Bumble B Presents "God Jesus And I" Religious Free Verse

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Gods got my back till the end, guiding me home
and with Jesus by my side theres no way ill be arrivin' alone
hoping one day he raises me up cuz I need a lift
growing spiritually going through changes like the seasons switch
Like a religious sacrament i got royal blood, a king in my own right,
high on this thing called faith not a low life
my voice needs no mic to be heard, so i write it with words
these doctors are trying to diagnose my love for god like its absurd
or maybe its his love for me, its got me flying like a dove for peace,
cuz lately a little Jesus is the only drug I need
no poltergeist, demons or devils, just the holy ghost
Mr Bumble B stays humble see its the lords name that I only boast
the power of positivity got me floatin, you wont doubt im-
on top of the world, i guess you could say im way up on cloud nine
with a bible in my hand, travelling crowded streets,
if music is good for the soul i guess my feet must of found the beat
but i never dance with the devil, even though hed like to try
Jesus Christ has got me fly- I've never actually been to heights this high
preaching the gospel, an apostle of truth speaking the word of God
begging for forgiveness and that he makes the hurtin stop
searching for everlasting life through christ, not a crown of death
athletically sporting a chain and cross around my neck

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Lmao...that Jesus is the only drug I need line killed me man, this was funny as fu..oh lord.. I can't.
Lol tbh this was written pretty nicely and had a sound flow for the most part, I was surprised by the multis and internal rhymes woven pretty well and you didnt stray off of your concept, it kept strong though the message might not be everyones cup of wine, I respect your views and your ability to share them the way you have. Spirituality can run really deep so can the Bible and individual events that inspired so much through it. This was a great lighthearted take on such a dense subject matter.
Thanks for the read

No idea which alias you are, doesn’t really matter I guess. This was an interesting read for sure.. the content was your strength here. My only bit of criticism would be to polish it up more and add more too it. I think the wording could have been better. I enjoyed the read anyways stay writing.

thanks for the feedback!

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