Week 8: Joe Boston 2-2 vs. Meth 3-3 Meth wins

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@Joe Boston

10.

Check

i reckon u lie? mess w the guy u got my blessin to die
im sayin if u 'shareable shit' story w me then ur intestines are mine
n ur girl? ill flip the trick or treat her to killer dick - me clearly
show up at ya door n fuck ya horrify want to even tho the bitch is scary
never lonely, seven homies w me u wont last in all the heat
step into my neck of the woods and theres sticks crackin at ur feet
no weapons g n u still cant threaten me geez ur so dead
u gon think im real cold since there will 'beanies on ur head'
wish I beat her face in days ago, i put out a hit to take ya ho
she wont look like a million bucks if the price adjuster facial bones

10 @Meth seal the coffin

Got a nerve to mention my wording your bars have sucked through every cycle
Your not even in the Category 5, just known for blowing like hurricane Michael
Swear on the Bible I’ll split that Melon, give a fuck who u run n telling
These shells under your feet have you dancing like the Day show with Ellen
I’m spelling out bullshit in your honor your fucking presence doesn’t make this site stronger
This is real Hyenas vs Coyote so do us a fucking favor retire like Chris Pronger
Your only monster during Halloween season a bitch every other time without invalid reason
the light flash in his face middle of the night,wake em outta dead sleep like “baby what u reading?”
Strongly disagreeing about ur respect here you only came because Netcees is a dump
Herbs celebrating Ye your back now your wishing you were black n retarded enough to hug President Trump

i reckon u lie? mess w the guy u got my blessin to die
im sayin if u 'shareable shit' story w me then ur intestines are mine

Ooook. Didn't like the connection a whole lot

n ur girl? ill flip the trick or treat her to killer dick - me clearly
show up at ya door n fuck ya horrify want to even tho the bitch is scary

Cool

never lonely, seven homies w me u wont last in all the heat
step into my neck of the woods and theres sticks crackin at ur feet

Ok again

no weapons g n u still cant threaten me geez ur so dead
u gon think im real cold since there will 'beanies on ur head'

Dope

wish I beat her face in days ago, i put out a hit to take ya ho
she wont look like a million bucks if the price adjuster facial bones

Cool


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Got a nerve to mention my wording your bars have sucked through every cycle
Your not even in the Category 5, just known for blowing like hurricane Michael

Predictable but ok


Swear on the Bible I’ll split that Melon, give a fuck who u run n telling
These shells under your feet have you dancing like the Day show with Ellen

See imo this needs more creativity cuz u can say have u dancin to anything.. lije if u woulda included shells under ur feet into the meta u wounds made this hot..

I’m spelling out bullshit in your honor your fucking presence doesn’t make this site stronger
This is real Hyenas vs Coyote so do us a fucking favor retire like Chris Pronger

This is better.. but coulda been way better


Your only monster during Halloween season a bitch every other time without invalid reason
the light flash in his face middle of the night,wake em outta dead sleep like “baby what u reading?”

Connection is tight but execution lacked..


Strongly disagreeing about ur respect here you only came because Netcees is a dump
Herbs celebrating Ye your back now your wishing you were black n retarded enough to hug President Trump

Ehh.. I see what ur doing but I do t like this


Good read y'all.. just felt meth was more polished n creative.. jb had great ideas that coulda been bangers ifvexecuted better.. if ur gonna use like bars then they gotta be fire.. the way u used um here took mad impact away, just felt lazy..anyway meth dropped a couple heavy joints but was consistent throughout n did enuff to get the W


Meth

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Originally Posted by Meth

i reckon u lie? mess w the guy u got my blessin to die
im sayin if u 'shareable shit' story w me then ur intestines are mine
2/3
n ur girl? ill flip the trick or treat her to killer dick - me clearly
show up at ya door n fuck ya horrify want to even tho the bitch is scary
3/3
never lonely, seven homies w me u wont last in all the heat
step into my neck of the woods and theres sticks crackin at ur feet
2/3
no weapons g n u still cant threaten me geez ur so dead
u gon think im real cold since there will 'beanies on ur head'
1/3
wish I beat her face in days ago, i put out a hit to take ya ho
she wont look like a million bucks if the price adjuster facial bones
1/3

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9/15

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Originally Posted by Joe Boston

