NEW FREE (LET YALL KnOW IM STILL FUCKIN KING!!!)

FREESTYLE...

hey yall, yes im back n on my new, KING made shit
crown with some jade shit, picture perfect how im portrayed bitch
trap house with a naked maid shit, trap doors for who invade shit
secret buttons on my lamp shade shit, big walls like i palisade shit
my trap smells just like drugs so hell yeah i glade shit
n im ninja'd up so i evade shit, with tha lights off i raid shit
my trap like an arcade shit, im tetris, i blockade shit
cut it with my blade shit, close as fuck, like a fade shit
my bricks, on that homemade shit, from ships like slave trade shit
i dont fuck with no pre-made shit, cuz its not whats displayed bitch
my life aint fair, but i dont care, i just do that spade shit
had to tip tha scales in my favor, so yeah i over weighted it
n he was lame as fuck, so yeah, he way over paid it
tha game is so payday, so for yay, i way over played it
my whip, a trip, looks like a cup of ice, with lemonade shit
transformer, never a virgin, tha way my top gets laid quick
drop tops like a window shade bitch, flip flop, leather to suede shit
n my rims roll how i tell em too, like they on that replayed shit
yeah im real nice, high price, but i do persuade shit
like yeah bitch, u can have my dick, as long as u paid shit
everywhere im obeyed bitch, n i like gurls with golden braid shit
n hoes with that fire head, that make me wish i had stayed shit
i keep my guns real close, mayn they like my first aid kit
but truthfully, i rarely bust, cuz if they saw it, they'd shit
i call my guns stoves n pans, so dont get sauteed bitch
u better be afraid bitch, i got missiles aimed, with no delayed shit
all my life i prayed shit, finally got off my ass n made shit
n yeah GOD is good, but so are drugs, n i wanted to get paid shit
n fuck with some Beyonce hoes, so dude, i had to upgrade shit
my heart is dead, n my soul, as a whole, its decayed bitch
n its been over a decade bitch, since i was considered okay-ed bitch
im hidin like a masquerade bitch, n im on a mission like a crusade bitch

HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA yall get at me bout this...im curious if yall think im holdin my crown down round my town...digg that...n get at ya boy!!! :salute:

- THA TRAP KING aka CAPN TRAP SPARROW

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...933/index.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...911/index.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...020/index.html

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How many times did you say Shit?

lol idk...alot...no good feedback?!

Articulation.

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lol dammit give me some feed back u fuckers!!!

Haha aight.

It definitely felt like a freestyle called "LET YALL KNOW IM STILL FUCKING KING!!!". There were a few lines that made me grin, but not really any that were so dope they made of go "oh shit!". The multi's were there (though most of them were the word "shit") so it had that auditory consistency that's nice to listen to but kind of funny to look at - hence my original response.

Overall, for me it was an above average "self glorifying" verse that was pretty good stylistically and that is definitely summed up in this threads title.

lol so do i hold my crown?...ive been gone for a min...n i need to make sure im still doing it right...

yes, you are the king of trap music.. which still blows, and you still help it to blow... you said the word SHIT like a hundred times which wasn't creative at all, and in some places, it didn't even make any sense at all. BITCH <<< that word too... too much...


I've told you to be creative before, I mean... you have a better grasp on multies, but now you have an issue with using the same word... freestyle or not..

it was aight
nothin complex but the flow was consistantly on point,which i gotta add was helped by the word shit in every bar..

but still it was cool
you aint no king but this peice would of been better as audio

lol aint no KING?!...got dammit...yall gonna make me kill someone...

lol Word... I think you used the words shit and bitch way too much. It's just not creative when you're rhyming with the same words over and over. There was potential for some lines to come out good, but were ruined with the shit/bitch endings. I'd suggest cut that out and spend more time on wording your lyrics. Also not being so repetitive with the words you're rhyming with.

WTF yall talkin bout?!...i did that on purpose...im not no novice piece of shit wanna rapper...dude i know i over used it...idc tho...cuz i didnt over use tha first enders...yall get it?...just ignore my shit/bitch/it parts then...since yall wanna be suck fags bout it...

Too bad for you, everybody knows that I'm the only fucking king of OM. Stick with audio dude... 'cus your topicals blow anal.

TOPICAL? u wish...this was a free...nothing more nothing less...

nice use of compound syllables n sound combined. i like the repeatishen with shit.