Week 1: Lenny (0-0) vs boston (0-0) [boston didn't meet voting criteria]

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Punches due by THURSDAY NOV 9TH @ 11:59PM EST
Voting closes SUNDAY NOV 12th, 11:59PM EST

Check Ins
If you can't check in then there's something wrong w/ you
I won't be penalizing for not checking in though. Just make sure you drop a bar

No Shows
1 no show gets you taken out of the "in" roster. You will have to sign back in the next week
2 no shows gets you taken out of the "in" roster for 2 weeks
3 no shows gets you booted from the league for the rest of the season

Voting
Everyone is required to vote on EVERY battle. (this includes feeding a bar on a no show battle)
1 vote deduction for every battle link missed
Failure to vote at all will result in a boot from the league
If your opponent no shows, you must vote on EVERY battle to get the win on your record

Battle Rules
In the event of a 3-way, each battler must drop 2 bars; 1 for each opponent
Battler must drop a bar to get a win, even if their opponent no shows/doesn't check
NO EXTENSIONS. It's only 1 bar
NO editing punches after opponent drops
Biting will result in a league/site ban.
Recycling will result in DQ and league ban.

@Klause @Lenny @boston

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In..

Fresh off a semi w/ a modified semi, make this cunt drop
Lenny catching his share of pain…. - that’s a bump stock.

@Lenny out for season
@boston you still have to vote to get the win

I’m not sure I get the connection between the set and punch. Some redeeming qualities in the punch: flow and a try at originality.

Punch was worded well but sting fell short with intended concept

I like how the punch was put together myself but the finisher how the wording was displayed.

Ok joint, short n sweet but lacked impact, coulda been worded harsher, was cool tho

Ya needed to be more harsh. Welcome back

Semi with a semi lol rule of thumb type shit tbh


Not bad

There was no connection between the set up and the punchline....I nearly always dislike 1-2 punches when that is the case because it may as well just be two separate lines...the only thing your 'set up' actually set up was the end rhyme, which was quite basic. The idea of the punchline was cool but worded poorly.

i get the share/stock connection. but i dont get the bump/pain, unless its not as deep as i think lol. am i overthinking this one?