10 @Meth seal the coffin

Got a nerve to mention my wording your bars have sucked through every cycle
Your not even in the Category 5, just known for blowing like hurricane Michael
2/3
Swear on the Bible I’ll split that Melon, give a fuck who u run n telling
These shells under your feet have you dancing like the Day show with Ellen
1/3
I’m spelling out bullshit in your honor your fucking presence doesn’t make this site stronger
This is real Hyenas vs Coyote so do us a fucking favor retire like Chris Pronger
1/3
Your only monster during Halloween season a bitch every other time without invalid reason
the light flash in his face middle of the night,wake em outta dead sleep like “baby what u reading?”
1/3
Strongly disagreeing about ur respect here you only came because Netcees is a dump
Herbs celebrating Ye your back now your wishing you were black n retarded enough to hug President Trump
1/3

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6/15

v. meth...nice to see u carry that score wording over here. the way joe executes doesnt have impact sometimes. sounds informational instead of vicious, feel me?

n ur girl? ill flip the trick or treat her to killer dick - me clearly
show up at ya door n fuck ya horrify want to even tho the bitch is scary
never lonely, seven homies w me u wont last in all the heat
step into my neck of the woods and theres sticks crackin at ur feet
no weapons g n u still cant threaten me geez ur so dead
u gon think im real cold since there will 'beanies on ur head'

vs

Swear on the Bible I’ll split that Melon, give a fuck who u run n telling
These shells under your feet have you dancing like the Day show with Ellen
Your only monster during Halloween season a bitch every other time without invalid reason
the light flash in his face middle of the night,wake em outta dead sleep like “baby what u reading?”


cool battle, meth was pretty consistent and i liked his wording most of the way. joe had a some decent shit, light flash could have been a real haymaker tho imo. u should have taken more time with that mang, that was a fire concept. as it is i got meth with a smoother more consistent verse.

vote Meth head

Ok, So I will vote, you guys decide if you want it to count or not, since i'm the new guy, maybe there are rules about that.
I score every bar, max points will be a 5.

meth:
i reckon u lie? mess w the guy u got my blessin to die
im sayin if u 'shareable shit' story w me then ur intestines are mine

2/5: I feel the flow I miss great impact but solid.

n ur girl? ill flip the trick or treat her to killer dick - me clearly
show up at ya door n fuck ya horrify want to even tho the bitch is scary

2/5 I like the punch, felt a bit forced at the end IMO.

never lonely, seven homies w me u wont last in all the heat
step into my neck of the woods and theres sticks crackin at ur feet

3/5 I like it.

no weapons g n u still cant threaten me geez ur so dead
u gon think im real cold since there will 'beanies on ur head'

3/5 I like how u finished this one.

wish I beat her face in days ago, i put out a hit to take ya ho
she wont look like a million bucks if the price adjuster facial bones

2/5 OK

Total: 12 points

Joe boston:

Got a nerve to mention my wording your bars have sucked through every cycle
Your not even in the Category 5, just known for blowing like hurricane Michael
2/5 OK

Swear on the Bible I’ll split that Melon, give a fuck who u run n telling
These shells under your feet have you dancing like the Day show with Ellen
1/5 I don't feel it

I’m spelling out bullshit in your honor your fucking presence doesn’t make this site stronger
This is real Hyenas vs Coyote so do us a fucking favor retire like Chris Pronger
2/5

Your only monster during Halloween season a bitch every other time without invalid reason
the light flash in his face middle of the night,wake em outta dead sleep like “baby what u reading?”
1/5 I don't really feel the punch at the end, had more potential.

Strongly disagreeing about ur respect here you only came because Netcees is a dump
Herbs celebrating Ye your back now your wishing you were black n retarded enough to hug President Trump
1/5 Not the best execution IMO.

7 points,

Vote: Meth

Yo homies! It's H&D - your favorite voter!

In order to make sure my votes are fair in the eyes of the great @Cheese cake Assassin, I want to remind you of my voting methodology:

For each bar, I give you a score. I break the bar down into four categories and total 'em up. That's your score.

For each category, 0 means it doesn't exist or I hate it. 1 means it is what I expect. 2 means it is above and beyond what you typically see in our league. So it is "HOT FIYA" as @Barcotic would say.

0 is a shitty bar with literally nothing in it. 4 would be the score I expect to give most "good" bars. These are bars I dig. 7 is probably one of the hottest bars I've ever seen.

ONE THING YOU SHOULD KNOW is that I WANT to give you a 7 on every bar. I want you to write dope shit and I want to read / be inspired by your dopest bars. So don't take low scores as me hating. Instead, I am trying to show you where I would like you to improve. Not because I am the rap grandmaster, but because I am forced to read all your fucking garbage. So I might as well some great rap music.

