the king fam
a real fucking top gun, while your just more of a wing man
aight
vs.
faggot cant stand to my swift punches...there coming in loads
he won't be left, up, right-------> posting GTA weapon codes
lol, cool
i'm bruising this lame...it was over as soon as he seen me enter
cuz with blunt force ill leave philly cracked! right down the center
aightt
Almost quoted your opener but it was just too simple a nameplay to use on Philly.
Overall: Philly took this with consistency, wording, and better quoteables. not a bad read at all, good job to the both of ya
Vote: Philly
Re: Miracle 1-2 Vs. Philly® 0-0 -Vote-
no surprise im calm when i trash guys, so punches im layin 'em heavy
while u'll b ovary acting.. since everything bout u screams pussy already
im flat out better wit this net shit, you aint hot kid, ya bitter
pound this bitch so much he'll b starting a trendin topic on twitter
vs
nothing
Miracle your punches weren't direct.. they had no impact.. Philly I almost quoted the mytouch line.. but the way you did it seemed a little corny to me.. but you took this easily. Next time drop more though.. those bare minimum verses are boring.
v/ Philly
