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5,005 posts and u still don’t know how to rap
cant fuck u aint on it u need a strap
u got a cross and the stars… so u wanna big bang jesus
had a chance to meet him but u suffered epileptic seizures
ur song which road…… well I got a suggestion
the one out of here…. hopefully no congestion
underdawgs on top…… man u shoudnt call ur wife that
on top cuz she never goes down exept when shes on the end of my gat*
mixtape/album reviewer cuz ur looking to steal
man give up ur to shit you’ll never get a deal
*type of gun
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sorry bout fucked links have this real tight block on our computer cant even acsess youtube lol
theese battles are slowhands vs scriptures and punch nasty vs mr jetson
Since I saw his first post I've felt this fag ain't equal
nobody will remember the titans name unless Denzel made a sequel
You ain't favoured, nobody cares.. can't even afford 1 hater
I know your caliburr of writing... it's a few shots short of a chamber
Claim to spit better? While as of yet you can't handle out rapping a vet
how can you be a baller... your follow thru's as accurate as ya threats
Your a inspiration to begginers, that's a fact... damn right!
only thing your punches connect to on this sites..
..all the other newbs who can't write
I feel sorry for you, so here I'll throw my 5th bar
your name is fiction, ain't no way this bitch hard
on top cuz she never goes down exept when shes on the end of my gat*
*type of gun
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Claim to spit better? While as of yet you can't handle out rapping a vet
how can you be a baller... your follow thru's as accurate as ya threats
one sided
tc, go read old champ and LLL matches to get a better idea of how to write an effective battle verse <-- that'll help a lot cus atm U need some serious elevation to be pulling any wins in mango
no hate
v/Tebo
Since I saw his first post I've felt this fag ain't equal
nobody will remember the titans name unless Denzel made a sequel
^^lmao....
Your a inspiration to begginers, that's a fact... damn right!
only thing your punches connect to on this sites..
..all the other newbs who can't
^^aight....
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nothin.
V/Tebo.
More consistent, onesided really.
Had a couple decent hitters.
Titanum, elevate bro, go read old battles.
No hate bro, get better n keep battling.
don't have to break this down . . obviously tebo took every category & everything, far one sided >
tebo wins .
Since I saw his first post I've felt this fag ain't equal
nobody will remember the titans name unless Denzel made a sequel
Your a inspiration to begginers, that's a fact... damn right!
only thing your punches connect to on this sites..
..all the other newbs who can't
vs
nothin.
tebo took this hands down
but for tc look at lll battles and start feeling this shit out it will take you while but you'll get used to it if you really want to continue writing
upping this...
nada
vs
You ain't favoured, nobody cares.. can't even afford 1 hater
I know your caliburr of writing... it's a few shots short of a chamber
-cool wording on second line, decent punch
Claim to spit better? While as of yet you can't handle out rapping a vet
how can you be a baller... your follow thru's as accurate as ya threats
-cool
Your a inspiration to begginers, that's a fact... damn right!
only thing your punches connect to on this sites..
..all the other newbs who can't write
-tiny bit stretched but ya made it write!
v/tebo for all around better verse and take puncha's suggestion tc
no hate plz rtf in sig