[B]IF YOU FEEL I MISSED SOMETHING, PM ME. I will update my vote.

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Originally Posted by Meth

i reckon u lie? mess w the guy u got my blessin to die
im sayin if u 'shareable shit' story w me then ur intestines are mine
1: Scheme - Solid
1: Concept - This is a really strong one. It's a super strong opener.
2: Wordplay - Two reads but it was super clean on read two
1: Execution - So I didn't love the setup and I liked the wording on the punch, but idk if intestines were mine was the right way to land this. You could improve this if you gave it more time, I'm sure.
5: Total bar score - strong opener

n ur girl? ill flip the trick or treat her to killer dick - me clearly
show up at ya door n fuck ya horrify want to even tho the bitch is scary
1: Scheme - Even with clean inner rhymes I can't give it a two with that end rhyme. Not the way I say those words, at least.
2: Concept - I had to read it twice to upgrade. Trick or treat is a 1 - it's played but still a fun concept. The other is solid.
2: Wordplay - Two reads, clean wordplay. I'm givin generous points today I guess, but Whore if I horrify is good business.
1: Execution - Again, bitch is scary doesn't seem like the right wording to kill this punch. This is a strong one but clearly not a two.
6: Total bar score - FWIW this ties Bash's best bar ever. The hate voting fuck boy

never lonely, seven homies w me u wont last in all the heat
step into my neck of the woods and theres sticks crackin at ur feet
0: Scheme - Close but not really clean end rhyme. I have to be stingy with scheme points or they run away with other categories.
1: Concept - Only because literally half the bars on this board the last three weeks have been sticks bars. You fuckers can't handle sticks and guns being synonymous.
0: Wordplay -
1: Execution - It's a fun bar. There's nothing crazy here.
2: Total bar score

no weapons g n u still cant threaten me geez ur so dead
u gon think im real cold since there will 'beanies on ur head'
0: Scheme - You're like the opposite of Cheesecake. You have clean inners but kinda wonky end rhymes.
1: Concept - This is a really weak one. I don't really enjoy this concept.
1: Wordplay - Two reads, but pretty choppy.
1: Execution - Really weak one. I didn't really enjoy this bar. Setup kinda sucked, punch was a little eh
3: Total bar score - This bar gamed the system. The number is higher than the enjoyment factor.

wish I beat her face in days ago, i put out a hit to take ya ho
she wont look like a million bucks if the price adjuster facial bones
0: Scheme - Close. It's on the edge. I have to re-assess how I give scheme points tbh.
1: Concept - Strong one. I wish you did more with it, tbh.
2: Wordplay - Weakest possible two. But I think it's more clever than a one.
1: Execution - I honestly think you left a lot on the table, here. Million bucks and that wordplay has more potential than this setup and wording on the execution, IMO.
4: Total bar score

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Originally Posted by Joe Boston

10 @Meth seal the coffin

Got a nerve to mention my wording your bars have sucked through every cycle
Your not even in the Category 5, just known for blowing like hurricane Michael
0: Scheme - Can't give you the point with that end rhyme if I'm not giving it to the other dude.
0: Concept - This is pretty weak tbh. Even the concept itself. It's just a stating the obvious punch. I tried reading five every way I could but I don't see anything super clever here.
0: Wordplay - None
1 Execution - I really didn't love this bar. There was no twist. It was just like yeah, a hurricane happened. You could say this after any hurricane, to any battler and it wasn't set up to be that enjoyable on it's own.
1: Total bar score - This bar got hit really hard by the rating system. I don't know if it's a 1 but it def isn't a great bar. I'll find some way to sneak a point back to you somewhere else in this verse.

Swear on the Bible I’ll split that Melon, give a fuck who u run n telling
These shells under your feet have you dancing like the Day show with Ellen
1: Scheme - Here is your gimme point.
0: Concept - I mean, I literally don't know Why bible and melon are Capitalized. I even googled bible, melon and ellen to see if I was missing something. I do not understand this bar and I'm saying that right to you. If it carries some really deep weight, I don't see it.
0: Wordplay -
1: Execution - Man. Fuck. I have to give you a point because of the rhyme scheme but I honestly found nothing here to enjoy.
2: Total bar score

I’m spelling out bullshit in your honor your fucking presence doesn’t make this site stronger
This is real Hyenas vs Coyote so do us a fucking favor retire like Chris Pronger
0: Scheme - Idk man.
1: Concept - Oh look. It's the obligatory sports bar. This does nothing clever except to point to a player who retired. Even hyenas v coyotes wasn't wrapped in
0: Wordplay -
1: Execution - This was so fucking lazy. I just feel really guilty giving you a 1 point bar again...
2: Total bar score

