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up, hit it up and leave a link ill return the favor asap
I couldn't really get into it, because of weird word choises and the apostrophes you used. Why not say "called" instead of "call'd" - "Sickening" instead of "sick'ning", etc? Because of that andword choices, I never could quit get deep enough into it. Sorry I couldn't give better feedback.
Man....you know this is a dope poem and its a shame no one wants to give in-depth analysis...
The wordplay was ridiculous and i'll come back and talk about that later, i just wanted to prop you and urge people to analyze the wordplay of this....i'll edit in-depth later, 1luv.
thx fresh^ and wicked the wordchoice is so its in iambic pentameter, got a piece u want me to hit up?