OK then 10-12 lines
no crew votes
no haters
no bull
etc etc etc
im checkin in now dogg
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OK then 10-12 lines
no crew votes
no haters
no bull
etc etc etc
im checkin in now dogg
check in man ima post right after the check in man
No comparison-I-know against OVA it's apparent you aint wearing-the-title
couldn't get a vote on ya lines if peeps used your phone to call American Idol
It aint fair-that-ya-try-so hard, it's use~less when you spurt-energy
ya name's tru~est, because skill wise you're Proven the Worst-Enemy
Bezerk isn't he, no shows got you here but ya luck faded, ya dig?
Crew? Even Quiz was sleeping on ya post till someone updated the sigs*
Berated wit spits Confiscating ya writs u'll split by the veteran keys
effortless steez, battle on my good day only way u get the better of me
whoa, you wack-get-it-geez, there's a reason I spat intensity
I'm just celebrating the month killing Niggas making this Black- History**
Ya slack so listen please, i'm tough wit hits that'll leave you f*cking dissed
I can tell u scared when urine (your in) battles the way you was Ducking Piss!! aint up to this? suck it b*tch!! like conscious women you denying ya booty
cuz in this tourney you only leaving wit The Ring, when Buying the movie
and i am unruly, replying so rudely, usually my verses are savage
and you aint got mean skill just because your verses are average!!
They say that to win battles you gotta have punches,
well after this you've taken more than i've had packed lunches,
cause i may be new here but i been spitting for time,
aint no way that you coulda beaten this rhyme, im sublime,
apparantly your verses are 'usually savage', whats happened?
cause that verse has got me to run you rampant.
your paniking now 'O no what've i done, i thought you were a newbi thought it was over for you!'
well shit foo', aint your momma eva tell ya to think fink before before you do?
obviously not else you wouldnt be sittin on your ass, cause this class,
is nearly ova, time for closure
too bad your name said it already,but the fact of it is....
you just wernt ready.
Peace out dogg - was my first battle. lets get some votes on this now.
uppin............................................. ................................#1
cmon yall uppin numba one vote it up chmon
uppin #2 c'mon peeps sumone vote and i will vote in your battle.
ITZ OVA
No comparison-I-know against OVA it's apparent you aint wearing-the-title
couldn't get a vote on ya lines if peeps used your phone to call American Idol
ALRIGHT OPENER......
It aint fair-that-ya-try-so hard, it's use~less when you spurt-energy
ya name's tru~est, because skill wise you're Proven the Worst-Enemy
WHAT...DONT MAKE SENSE
Bezerk isn't he, no shows got you here but ya luck faded, ya dig?
Crew? Even Quiz was sleeping on ya post till someone updated the sigs*
IT RHYMED..I GUESS...
Berated wit spits Confiscating ya writs u'll split by the veteran keys
effortless steez, battle on my good day only way u get the better of me
HEARD SHIT LIKE THIS BEFORE...
whoa, you wack-get-it-geez, there's a reason I spat intensity
I'm just celebrating the month killing Niggas making this Black- History**
DONT RHYME...
Ya slack so listen please, i'm tough wit hits that'll leave you f*cking dissed
I can tell u scared when urine (your in) battles the way you was Ducking Piss!! aint up to this? suck it b*tch!! like conscious women you denying ya booty
cuz in this tourney you only leaving wit The Ring, when Buying the movie
and i am unruly, replying so rudely, usually my verses are savage
and you aint got mean skill just because your verses are average!!
ALRIGHT.....LIKED THE ENDING
ATEMPT AT PUNCHES BUT COULD HAVE FLOWED BETTER...GOOD EFFORT MAN...
SNES
They say that to win battles you gotta have punches,
well after this you've taken more than i've had packed lunches,
LIKED THE OPENER....
cause i may be new here but i been spitting for time,
aint no way that you coulda beaten this rhyme, im sublime,
ALRIGHT
apparantly your verses are 'usually savage', whats happened?
cause that verse has got me to run you rampant.
WACK.....COULD HAVE IMPROVED IT...
your paniking now 'O no what've i done, i thought you were a newbi thought it was over for you!'
NO.....
well shit foo', aint your momma eva tell ya to think fink before before you do?
obviously not else you wouldnt be sittin on your ass, cause this class,
is nearly ova, time for closure
WHAT ARE YOU DOING....
too bad your name said it already,but the fact of it is....
you just wernt ready.
NICE ENDIN...
ITZ OVA TOOK IT....BETTER PUNCHES AND PERSONALS..
SNES VERSE SEEMED PLAYED BUT GOOD FOR A FIRST BATTLE.....AND I PREFFERED THE STRUCTURE
VOTE: ITZ OVA
uppin #3................................................ .............................c'mon peeps
vote/ its ova..
he had a was better flow, i liked snes but ova just had a lil more ump pn this battle
no hate
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=151393 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=150895
need votes
uppin............................................. ................................#4
uppin c'mon lets get this ova wiv..........................
for fuks sake it aint hard to vote................
yo id like to vote for tha S because his had good structure and his punches made more sense
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Snes is DQ'ed for excessive upping.