Your only monster during Halloween season a bitch every other time without invalid reason
the light flash in his face middle of the night,wake em outta dead sleep like “baby what u reading?”
0: Scheme - End rhymes were chunky. Flow sucked and the inners were choppy.
2: Concept - Dude. Baby what you reading is sick. Ok. So I get to give you good points here.
0: Wordplay -
1: Execution - You did literally the bare minimum you could, with a dope concept. Setup does nothing for the punch. The wording of the punchline sucks. This was a big bar concept executed in a small bar way
3: Total bar score

Strongly disagreeing about ur respect here you only came because Netcees is a dump
Herbs celebrating Ye your back now your wishing you were black n retarded enough to hug President Trump
0: Scheme -
0: Concept -
0: Wordplay -
0: Execution -
0: Total bar score - This was the laziest fucking bar I've ever read. Don't fucking disrespect my time like this.

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VOTE Meth. Not even close. I think the other homie is way better than this drop. But it honestly felt like he keyed the first rhymes he could think of. Didn't even take time to twist them. I was severely let down by reading the second verse in this battle.

i reckon u lie? mess w the guy u got my blessin to die
im sayin if u 'shareable shit' story w me then ur intestines are mine
Dope
n ur girl? ill flip the trick or treat her to killer dick - me clearly
show up at ya door n fuck ya horrify want to even tho the bitch is scary
This was a cool concept worded choppy and the end rhymes dont work for me here... Miss
never lonely, seven homies w me u wont last in all the heat
step into my neck of the woods and theres sticks crackin at ur feet
This was dope. I fuk wit it
no weapons g n u still cant threaten me geez ur so dead
u gon think im real cold since there will 'beanies on ur head'
lmao i fuk with this to. prolly butchered wordplay but I never seen it
wish I beat her face in days ago, i put out a hit to take ya ho
she wont look like a million bucks if the price adjuster facial bones
Dope

vs


Got a nerve to mention my wording your bars have sucked through every cycle
Your not even in the Category 5, just known for blowing like hurricane Michael
I think I've seen you and knowp use these same type of concepts every hurricane and i think twice each in the past two months. Basic punch here
Swear on the Bible I’ll split that Melon, give a fuck who u run n telling
These shells under your feet have you dancing like the Day show with Ellen
Wording is choppy but I fuk with the concept bro. Light jab
I’m spelling out bullshit in your honor your fucking presence doesn’t make this site stronger
This is real Hyenas vs Coyote so do us a fucking favor retire like Chris Pronger
this a cool concept Ur set up stretched to shit and really doesnt tie in. Also Chris Pronger never played for the Coyotes...& idk if there is a Hyenas team in any league... So this was a miss
Your only monster during Halloween season a bitch every other time without invalid reason
the light flash in his face middle of the night,wake em outta dead sleep like “baby what u reading?”
Without Invalid reason?....LMAO idk about this bro
Strongly disagreeing about ur respect here you only came because Netcees is a dump
Herbs celebrating Ye your back now your wishing you were black n retarded enough to hug President Trump
Miss... worded terrible man. I see the concept but Not executed right


Overall - Meth took this easy, Joe had a few cool concepts that missed and some that made no sense to me at all. Sorry Joe. PM me if you want to explain & ill gladly change my vote if I think it makes a difference.

V/Meth

i reckon u lie? mess w the guy u got my blessin to die
im sayin if u 'shareable shit' story w me then ur intestines are mine
Punch was a bit underwhelming.

n ur girl? ill flip the trick or treat her to killer dick - me clearly
show up at ya door n fuck ya horrify want to even tho the bitch is scary
Cool WP, but wording/execution was just all over the place here.


never lonely, seven homies w me u wont last in all the heat
step into my neck of the woods and theres sticks crackin at ur feet
Okay.

no weapons g n u still cant threaten me geez ur so dead
u gon think im real cold since there will 'beanies on ur head’
Nice.

wish I beat her face in days ago, i put out a hit to take ya ho
she wont look like a million bucks if the price adjuster facial bones
Cool.


Got a nerve to mention my wording your bars have sucked through every cycle
Your not even in the Category 5, just known for blowing like hurricane Michael
Execution softened the impact, and I wasn’t a fan of the concept.

Swear on the Bible I’ll split that Melon, give a fuck who u run n telling
These shells under your feet have you dancing like the Day show with Ellen
Well worded, smooth set up… the punch was just a let down. Also, wish you would’ve just worked it so you can end with the Ellen Show. Day show with Ellen just is clumsy.

