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A life of a gangster
Yeah so story right ya dig me
You aint taking me you aint own a bently
U dont have a record u dont know what a mix is
You talk shit too much like u couldnt even hit bricks
Faggot this systems gay this forum doesnt work
What the fuck is om im a owl with a neck that got a bit a shit on his shirt
Fuck yall anyways this aint no dining hall ima call it attitude stupid
Kill u why you give me too much amusement
Im just lenny hi i just listen to music
You like a blind man who forgot his cane
Man bullets yall sweating feel me cause i aint missing my spade
Its a shame man look like the cave he live in
You best to be off how u gay like oh iaint have no gimmick
Push me you aint have a limit thinking lines thinking thread
Function like play on werds when he making me breakfast in bed
Simple as fact i push this...
I dont only light it i put it to ya dome like k huntsman...
Its ya boy aint no design to ya flip
I aint talking clips but load me some sessions to eclipse
Make me a rhyme and take it seriously
You can write a few lines or not but direct me towards my shameful reality
Take me to my boys
They will show you we had no choice
This is going get crazy man im talking some crazy shit not dropout college parties
Left me dreaming of a reason cause i left them in traffic with targets allover theyre bodies
I need to decide should i reveal these people and who they are
Should i flip it out and not question it when i do it before they get scarred
I need to leave to be honest i fucked this place out
I just do as general tells nothing to leave ya with ya face down
A trill old industry member
It aint no joke i have to explain bits that i have yet to measure...
Taught a life only stepped in shoes
Only abide to the life but what if i have none to choose..
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Re: A life of a gangster
Hi Late Bloom,
This drop is okayiish, but really needs some innovative verbiage to bring out the way you deliver the message. A lot of time when I write, I vision the picture in my head (similar to watching a mini-movie) and then brainstorm my ideas. The flow & structure were good, but the wordplay was very basic.
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Re: A life of a gangster
I liked it but I don’t rap so it was hard for me to pick up a flow... and the diss stuff was proper like nothing too offensive. Good read for me, I might come back to it cause I want to understand how it flow (I’m just challenged)