WK 14 Championship: [c]Greedy (17-5) Vs Barcotic (17-5) - Greedy wins via DQ

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@Greedy @Barcotic

I pimp a hoe, take a bitch to Berlin
Bitch break niggaz, after that we fuck they girlfriend
My girl got a girlfriend, Chevy blue like whirlwind
Nigga it's a drought on that boy, so I got that girl in
-Young Dro
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aqZMoLXoVxs

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Aka Cronus

Cut to pieces. When ya mother sees, its: eyes hella wide and no sleep...
...And more wrinkles on her face. Cuz the only thing to identify is crowsfeet

aka not good enough

u shud be fucking appalled. ur wife's becoming a small whore
had her breaking trees on my jay album, then busting on all 4s

i thought this battle was dope af. i wanted to break it down a bit more than i usually do as it took me a good while to decide on who i thought came out ahead in this battle
Greedy
Cut to pieces. When ya mother sees, its: eyes hella wide and no sleep...
...And more wrinkles on her face. Cuz the only thing to identify is crowsfeet

Good name play with tie ins pieced through out the set up and punch. also a nice touch of brutality here.


Barcotic
u shud be fucking appalled. ur wife's becoming a small whore
had her breaking trees on my jay album, then busting on all 4s

set up was simple. nothing too fancy but we get into the punch and that shit is rofl.the flip on the breaking buds down on the jayz album and 444 was clever i liked it.


i checked over and over these two bars and to be fair i cant criticize anything much about either of them. bar your set up was ok but it could have been have really weaponized the punch imo. but even that i cant take anythingaway from the actual bar because it didnt hurt your delivery. So to me its comes down to the NP making it more personal than that of a WP bar. im going with greedy here but if there is an option to say fuck it i call a draw than let me use that because i think this was one of the more difficult battles i have had to choose between this season. exemplary job fellas. this can easy go in the favor of either

v/ Greedy

Both battlers dropped well in this match up and it almost seems a shame to have to decide who to side with here, however it is a competition so..

I'll have to V/Barcotic here by a small margin...

When you break it down, Greedy's lines although slightly more thought out at first glance, were also more drawn out and took too much unnatural pause to develop into a hard hitting punch. It's literally like reading 4 sentences put together and they don't correlate, or rather connect swiftly enough to sting. You say: wow that's kinda creative, but when you read it to someone, which is how I picture battles.. you can see a lack of interest as U try to draw attention to each element of text,and it takes so long to formulate, the end result is lessened quite dramatically. Still, a creative well thought out punch, just short of a Haymaker.

When you look at Barcotics Bar, it's apparent that the setup is fairly generic and the punch could be looked at as directed toward anyone, but that may also be the reason I voted for him, and many might agree. While his opponent took way too many words, pauses and breaks to get to what had to be an explained nameplay, Bar delivered a quick hitting wordplay that would appeal to most listeners of a battle that wouldn't need to know the opponent's old username. On the down side, the winning punch here was almost so quick hitting and generically form fitting that ... That jay in the closer could be Z/Cole/ or any number of Jays then the setup of "a"Paul"'d with the closer on all 4's like Paul Walls 'Han Solo on 4's / Still Tippin on fo fo's.... its just almost too broad to overlook but then again that in my opinion is exactly why it wins here, because even without a breakdown and explanation (come on this is two total lines) it still makes since and hits quickly and effectively.

V/ Barcotic for a haymaking hook.. versus one of those that wind up for soo long the opponent might get knocked the fuck out, or they might just duck and counter.

Greedy wins VIA DQ


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Pretty fucking dope champ match, all drama aside. I think Barc had a really solidly executed bar, that had a decent level of creativity. That being said, I'm am a little bias against "fuck yo girl" concepts. This was nice enough for me to appreciate it, I just don't think the subject matter hits as hard for me as it may for others. That being said, Greedy had the better concept by far. Played or not, the nameflips new to me. But the real stand out is the execution. From the first words of the set up, to the pay off this was worded perfectly. It was dope. Good shit to both.

Vote Greedy

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