I’m spelling out bullshit in your honor your fucking presence doesn’t make this site stronger
This is real Hyenas vs Coyote so do us a fucking favor retire like Chris Pronger
Not feeling.

Your only monster during Halloween season a bitch every other time without invalid reason
the light flash in his face middle of the night,wake em outta dead sleep like “baby what u reading?”
no.

Strongly disagreeing about ur respect here you only came because Netcees is a dump
Herbs celebrating Ye your back now your wishing you were black n retarded enough to hug President Trump
No

v/Meth. Comfortably.

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Originally Posted by Meth

i reckon u lie? mess w the guy u got my blessin to die
im sayin if u 'shareable shit' story w me then ur intestines are mine
awkward but ok
n ur girl? ill flip the trick or treat her to killer dick - me clearly
show up at ya door n fuck ya horrify want to even tho the bitch is scary
played
never lonely, seven homies w me u wont last in all the heat
step into my neck of the woods and theres sticks crackin at ur feet
cool
no weapons g n u still cant threaten me geez ur so dead
u gon think im real cold since there will 'beanies on ur head'
nah
wish I beat her face in days ago, i put out a hit to take ya ho
she wont look like a million bucks if the price adjuster facial bones
nah

1 good punch
1 jab
3 misses

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by Joe Boston

Got a nerve to mention my wording your bars have sucked through every cycle
Your not even in the Category 5, just known for blowing like hurricane Michael
corny, not feeling
Swear on the Bible I’ll split that Melon, give a fuck who u run n telling
These shells under your feet have you dancing like the Day show with Ellen
hell nah
I’m spelling out bullshit in your honor your fucking presence doesn’t make this site stronger
This is real Hyenas vs Coyote so do us a fucking favor retire like Chris Pronger
whack
Your only monster during Halloween season a bitch every other time without invalid reason
the light flash in his face middle of the night,wake em outta dead sleep like “baby what u reading?”
yooo this concept was fire, terrible execution of it tho
Strongly disagreeing about ur respect here you only came because Netcees is a dump
Herbs celebrating Ye your back now your wishing you were black n retarded enough to hug President Trump
no

no good punches
1 jab
4 misses

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v/meth

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Meth

i reckon u lie? mess w the guy u got my blessin to die
im sayin if u 'shareable shit' story w me then ur intestines are mine
Aiiight
n ur girl? ill flip the trick or treat her to killer dick - me clearly
show up at ya door n fuck ya horrify want to even tho the bitch is scary
Lol I like this
never lonely, seven homies w me u wont last in all the heat
step into my neck of the woods and theres sticks crackin at ur feet
I digg this
no weapons g n u still cant threaten me geez ur so dead
u gon think im real cold since there will 'beanies on ur head'
This was dope bro I can't even flex
wish I beat her face in days ago, i put out a hit to take ya ho
she wont look like a million bucks if the price adjuster facial bones
Nahh weaker finisher

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Beanies line was fuego my G. I dug that shit

Solid overall verse

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Originally Posted by Joe Boston

10 @Meth seal the coffin

Got a nerve to mention my wording your bars have sucked through every cycle
Your not even in the Category 5, just known for blowing like hurricane Michael
Eh seen a Hurricane bar in our 1-2 battle and this just reminded me too much of it.
Not bad but too recycled for me to like it here
Swear on the Bible I’ll split that Melon, give a fuck who u run n telling
These shells under your feet have you dancing like the Day show with Ellen
Tight, I assume she did some shit with shells? Woulda been cool too imo if u said some thing like dancing on the beach too. If it's played then my b. I havent seen something like that. I like this but I don't be watching Ellen. Maybe if it were more relatable. I like it though homie.
I’m spelling out bullshit in your honor your fucking presence doesn’t make this site stronger
This is real Hyenas vs Coyote so do us a fucking favor retire like Chris Pronger
Nahh
Your only monster during Halloween season a bitch every other time without invalid reason
the light flash in his face middle of the night,wake em outta dead sleep like “baby what u reading?”
Ohh shit this was dope
Strongly disagreeing about ur respect here you only came because Netcees is a dump
Herbs celebrating Ye your back now your wishing you were black n retarded enough to hug President Trump
Nahh man a lil too stretched

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I can't even lie, Joe had a fire line with that 'what u reading' bar

But I think Meth had the more consistent verse

Joe was solid though. Just maybe get ur point across with less words my G.

But I dug both.

Got Methadone here

Meth wins 9-0